On the Birth of the Devil

Looking at the sky, I read the first few chapters, and the writing style is so big that I have nothing to say. This is the first time I have seen a novel written like a text, but so far, I can see two problems. The first one is that the writing style is too good and there are few vernacular words, which leads to little desire to read. I suggest you keep it simple and improve where the writing style should be. The second question is about the appearance of a big character. I haven't accepted the big setting in the first chapter, and a bunch of people came out, which confused me... I suggest you just mention this person, for example, there is XXX who came to participate, and then write in detail when his plot comes. Also, when describing characters, don't write out all the character settings in one go. Use language, plot, character reactions, etc. To slowly add in, and flesh out the character bit by bit. This way it is easier to accept. After all, most people don't have the time to sort out the characters when reading novels... There is another personal question I want to ask. I saw a self-recommendation in the novice circle. I didn't notice that this book is a female channel, and the subsequent plot will not be romantic... What I want to read is fantasy...

Capture a great god alive! The writing is so good, I love it!

Love your writing! Come on! Collected! Looking forward to updates! Seeking mutual evaluation and mutual acceptance🌹🥺🌹🥺

The writing style is nothing to say, but you use a lot of rare words, and I don't recognize many of them 😁

The writing is first-class and the literary talent is outstanding. It's great. I personally feel that the words can be more down-to-earth. After all, it is a novel. Come on, come on.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Keep the claws🤓

Thank you for your recommendation vote. I will return it to you when I have it.

If you change the introduction, it will be perfect, and the plot direction will be enriched! Good content, high on the bookshelf