Super Ancient Martial Arts Warrior System

I just read the first few chapters, what is mb's system brain? Invited a grandpa? Is it provided by the Supreme Emperor? The protagonist is enslaved by the computer like a grandson. No matter how majestic he is on the outside, he still has a lack of understanding and is still a slave. Such a person still wants to achieve success in martial arts? It's better not to give up such an arrogant golden finger. Either find a way to kill it, threaten it, and make it be more honest. By the way, why are you designing such a poisonous golden finger?

Many new books always like to explain the cause and effect before time travel at the beginning. In fact, it is unnecessary. There are many side effects, such as the rationality of the plot, readers' taste, the style of the protagonist's first appearance, etc., And a group of readers will be screened out. The most rewarding thing is to complain in all kinds of ways. Therefore, the key point is to enter the story directly at the beginning. The key point is to gradually flesh out the protagonist's image through the story. The key point is to slowly unfold a different world. All the characters and backgrounds are explained clearly at once. That is what novices can do. Why do many authors always don't understand this?

Beautifully written, thank you very much. .

Book friends who like this book can comment here. Thank you, thank you! ! !

The book is good, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a cover. I'll make one for you, free of charge.

Support the new book, come on 🌹

Everyone can think of a nice name, sect, good or evil character! ! !

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Even if you change your vest, I still know you

I hope the author writes better and better, but for the time being, old bookworms can't stand it.

It's okay to be soft, but it doesn't mean you have to act like a dog. Worse than a dog's leg

I can't stand it any longer, so I say goodbye! ! ! !

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Recently I was reading a novel about Saiyans in another world, but the author is a bit slow in updating it, saying that it needs to be collected in large quantities. If anyone likes this type, you can save it and let the author enjoy it more. The book is called "The Legend of Ace"

The author's writing is not rigorous enough. How is this summoned? How many gold coins are summoned? You didn't even write about how to move things into the storage space. It was just taken for granted and I couldn't understand it at all.

Only 30,000 people have watched it, and the reviews are so high

I just want to complain about my arm strength (｀Δ´)!

Lao Tie, let me take a walk, it's too hard to fight on the street, 5555555, my new book is more interesting than the old one, I'm drunk

By the way, Sun Jian is much stronger than Wu Anguo! Why is Wu Anguo an entry-level soldier and Sun Jian just a trash soldier? 😰