Lord of Fighting

Hello Xingchen, I read your book. Overall it's pretty good, with some flaws 🤭 First, the title of the book, The Lord of Fighting, is too narrow. It feels like it is dedicated to fighting in the ring. I suggest the author change it. The fierce battle of the protagonist can be said to be fighting against an era, similar to fighting the Holy Buddha. You can consider this aspect. Secondly, the era of the content is set during World War II in Europe. Not to mention that even if World War II is modern, if you have a sharpshooter's rate of fire, you have to carry a pile of ammunition magazines on your body, and you can't walk, and you will be killed long ago when changing bullets. It is impossible to compare with people who practice martial arts (this is true in the real world), and if the gunman is not an ordinary person but a person who practices martial arts, then martial arts practice cannot be banned by the country, so the end result is that ordinary people can only use guns to deal with ordinary people, and people who practice martial arts can only use guns. It is impossible for a sharpshooter to deal with a martial arts practitioner, or a group of people using many guns to deal with a martial arts practitioner, because according to your settings, the movement speed of a master cannot be matched by the hand speed and eye speed of a sharpshooter. The physical fitness of warriors set by the third author is too low. Fighting masters have three times the fitness of ordinary people. In fact, in the real world, the physical fitness of ace special forces can reach 2~3 times that of ordinary people, but it is impossible for them to do what you said. This is the force value and data If you really want to write about the major contradiction, refer to the fact that the protagonist in Chapter 10 can throw George into the roof. The physical fitness setting of the fighting master is at least 10 times that of ordinary people (you must know that at this time, the protagonist has not stimulated the seven-star data to show the state of 3, and has no vitality)

It is recommended that the disciple's bloodline be opened with fixed strengthening points instead of attribute points. According to what you said, the higher the attribute points, the more strengthening points. The protagonist strengthens his attributes to 20 points to open up bloodline and strengthen points for his disciples. It's a world of difference from the protagonist's 10 attribute points that are consumed to open bloodlines for disciples. 20 Attribute points is a strengthening point that is consumed to open a bloodline. If it is enough to open 10 attribute points, it can open bloodlines for a group of disciples.

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There were not many points in total, and I spent dozens of them just to say that I could hand them over to my subordinates. . . Is it stupid?

The realm of the novel is too messy, and other aspects are too twisted.

The world is chaotic and there is no plot. Although the main plot is clear, there are no branch plots, and the writing style is not controllable. It sounds pretentious, but in fact it is just treating the protagonist as a system, and it is a bit nondescript. It is like a game where you have finished the race before the referee blows the whistle, and you are said to be the champion in self-test. That's it

Why does Qidian always recommend one-star books to me?

After watching for a long time, I didn't see him killing many people, what a bear!

What a crappy book. Can you write? Unknown power level. Garbage garbage.

It's so messy, I write whatever comes to mind. It'll look pretty good if it's straightened out.

It's so painful to watch that he died from the poison

After reading three chapters, my impression of the protagonist is that he is short, ugly, mentally retarded, self-righteous, and too ambitious, without any sparkle that the protagonist should have.

I finally felt sick after reading it, it's a crappy book. Not ready to watch it

The supporting cast and supporting cast are all zz! When encountering anything, I would first make up my mind, and then get slapped in the face by the protagonist in shock... It has always been this routine.

Are all the masters made of systems?

Hello, author! Goodbye, author!

It feels like we're almost at the end, come on. I'll start a new book later, but don't be too partial to the title~~

Cancer novel... Mass-produced gun god? 200 Shots per second? I'm afraid even your boxing saints don't have this ability.

Looks awkward, slip away, poison

If you can practice martial arts, the air quality must be good. If the air quality is good, the trees will be good. If the trees are good, the soil will be good. If the soil is good, the minerals underground will be of good quality. It will definitely be a high-energy planet.

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The author's poor performance is not unreasonable. The protagonist saved the strengthening points and then used them all at once, and the result increased from 1.5 Meters to 1.8 Meters. This section put me off. How much can your body eat after growing so much in an instant?

After looking at it for a long time, I only saw the word "coward"

New book Wen Di Wu Zu welcomes everyone to come and complain

There are still guns like the sharpshooter with 20 rounds per second, but where can I find a gun like the sharpshooter with 200 rounds per second?