The Flying Swans of the Three Kingdoms

Did the protagonist and the woman in the sedan meet their eyes? How's that for a match? There was at least a fleeting eye contact or brief eye contact between the two parties, right? There are all kinds of instantaneous changes in eyes and faces, right? It's not written down, and it's not enjoyable to read. The writing is too rough, the plot is not described in depth, and there is no immersive feeling. Just say that someone else is itching, but what exactly is itching for? How did you scratch it? How do you feel when you scratch? How does it feel? I didn't write it clearly, it just floated on the surface and passed by. Not enough to watch. Almost all the plots are like this, they are not enjoyable to watch, they did not write every plot carefully, and they did not take the time to write each plot thoroughly.

An invulnerable person can be beaten by Zhao Yun until his nose is bruised and his face is swollen, and he is still afraid of a few arrows. .

The author carefully studied history and carefully designed plot after plot. The author carefully designed every plot to push the story forward, but he did not carefully write every plot thoroughly. It seems that he is good at using language to express characters, but he has not written out the characters' respective language characteristics, such as the speed of speech, loud or rough voice? Is your tone arrogant or humble? Is the voice high-pitched or rough? Use harsh or generous words? Do you like to speak in a rough manner, or do you like to write in a wrinkled manner and always quote scriptures? Do you like to be direct or hesitant? Do you always spit it out quickly, or do you say half of it and half of it? Each person's personality, location and psychological characteristics determine the characteristics of each person's speech. Only the words spoken by these characters without the characteristics of their respective speaking means that there are characters but no characteristics.

At present, we can't see Wu Dalang's contribution to the male protagonist's achievements. The situation is already dead. Does the male protagonist say he will have his name? . What's next?

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It's so bad, but it has a bottom line, it's so bad

After reading the first few chapters, I thought it was okay. Regardless of whether the wind blows from southeast to northwest, I will remain unmoved. Come on!

Dragon Bone Pill is a good thing, and it's unique, but the protagonist doesn't take it seriously, and often takes it out for many people to eat, and everyone knows that such a good thing, other people don't want to eat it? Whoever the protagonist says to give it to? The protagonist doesn't have any opinions if he doesn't give them to others? Fan Xin, Zhao Yun, etc., Anyone who wants to dominate or have a good harvest to save their lives in troubled times, as long as they have brains, they will want to eat it, right? Didn't the guys swarm up and kill the protagonist? Do you really think others are fools? I'm afraid I don't even know how he died. If the author thinks that his way of writing is reasonable, he is treating us as fools.

The main character is really bad...

How to say it! After reading the first dozen chapters, I just feel that the writing is not rigorous and there are some contradictions.

It's true that the author made the protagonist a bit silly. The end of the Eastern Han Dynasty was chaotic but people with a strong sense of status were able to become officials. They were usually powerful local clans. Why did he offend the local powerful people by the way? If he didn't want to harm the little girl, he could raise it first, but he didn't say that he would marry you soon. Alas, I didn't want to read it after reading the first chapter.

This book makes me so tired

What rubbish is written at the end? It's completely rotten.

The plot has poor continuity and jumps frequently. The dance was very stiff.

This book is poisonous😰

In fact, I want to say that the protagonist's idea in the first chapter is wrong. You think she is a loli and you don't want to harm her. But have you ever thought about it, you refused. Under normal circumstances, she would still get married at the age of fourteen or fifteen. This is a tradition in ancient times. Just because you reject her, she will not get married at this age.

🌹The plot and characters are very interesting, a different Three Kingdoms👍

It would be okay if there were no stallions, but if I didn't write about those, the article would be reduced by more than half. I guess the author doesn't have that much plot to write. But when I was reading the novel and writing cc, I didn't write anything about sleeping with one today and which one will I sleep with tomorrow. I felt that the priority was wrong. I thought the main line of the article was sleeping with women. Can you become an immortal if you sleep with three thousand women?

It mainly collects the supporting roles of some local county magistrates and military school officers. You can write down the place name, personality, etc. Each sidekick will appear in about one chapter. If you use it, you will be given extra points. If you have any ideas, please leave a message and reply.

The phone doesn't look good and the content displayed is wrong. Has the author offended Qidian?

Hey, if you keep writing like this, no one will read it.

The eighth picture in the catalog is like a bottle of Hedinghong

Does Wei have territory in Hebei? Are you kidding me!

Hey, the author obviously didn't check the history of the Han Dynasty. Many things he wrote are completely irrelevant. I have read the novels for so many years and it made me stupid.

It's rotten, it's random writing, a good book is rotten.

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