A Guide to Lying Low in the Cultivation World

How can I put it this way? When I first read this book, I felt like my eyes were bright. The creative writing is also good. But after reading it, I always felt tired. I skipped several pictures in a row. The layout is a problem. Please pay attention to it. Then there is the character of the protagonist. He is as domineering as a future warrior who just came out. After waking up from a coma, he pretended to be a simple and honest young man from a noble family. After being captured, he was a cunning little fox. Then he resonated with the sharks. He was gentle on the inside and outside of the machine, and behaved like a teenager from time to time. Please sort out the main character of the protagonist, and provide more psychological descriptions and try to figure out the character's dialogue. If the protagonist's character serves the plot, it will not be interesting.

It's good to read, so I'll keep it until it reaches 1 million words 😃

In fact, Dong Ling can be "resurrected". For example, isn't the pieced-together corpse given consciousness by the protagonist? This sophon reads Dong Ling's memory, plus the remaining souls of other girls to form a virtual personality. She can be a maid for the protagonist in the future. If the author has a strong taste, then...

I've finished chasing it, I really like it. Good cheers, author~

Whenever a male video writes about women, they must be girls, with skin as white as fat, slender waists, and so on, poor straight male aesthetics

As a newcomer, I am still a little nervous about showing everyone what I have written. But no matter what the work is, it will eventually be released. To a certain extent, the author is actually a performer like those pianists and actors, but what he uses to perform is his own words, stories, and characters. But there is no difference in the feeling of "hoping to impress others with my works and hoping to be praised", which is one of the original motivations for writing. Saying "It looks good!" Is more satisfying to the author than picking up a hundred yuan. Seeing readers talking about the characters in their novels, caring about their fate, and guessing the next plot is a happiness that only parents whose children are praised by their neighbors can experience. Therefore, if you have been here, you might as well leave a few words, even just a "nice", it can make me happy on this side of the screen for a long time. Of course, collections are also needed, tickets are also needed, very necessary...

The collision of science fiction and immortality is very novel in itself. The author's character creation is good. It reminds me of Hunter. Not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters have their own values ​​and thoughts. I hope it can continue, it feels like the excitement has just begun and the plot does not drag on

Dong Ling won't have a tragic ending, right? Visually guess the rhythm of fast draw.

The works are getting more and more exciting, but unfortunately there are too many lines and inks in the front. It is estimated that many people started to pay for the chapters without seeing the exciting points at the end.

When I was reading, I didn't pay attention to how many words there were. I started with seedlings and I quickly got to the bottom of it. Just growing a few centimeters every day wasn't enough. Orz