A Guide to Lurking in the Cultivation World

How can I put it this way? When I first read this book, I felt like my eyes were bright. The creative writing is also good. But after reading it, I always felt tired. I skipped several pictures in a row. The layout is a problem. Please pay attention to it. Then there is the character of the protagonist. He is as domineering as a future warrior who just came out. After waking up from a coma, he pretended to be a simple and honest young man from a noble family. After being captured, he was a cunning little fox. Then he resonated with the sharks. He was gentle on the inside and outside of the machine, and behaved like a teenager from time to time. Please sort out the main character of the protagonist, and provide more psychological descriptions and try to figure out the character's dialogue. If the protagonist's character serves the plot, it will not be interesting.

It's good to read, so I'll keep it until it reaches 1 million words 😃

I've finished chasing it, I really like it. Good cheers, author~

In fact, Dong Ling can be "resurrected". For example, isn't the pieced-together corpse given consciousness by the protagonist? This sophon reads Dong Ling's memory, plus the remaining souls of other girls to form a virtual personality. She can be a maid for the protagonist in the future. If the author has a strong taste, then...

As a newcomer, I am still a little nervous about showing everyone what I have written. But no matter what the work is, it will eventually be released. To a certain extent, the author is actually a performer like those pianists and actors, but what he uses to perform is his own words, stories, and characters. But there is no difference in the feeling of "hoping to impress others with my works and hoping to be praised", which is one of the original motivations for writing. Saying "It looks good!" Is more satisfying to the author than picking up a hundred yuan. Seeing readers talking about the characters in their novels, caring about their fate, and guessing the next plot is a happiness that only parents whose children are praised by their neighbors can experience. Therefore, if you have been here, you might as well leave a few words, even just a "nice", it can make me happy on this side of the screen for a long time. Of course, collections are also needed, tickets are also needed, very necessary...

Whenever a male video writes about women, they must be girls, with skin as white as fat, slender waists, and so on, poor straight male aesthetics

The collision of science fiction and immortality is very novel in itself. The author's character creation is good. It reminds me of Hunter. Not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters have their own values ​​and thoughts. I hope it can continue, it feels like the excitement has just begun and the plot does not drag on

Dong Ling won't have a tragic ending, right? Visually guess the rhythm of fast draw.

The works are getting more and more exciting, but unfortunately there are too many lines and inks in the front. It is estimated that many people started to pay for the chapters without seeing the exciting points at the end.

When I was reading, I didn't pay attention to how many words there were. I started with seedlings and I quickly got to the bottom of it. Just growing a few centimeters every day wasn't enough. Orz

Seedlings with great potential, Zhanshan

Watching a few pictures secretly during my spare time is as happy as eating sweets secretly when I was a child.

Today is Chinese Valentine's Day. Is the author going to be romantic? Is there any surprise in tomorrow's new update?

Time is like pig feed, feeding the once lean Shi Xiangyuan into a mountain of meat 😭

Waiting for today's update. 🌹

Does anyone like Lingwen as much as I do?

I looked at it and thought it was a computer problem. I refreshed it several times until I directly clicked on the latest chapter and found that it was indeed free.

Whenever I want to write about Mo Fei's love, I just spend the whole day cultivating immortality, so boring

A certain post calls the author Miss Jun? Could it be. . . . . . . . . .

You must persist, I will give you food and recommendation votes.

Good skills and very attentive, good

At first, I never clicked in...

After a lot of effort, I finally saw 50 pictures. Always in a daze. I don't understand the story the author is telling you.

It looks uncomfortable. The protagonist is from the future. How can he talk like this?

Add bookshelves. . You write slowly. . Wait for fat. . .

It was fun in the early days, but now the plot has obviously slowed down.

I've just read a few chapters. This book is very creative. If it can maintain its current level, it will at least be a fairy tale. Come on.

Where is the water friends group? I can't see it on the mobile phone.

The methods of splicing the body and using eyes as pendants are really novel and tasteful.

Write some passionate scenes quickly. Hahaha