Battleship Architect

I took a look at the catalog. What the hell is a battleship without a ship girl?

It seems that although the Qing Dynasty was destroyed, it seems that this servility still exists. Anyway, I couldn't bear to see the protagonist kneel down, so I had no choice but to abandon the book.

By the way, after watching it for so long, can the airship be made bigger? The size of the Zeppelin airship is fine.

I haven't read the book yet, but I just read the author's settings in the book review. I don't know what the author's thoughts are on air battleships. I personally guess it is the template for the Holy See's "Iron Maiden" class air battleship in Blood of the Holy Demon?

I don't know what to say. Please change the previous part. Really, such a good subject matter is wasted.

I said I only read one chapter, do you believe it?

Considering that there are not many active readers of this book, before I write about the first light cruiser, the first heavy cruiser and the first battleship, as long as there are five people who reply, I will definitely choose one to write about. Note that because they are all the roots of the technology tree, models that are too awesome will be rejected!

You can leave your favorite battleships in the post, and it's best to indicate all the detailed data. If appropriate, I will let them appear in the academy chapter when they are fighting each other, which can be regarded as a collection of supporting roles. As for the number of scenes, it depends on how well the battleships fit with my plot direction!

The creativity is very good. It's rare to find an author who relies on his own imagination to write a book. However, the writing style and plot conception are a bit lacking. I believe it will be improved in the future.

It seems that I am the latest. I have only seen chapter 98 now. I feel that there are so few people, and there are not many people in the comment area. The author came out to chat! !

Author, is your aircraft carrier flying in space? If it is on the sea, then this golden finger is too

I think the best cemetery for men from the sea is the sea. Is there any good land to bury these men from the sea?

Can the author post the data about the aircraft carrier in the protagonist's mind?

The setting is good. The first part is not bad. The more I look at the female mercenary group, the more I can't stop watching it. It feels like a novice.

Man, sexy and unrestrained female characters look so passionate! It would be best to have a few hundred words to describe the passionate drama!

Highlights: The writing style is relaxed and humorous, and the characters' interactions and conversations reveal very obvious personalities, making it feel a bit cute. For example, the first thing the protagonist does when he wakes up is to look at his big baby (funny). I would look at this baby first when I traveled through time. Many real-life jokes are added to the plot to make the protagonist look more interesting (like an otaku like me (funny)). All kinds of chaos are very characteristic, Shichibukai? Doesn't exist. Of course it's Han, Song, Ming, Qin and so on. Do you think it's driving a small wooden boat or using a straw boat to borrow arrows and a chain of iron ropes? Nuclear-powered submarines and aircraft carriers smiled and said nothing. Disadvantages: Interacting with readers from time to time is a cute point, but it also makes people feel a little out of touch.

Waste, simply a waste. Such excellent soldiers should be used as Spartans instead of ordinary Marines.

When will the author have a Star Destroyer Yamato version of the battleship? I look forward to it. I will send it to a child, preferably one with armed teeth, and wait until the protagonist can show off.

Etc? Chapter 314 completed? ? ?

Can't get out of bed for a few days? ? ? ? Did I miss something? Did you write one less chapter?

Currently, the lord-level sea beasts include: Neptune snake, dragon snapping turtle, octopus, and some that have not yet been named, such as the electric eel that was taken away by an eagle after only one minute of appearance, and the crab lord with four large pincers. Oh, by the way, Sword Shark Lanhua will definitely continue to grow in the future, as well as the protagonist's five ship-eating pythons. Just like choosing a person's name, I am also very confused about choosing the type of sea monster... 😐 There has been a collection of battleships before... But the effect was so bad that it made me doubt my life, so... Although I don't have any hope this time, I still want to make a speech and show off my presence. After all, my book review section is dead.

I am 300 meters away from the first generation battle line? It seems that Yamato is only 400 meters faster.

I thought it was sci-fi, then starships. . . . .

As a 40-year-old uncle, you shouldn't say it out loud. Have you forgotten all about it? It feels so awkward for you to say it now.

It's so quick to take a bath together. It's so dirty.

After reading it, it's just one chapter. How should I put it? The writing is okay, but the content is a bit naive (I don't know what word to use). In fact, it's not that I can't stand it, but I always feel that it has the artistic conception of reading a fairy tale. To put it bluntly, it is naive. Maybe the author has little life experience. PS, it is said that the author should have passed the novice stage after writing several works, but in fact he still has not, so there are more frustrations. If you want to talk about how to improve, let's talk about my family's experience. First of all, problems such as poor writing and childish content are actually not problems. The key is that you can write well. A good plot is more important than the above. Even if you don't see bad writing, you can still become a great master. For example, the author of Ghost Blowing Lamp is the best in the world (it's too long to remember). This book is very famous, but if you really read the article, if you are impatient, you can only feel what it is written. Secondly, if you know how to interact with readers, you can actually attract people. PS Most people like to join in the fun. Thirdly, updates are stable, which is especially important for ordinary writers. For example, in the early days of Xuehong, what he wrote was really not an article, it was just as fun as he could write, but there was no guarantee that he could write, and even ten thousand a day was a small amount. Then, it is best to start with cool writing. Although I am tired of reading this kind of writing too much, I have to say that this is the writing style that can best accumulate popularity. Finally, patience is the key. What the author has written before does not exceed 300,000 words. You must know that readers with a little bit of reading experience do not like to read short articles. If it is less than 500,000 words, they may just keep it. In short, if you can't write good plot design and humorous writing style, you need to have persistent writing patience. Let's just listen to what the above family has to say. PS, I saw the author laughing at himself and expressed his thoughts. PPS, I have written a lot, and my laziness is about to attack, so I can't become an author, haha! PPPS, maybe~

Author, is the 120-meter treasure ship really okay if it sails at 30 knots? Even the Dutch clippers of the Great Navigation Period would not have dared to say that they sailed so fast. It's not about whether they can drive to 30 knots. But, won't it disintegrate when driven to 30 knots? After all, the treasure ship is not a wave-piercing body, it is a flat-bottomed ship. When encountering water resistance, the bow of the boat must be raised high.

Destroyers are not used to play lightning strikes. The mission of destroyers is to escort the fleet, anti-submarine, air defense, combat assistance and peripheral security.

Big boost, author ^0＾~, the character on the cover looks a bit familiar, a bit like the male protagonist in the ice cream song video. Does the author know who he is?

This is just a personal opinion, don't comment. I always feel that the tactics written by the author are all battle line tactics of the old era, and those who are capable of manufacturing airships, torpedo boats and firearms are also capable of manufacturing carrier-based aircraft and aircraft carriers. After all, carrier-based aircraft are faster than airships and can also throw torpedoes and aerial bombs. It is better to use carrier-based aircraft to drop aerial bombs than airships to drop warships. Carrier-based aircraft are small in size and the opponent does not have effective anti-aircraft firepower. Rocket-propelled grenades have no other use than ground coverage bombing. It is better to install a few more 40mm quadruple Bofors anti-aircraft guns or 127mm twin high-level dual-purpose guns. However, the author can develop an independent type of littoral combat ship for anti-submarine, mine clearance, ground support and patrol purposes. The armed configuration requires one to four 75mm high-level and flat dual-purpose guns, three to eight 40mm anti-aircraft guns, four 20~30mm cannons, torpedo launch tubes and rocket-propelled grenade launch nests. Therefore, I hope the author can refer the technology tree to the battleship design during World War II and the tactics to reconnaissance-discovery-hide-air control-sea control.