The Elder Scrolls in Marvel

The plot is confusing, there are time inversions, and it is incoherent. Most of it is narration and lacks a sense of substitution.

The plot is confusing, there are time inversions, and it is incoherent. Most of it is narration and lacks a sense of substitution.

The author's writing is so confusing. The text turns into memories, and they are so damn forced. It feels like something you don't want to do is suddenly inserted in the middle.

I've played the game, but I just can't understand what the author is writing⊙⊙

Some readers feel that some parts are unfamiliar and difficult to understand. Most of them are about the content of the Elder Scrolls, or some chapters with relatively large content. In the early stages of the novel, I will lay down a lot of foreshadowing and Easter eggs, which some sensitive readers can easily detect. Of course, it doesn't matter if they can't detect it. After all, the author may not be particularly good at writing. So I still hope that readers who feel a little incomprehensible can continue to support the author. When you read the back, maybe you will be able to understand some of the previous content, and the author will work hard. Anyway, this novel is a Marvel universe in the author's own heart, a real and interesting Marvel universe, and a wonderful world built on the basis of the Marvel universe. I hope everyone can support the author! Thanks! 😳 PS: But the author is still a salted fish who can only guarantee one update a day~

I threw up. After reading three or four chapters, the protagonist is either a primary school student or a vain imbecile. I really didn't expect that I could be scared to tears when facing Alduin, or am I just an imbecile? In the decisive battle with Alduin, I can't even use the Dragon Break I have mastered, and I haven't even let you fight in melee. You can't do it by shouting from the side? You can only cry and behave like a little girl. Taking a step back, if you really believe that you have the ability or the halo of the protagonist, what can you do if you run away at this time? Give yourself some time to develop. If you don't like magic, go to the battlefield to practice. If you don't like melee combat, go learn magic. Can you kill Alduin? The protagonist makes me sick. 😰

The writing is too confusing, and the author, why did he arrange to inherit the account from the heyday? Then the setting loses all its power, and it takes so long to write. I wonder if this pattern is what readers hate the most?

I don't feel that the main character is useful at all.

The first three chapters are toxic. I suggest the author find a gay friend to review the manuscript. Only if both gay friends find it interesting after reading it can the book be successful. Otherwise, it is just self-satisfaction. Of course, there is nothing wrong with writing and playing to cultivate sentiments.

The beginning of this is just a mess 😅 I was confused when I saw it

There are two different things between foreshadowing and pretending to be mysterious. It is very annoying to always make some vague remarks and deliberately pretend to be profound.

What the hell? What the Elder Scrolls? Sorry, I only know girly scrolls (manual funny)

If you don't have enough writing skills, don't do fancy things, you won't be able to understand.

It shouldn't be. If the protagonist can't defeat him, wouldn't it be solved by throwing a chicken over?

After reading dozens of chapters, none of the characters have a clear personality and the logic is confusing.

The protagonist is too weak. He can only play with mortals. In the later stage, he can't even do the five Obsidian generals. He knows very few spells. He only knows fireballs, ice arrows, and thunder. He can't do anything else. Is the spell system in Laogun 5 that bad? Has the author played Laogun 5?

I've read more than 20 chapters, but I don't even know what the author is writing. It's not that I don't know what he's writing. Anyway, it's a mess. The author doesn't even have a central plot. He just writes whatever comes to mind.

It's not without reason that my grades are poor. I looked confused and wrote "Gil"

It feels too confusing to understand. How many people are still playing games now? In addition to League of Legends, most people are familiar with King of Pesticide or Chicken Fighting games. What is The Elder Scrolls 5?

Author, your story line is so strange, so confusing

After reading Chapter 5, I thought it was okay and planned to continue reading, but I was completely defeated by the persuasion effect. Bye bye.

After reading Chapter 66, I felt that the protagonist was a schizophrenic patient and I couldn't stand it anymore.

It was inexplicable and strange to watch, it hurt, and I felt like there was foreshadowing in every chapter. The protagonist seemed to be schizophrenic. He traveled through time and became a game character in the ancient world. He became a different person in the Marvel Universe. After rescuing Tony, he became a different person. After Hircine came out, he became a game character again. After meeting Obadiah, it was different. Going to the cave of the Ten Commandments was different. In short, there was no sense of immersion at all. I said no. After being brought in, I felt suffocated, digging holes, and the thief felt uncomfortable. The protagonist has always been a little transparent, especially when fighting, he directly persuaded him to quit, and never tried to regain his strength. At the critical moment, the chain dropped, the little girl died, was beaten by Ethan, and the skills used by Obadiah were of no use and the energy was gone. I was on the verge of ob. I went back for revenge again and was directly pulled into the illusion. If the ability was not completely integrated with the body, I almost lost the ability by a small character. I laughed to death. If you don't have the strength in the Marvel world, you still want to roam comfortably? ?

I used too much force and wanted to write better, but ended up falling behind.

I quite like this type of book, but the plot unfolds too slowly.

Hahaha, the author has written six novels and is still a first-level loser. . So funny

Just one thought... Chaos, I think the author wanted to bury a lot of foreshadowing and finally bring it out to lead to the climax. But the author has a very poor grasp of the early rhythm. At first, I used a lot of pen and ink to describe the story before time travel, but I didn't see any good construction of the plot or character. I wrote several chapters for a special MOD, and then you told me that the protagonist entered the original version? There are also a lot of unclear descriptions inserted in the middle, which are meaningless. This paragraph has a central idea. A writer was playing Lao Jian 5 while watching the gun version of Avengers, and then an Infinity Gauntlet popped up in the computer and took the protagonist through time. Then when it comes to the plot of Lao Gun, this part is too "fast". Readers who have never played Lao Gun will feel very confused when a bunch of names are crammed into just a few chapters. This part of the protagonist's mental journey seems very confusing. Sometimes he is overwhelmed, sometimes his blood boils, sometimes he is stunned, and sometimes he seems to be having a flashback... Alduin then destroys the Infinity Gauntlet (probably to make a wish?), And this section of the turbulent flow of time and space is also chaotic. A Deadpool inexplicably jumps out in the middle, and then disappears, and the whereabouts of other scrolls behind it. It feels like this section to forcefully describe the whereabouts of the scrolls is superfluous. Then we came to the Middle Eastern plot of Iron Man 1. All the characters were in chaos, and it felt like everyone was under a halo of intelligence (the Mind Stone is so scary!), And then I couldn't watch it anymore. Orz was really confused after watching it. I hope the author can control the rhythm in the next book and not always bring in some incomprehensible modalities and onomatopoeia. In your conception, the plot naturally proceeds very smoothly, but the purpose of a novel is to let readers clearly know what story you are telling, right?

I really can't stand seeing being exiled by Odin. It's so poisonous. The purpose of going to God's Realm is for gold, and then being forcibly exiled. The protagonist accepts it happily. It's so poisonous.

The batch of writing is messy. You can write whatever you want. There are three books in total and two of them are eunuchs. The only one is still messy. Please practice more.

I didn't think carefully about the first few chapters 🤓 and scrapped them.