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The beginning is okay, but then things get messy.

Traveling through time when I don't agree with each other, it feels a bit messy

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Improve writing skills and writing ideas, write out character personality, and share more techniques with you, come to the group [⒍ニハ, 1OO⒐Зニ]

Improve writing skills and writing ideas, write out character personality, and share more techniques with you, come to the group [⒍ニハ, 1OO⒐Зニ]

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Your protagonist's name is really poisonous, I don't want to read it!

Changed name. . . . .

Pass by, pay a return visit, and leave footprints. The story structure is great!

This book is not enough for 50 orders and it goes to other planes? How funny! I thought it was okay at first, but it turned out haha~

Update it, update it. The number of words is too few and no one knows. It would be better if you write more.

Author, when did you wear it back? The Church of Holy Light has not yet flourished!

It's so messy, every plot is interrupted inexplicably and cannot be picked up at all. It's like reading a new book again. I really don't know what the author was thinking? Isn't there even an outline?😰

I really don't have any suggestions. The author of this book should just be a practitioner. The background you set for this book is a bit big and your writing skills cannot be controlled.

The writing is messy, the scene jumps a little and it's really messy.

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