The Sixth Level of Academy City

Some small comments and suggestions: 1. I think it is definitely a failure to describe the protagonist as having such a high IQ at the beginning. Not just this novel, but every novel. Because in doing so, you give readers too high expectations for the protagonist, and it is impossible for most authors to write an image that meets this expectation. Therefore, it is easy for readers to be disappointed later. 2. I have only seen half of it, but one thing that gives me the feeling is that the protagonist has no independent opinion. She always asks the system (referring to Pachi, although she says so, but her positioning is actually just a variant of the system, so I will use the system instead in the following). This is very bad, and it seriously conflicts with the high-intelligence character design at the beginning. So I suggest the author change the interaction between the protagonist and the system. Try to let readers see the protagonist thinking and making decisions instead of asking the system when encountering problems. This can also make the protagonist's image look more stable. 3. It is recommended that the protagonist's emotions be restrained a little, which means that he should not be surprised by everything. To take the simplest example, if something goes wrong, if the protagonist's reaction is to yell "your sister, balabala", this is obviously an excessive expression of emotion. After all, in real life, none of us will yell over the smallest things. I guess the author may want to make readers feel that the protagonist is complaining about the system, so as to add some interactive plots, but the problem is that the emotion when complaining must not be that exciting. The correct style of opening the complaint should be "the male protagonist is complaining with dead eyes and calm but venomous tongue" rather than "yelling about your sister, etc." To sum up, the excessive emotional expression makes the protagonist look very frivolous. There is absolutely no stability that a person who invented artificial intelligence should have. At present, we mainly focus on these three points. The above only represents my personal views and does not mean any accusation. If you don't like it, don't spray it.

I haven't read the novel yet, but what I want to say is: "The electric light dancing between your fingers is my eternal faith. Only my electromagnetic gun will last forever!"

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After reading ten chapters, I felt a bit watered down. And what should I say? The protagonist is a bit too arbitrary! How to explain that despite knowing the world view, his own combat power is not up to the world's top tier, he just likes to exchange goods of unequal value for common materials in reality, without considering whether his combat power can ensure his own safety in the future. It sounds like he is doing whatever he wants, but in fact he is willful. Don't say that people only want to be happy throughout their lives. After that, what happens next?             ，LV5，？ If a person dies once, who would be willing to die again unless there is really no hope? You have to be more cautious when re-living your life, right? Using world coins to buy things you can get with cash? It's not that you buy things that enhance life-saving, but you at least save them and take them out when you need them! Firstly, you are not invincible, and secondly, you are not safe. Do you really think that the world will change according to your wishes? Even if you kill NO2, can you survive the Hanged Man? NO1 rejected the plan, and NO2 asked NO1 to kill him. The plan cannot be carried out. In order to implement the plan in the future, if the changes in the plan are not eliminated, they will keep you for the New Year! If you want to truly do whatever you want, then you are invincible! Otherwise, if you can't die, you can do whatever you want. There are actually people who support this way of living, which is like a white-collar worker earning 10,000 yuan a month, buying a steamed bun and spending 1,000 at the checkout as he pleases, and you still have a mortgage and car loan to pay off! Do you think this concept of consumption is arbitrary? (House loan and car loan are like gods, and this is where the pressure lies! Salary is like your strength, and it increases with your efficiency! Now, if you think this money is not spent without heartache and you have the ability, please show me) IQ does not come with willfulness, at least you have to bear the consequences! Even if it means death! Sometimes willfulness itself is accompanied by an abyss

No matter how highly developed the brain is, the IQ is still on the same level as the author. It only depends on the author's writing skills.

Author, the Demon God is very powerful. The LV6 you have here is supposed to be the Demon God, but it can only destroy the galaxy or even the pinnacle of human beings.

It's really bad. I don't know why there are so many recommendations.

From the running account, I thought the main character was Yuriko Suzuko who tricked me into it. The result is that he is a mentally retarded protagonist. He is very long-winded about what he does. He likes to show up and pretend to be a bad guy even if he is bad. He doesn't have a purpose in doing things. He does whatever the supporting characters in the original work tell him to do.

I didn't finish the first chapter. I woke up and found that I had traveled through time - calm (even I felt accustomed to it) - became stronger (5 times) - developed new abilities - programming - plug-ins were launched. I don't know why the protagonist woke up and found out why he was so calm during time travel. He developed new abilities and used new skills so naturally. There was no foreshadowing. It was inexplicable.

The author had a bad attitude due to being picked on and scolded by his readers, and he was also irritated with the boss. At this time, the company wanted to lay off employees, and the author was so angry that he fired him. This made him feel even more angry, and left him with a hangover. His wife was also disappointed with the author. The author was still hungover the next day, and his wife saw the author like this and wanted to persuade him. However, the author did not appreciate it at all. He tried to find another job but failed again and again. Finally, his wife was completely disappointed with the author and left the author forever after a quarrel. The author did not take it seriously and continued to go his own way. His life became more and more decadent every day, and it became difficult to make ends meet financially, and he finally died in depression.