Shushan Sword Sect System

The characters' personalities are not well controlled, and are even a bit unclear. Whether they are righteous or evil is uncomfortable to watch, and the plot changes are very abrupt, but it's not a big problem. After reading so many comments, the author should have noticed that the protagonist he wrote is not very likable! I hope I can write better and better in the future

Yesterday, I raised my poison resistance to the early stage of the Great Dao, but I still can't bear it. Sure enough, there are people outside the world. I thought there was no poison in this world that I couldn't bear. I never expected that this book is extremely poisonous.

Everyone likes to say how powerful Shushan swordsmen are. To be honest, Shushan practices the authentic Taoism of Xuanmen. As for swordsmanship, it is only used to protect oneself and refine demons. When the owner of Huanzhu Tower wrote about Shushan, he said that the purple and green swords with long eyebrows are used to protect oneself and refine demons. This shows that Tao is the foundation.

The novel chapter of this book is too old. I tore it to 13 points. Don't open the novel chapter while reading. I only read three chapters and I was almost driven away by the novel chapter 😐

It was okay at first, but when the scenes got bigger it became a bit unbearable. The writing was a bit awkward.

Is there no system behind the author? When I saw the protagonist ∠∠ in the virtual world, I realized that there had been no system for a long time.

Author, does this book have a female protagonist?

The title of this novel is Shushan, but the content makes Shushan very different. The characters and plot are very different from Shushan.

Because it's been a long time, I don't know very well, but currently there should be only: Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuan Shen, Creator and Immortal King. The author did not write according to the previous definition. He adjusted the strength in almost every stage, and the small realms in each stage are also different from other books. So when reading it, many people may think that the level of force in this book is rubbish. Of course, this is also true emmmmm. But let's put it this way, people in the Creator stage can already travel through micro worlds, trade world planes, and form their own world. But why is it said to be weak? Because the place I wrote about now is the hub and transaction place for the various micro-worlds, but there is also a place above it that used to be the hub and transaction place for each small world (you can't go there currently because the entry fee is 100 million gold. As for how expensive 100 million gold is, you will understand if you read a book hhhhhhh). From this point of view, there must be higher middle worlds, high worlds, etc. Above it. It can be seen that the author has great ambitions and wants to write a grand and beautiful world. In addition, regarding the name of this book, please don't worry about the word "system". The more you go on, the less sense of existence the system has. I even forgot it several times. Many people have said to change the name, but the author just won't change it emmmm Okay, that's all. I wish you all a good reading experience. 😁

I read more than 200 chapters and found that the protagonist has changed. When his cultivation level was low, he was a good person, but when his cultivation level was high, he was unreasonable. The Destroyer Sect did not join Shushan because he did not join Shushan. I told Li Xiaoyao not to be arrogant, but I didn't know that I had become arrogant. I found out that the protagonist can destroy people's sect but others can't, haha ​​I can't stand it anymore😡😡

I can laugh at this joke about Young Middle School and Lao Sanyang for a year

Chapter 105: The natives found out that the protagonist was a time traveler. This is a poisonous point. Big poison😡😡

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Sect Leader Bai is really domineering. He will destroy other sects at the slightest disagreement. He is so majestic and majestic. I will not accompany you anymore.

This is arsenic. I will slowly taste it to see if it is arsenic or a lunatic!

The main character's name is Bai Mei, which is a poisonous point.

After reading a little bit, I feel like it has nothing to do with Shushan fart! And it doesn't feel like a fairy at all!

This novel has nothing to do with Shushan Mao. Do you think it is a novel about cultivating immortals? He also has the top manager of the human race. You can say that he is a science and technology writer! He is still cultivating immortality but his level of martial arts is not high. Saying he is a martial arts has nothing to do with it.

Speechless, it is said that it is a sect system, but in fact it is just wandering around. At first, the system completed the task to cultivate people to the third level of Qi training, and then explained that normal practice is useless and can only pass the system, and then unknowingly reaches the tenth level of Qi training. You have to make it clear whether you can only rely on the system to complete tasks, or you can practice by yourself. In Chapter 32, it is said that normal practice has no effect on the growth of cultivation, and then you still make a breakthrough? We are talking about books written in 2017. It doesn't matter if they are more cliched or the plot design is not good. At the very least, you have to explain the big logic clearly and clearly.

Keep denying, denying, denying, it seems that the protagonist has been introspecting, but the persistence of the protagonist is shattered by you.

This book was very interesting before the protagonist came to the fairy world, but it became boring after he arrived in the fairy world. There was no heroine at first, but he had a love affair, and in the end the protagonist was the reincarnation of a weapon spirit in someone else's hands. The second half of the book was completely ruined, and it was not as good as the first half!

I saw 105 comments in the book review area and went to read it. It's just a fucking thing. You kill someone and don't take revenge. You watch the reward until dawn, and then go find your enemy. He is your mother, waiting for you there, and then you know that you are a time traveler. ***Yes🐷

It doesn't look good, and the system is different from what I imagined. Since it is a sect system, it is mainly a single-player system. . . . .

Baimei walks a path, Baimei lowers his head, Baimei bends down, Baimei goes crazy. Good writing.

If you are not a fan of Shushan Swordsman, why do you name it after Shushan?

I'm asking for professional advice. I really don't dislike this work. I sincerely ask for advice from all the book friends. The author's level has improved significantly starting from a few chapters. I jumped to read it. There are really too few masters. Those who like this subject are reluctant to delete it. But to be honest, I endured the numbness of my scalp after reading twenty or thirty chapters and really couldn't stand it. Dear readers, especially old book friends, the highlights will start from which chapter. I really have to bear the pain and give up the book! ! There are really too few books of this kind. The first part of this book really made me feel uncomfortable😖

I have read this novel before, and I thought it was quite good. I thought about it by chance, and went back to read it again. After reading the first few chapters for a while, I suddenly found that the comment area was full of slander. It felt like the author had offended someone, and was being smeared by others.

Trash, the protagonist is really a trash

More than 20 of them were directly poisoned. The promised sect system turned out to be a shitty sect. I have been working alone. Good guy. I call him a good guy and just worked alone. Niubi Niubi slipped away.

Since you are cultivating immortality, you should use magic power to name the power in your body. What you use is a magic weapon, not a long sword, or a sword that is afraid of rusting. Don't you think it's low, author?