Orion's Little Cook

The writing is confusing, the good part is inexplicable, the bad part is nonsensical, sometimes it is good and sometimes it is bad, the logic is too poor

The last two paragraphs of Chapter 139 and the first two paragraphs of Chapter 140 are repeated 😰

The title synopsis and the content of your book are completely different things. I said the book title synopsis is good, but why are the data so low... Author, if you were to write an essay, you would get zero points... Awesome!

The content is fascinating and impressive, and if the slowdown can make people feel like a trickle, with proper guidance, it can allow people to recall those wonderful moments and gradually lead to subsequent developments, making the plot appear natural and smooth, making people feel that "it should be like this" or "that's how it is" without causing an inexplicable and abrupt feeling. `ニニ5O⒍7ニ⒍O4

It's so disgusting. It can clean up your skin. I wore a virgin lady.

The title of the story does not match the content.

A novice trying the water, there is a bit too much water, come on, come on! !

Congratulations on the release. I read it in one sitting, so I know. Come on.

The article is smooth and I read it with great interest

Already collected! Encourage each other! 🤝

The content is fascinating and impressive, and if the slowdown can make people feel like a trickle, with proper guidance, it can allow people to recall those wonderful moments and gradually lead to subsequent developments, making the plot appear natural and smooth, making people feel that "it should be like this" or "that's how it is" without causing an inexplicable and abrupt feeling. `ニニ5O⒍7ニ⒍O4

It's finally time for a big update, a thousand words a day is really not enough 🥺

Shouldn't Brother Lin quickly marry Du Xia home and raise him?

The previous woman starved to death, but the author's heroine passed through and was rescued by a man. She was starved to death, and she still had time to look at men. A small woman with a sallow face and skinny muscles can still seduce an Orion man! I couldn't stand it anymore, so I just refused to leave and started fighting with the original owner's family. I'm so lucky that I wasn't beaten to death!

There are two plots before Chapter 45 where Du Xia's name is changed to Shen Yiyi! (😭This chapter talks about swallowing book reviews)

Congratulations on it being released, let's have a blast ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

Dian Niang has been cracking down recently. It may not be because the content is pornographic, but it may be blocked due to sensitive words!

Let Du Xia straighten Du Qiu and bring him back!