Wielding a Sword Across the Multiverse in Search of Freedom

Chapter 250 😃

It feels like a narrative rather than a novel, with little passion. Some places are quite messy, such as the old man in front who was burned to ashes after being penetrated by a horn. What is this guy doing?

Can you change the "two people", "two sides", etc. That appear everywhere? Where is this Chinese? Isn't it awkward to read it by yourself?

Although I haven't read it yet, I will give you a recommendation vote if I reply to every post you make.

The author's updates are great! Collect it first!!!

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Beautifully written Come on, author

Author, I would like to ask you if you can add punctuation marks to the dialogue. It is very uncomfortable to read, and it is difficult to read. There is also formatting. The dialogue can be separated into a natural paragraph. It is recommended to look at how other authors type and layout. Regardless of the writing style, I also hope that the author can consider the reader's reading experience and not write in his own way. This will discourage readers. My humble opinion, I hope the author can listen.

It feels so awkward, indescribably awkward

Hahaha, I feel like the author is a novice. If so, then the writing is passable.