
My Hakurei Sword Shaman Can't Be so Hot and Cute
我的博丽剑巫不可能辣么萌
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- Ongoing
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- 291k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 7y ago
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- Qidian
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Now thinking about No Regrets Gensokyo, I don't know how I will die if I really go in there. Not to mention vampires, just the low-level monsters wandering in the wild can kill any human at will. Moreover, Gensokyo is a paradise for monsters. Even Hakurei Miko protects Gensokyo, not humans. Look at the Tyrant of Flowers, Yonglin Bayi, Zima... None of them are flying in the air every second. Human beings should not want to go to this place. Even in the human world, it is not a safe place. Moreover, Shang Baize is an existence that can modify history (I kind of forgot about it, it seems to be a memory again). Are you sure that what you know is the truth? This place is really not suitable for humans.
Well, happy new year, and by the way, I would like to offer some incense.
How did you achieve 380,000 words in Chapter 200 (ಡωಡ)
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If you see typos, you can remind Ye Ye. After all, after coding, you will inevitably be dazzled when you check it yourself.
I apply for the right to write fan fiction. The author is great, can I create a fan fiction?
Abuse, the protagonist has a secondary disease, he is a waste, he doesn't have any golden fingers, and he still pretends to be cool. The front is like this, but the back is not clear, but the front alone is poisonous enough.
Updated!!! Hahahahahahaha... Cough cough cough (sudden death due to excessive excitement)
Finally, I have written the school memorial chapter. I am exhausted every night. I work 12 hours a day and have to write after get off work. But I'm really happy!
Come on, author, I also want to ask when will characters from Gensokyo appear?
After reading the previous part, I felt that the author's description of the characters was too deliberate. In order to highlight the protagonist's weakness, some places too much emphasis on writing scenes of abuse of the protagonist. Then write the protagonist "stand up" over and over again, which is too blunt, because it does not feel that the protagonist changes himself and works hard because his dignity is trampled on. In addition, this kind of hot-blooded behavior does not feel very suitable when applied to a protagonist who is an abandoned house, and it looks very embarrassing. I think it is better to write more about daily life in the early stage, and show the personalities of some important characters through some small daily scenes, and then try to reduce the scenes of fighting and abusing the master when the protagonist is weak. The failure of the protagonist can be shown through some small talk of the sidekick, and the psychological activities of the protagonist. This might be better. Of course, the above is just my personal understanding.
This novel of yours is really poisonous, and there is no need to say anything about it when you are just starting out as a loser. It feels like an imposed setting, and the chuunibyou is nothing more than that. You have also added to the poison of multiple time-travelers. I can tolerate all this. But by abusing the supporting characters, we give the protagonist a chance to cheat. Is it really good? The supporting character who acted as a friend was stripped naked and kissed for the sake of cheating, and that was the last step. Once the deal is changed, it will be fine. I don't want to say anything anymore.