A Pseudo-Loli Lost in Another World

The new cover has been uploaded for review. I would like to thank the author of the cover for dyeing the black cat white, the hamster said happily 🤭

The title of the book has been changed. At the suggestion of an enthusiastic reader, it was changed from "A Waltz Between Time and Space" to "Pseudo Lolita Lost in a Different World". Although the name has been changed, the writing method remains the same. It is still the original style and original feelings, and it is still taken seriously. Hamsters will not let their friends down casually. You must continue to support Hamsters O(∩_∩)O

In order to make these chapters consistent with the subsequent stories, it is considered a small revision. Chapter 0 is directly rewritten. If you are interested, you can read it again. However, you can read chapters 1, 2, and 3 or not. Thank you for your support, Hamster 😊

I was dealing with the contract today and the update was interrupted. I'm sorry everyone, I will make up for it later. 😭😭😭😭😭

🤫Collect, gain weight and watch again

After reading the first chapter, I thought it was okay. Chapter 2 is understandable. Chapter 3, I laughed. Is this a love triangle? Ahem, let's not say whether I am right or not. First of all, there is nothing wrong with the writing style, it is very natural. Secondly, if the description of character details is sometimes too vivid, it will be counterproductive. Next, if we take the heroine as the starting point, then what should be more prominent is the heroine's uniqueness, that is, her unique charm that is different from other women. This is what a popular book should have. The above are just my suggestions, some words really cannot be said. . . Forget it, I'll stop commenting here first, I hope this work will be eye-catching. 😡

Advantages: Delicate description (I read this book from beginning to end, and the author is really good at describing it) Strong sense of immersion (the author has a good sense of immersion into the protagonist, which makes people happy) The plot is excellent (a good novel cannot be separated from the plot, and the core is well written) Suggestion: The title of the book is a bit complicated, which may lead to the loss of some readers who originally liked it. The descriptions in some places are a bit redundant, which may make readers feel a little cumbersome. Rating (individual): eight points (maximum ten points) ——If you think it's good, please give it a thumbs up.

The first sentence is 14 years later, what 14 years later, what 14 years later, what the hell