Armed Disaster

Come visit me with "Zixuan Tianzun". Already collected! I have read this great article, the writing is smooth and the plot is touching! There is a strong sense of immersion! The king is mature!

As the title states, this seems to have not been introduced before.

The author. Some readers only read novels with a long number of words. I have a friend who is like this, and I am like that too. So, you know what I want to say! (The word count is too few!)

U. Qidian. Com/z8DufroP Misaka No. 19090 Was experimented in advance, and was killed by Accelerator without any suspense. Death, this is Misaka's destined fate—— Misaka has a self, repeats her own destiny in different forms of existence, and in other forms in countless dimensions, but she has the desire to change her own destiny. Can Misaka girl's wish come true? Why would she have such an opportunity? Stay tuned——

To be honest, this author's control of the plot is really too immature. It can be seen that you have thought about it before writing, but it is really too immature. The most obvious point is that you imitate Tudou Liu's writing style too much. Although there is nothing wrong with that kind of writing, you imitate it too much. It's not that it's bad to add ten or twenty words after a sentence, but you can't add them just for the sake of adding them. Sometimes a sentence only needs to be followed by an action, but you have to add three in one breath, so that the reader can imagine which action he is thinking about. Okay, let me give you a sentence. This is a sentence that I think is okay. As long as it can be described clearly, you can use any method. Don't be too restricted in the potato flow. If you are too restrictive, it will be a prison. It is really not good.