Naruto's Mangekyo

When we were fighting in the Valley of the End, we were afraid of being discovered by Zetsu. Why weren't we afraid when we were in Konoha Village? We even used the kaleidoscope.

Being able to write a novel for everyone to see is a powerful expression in itself. People like me just do it in my head and don't want to write it, because coding and conceiving the plot are really laborious. Without passion and persistence, not many people can write it down. Therefore, you, the author, are brave.

This book has also gone cold. Why are all Naruto books like this? I finally found a book that I can still read, and it went cold immediately.

The tone and wording of the dialogue are inconsistent with the character of the original characters, and the style of painting is wrong.

It is certainly a good method to write down too many confusing things and then gradually dig and explore them. Welcome to the group⒍з⒍ハ1ззハ⒍

No wonder the sentences are not divided into paragraphs, making it difficult for people to watch them normally.

In fact, the author is quite good and wrote down his thoughts. It can be seen from the article that the author likes the Mangekyō Sharingan and Naruto like me, and I also prefer this theme. However, there are a lot of bugs in the article. For example, Itachi generally will not give his husband's kaleidoscope to others. The biggest bug is that people who are not of the Uchiha clan's blood will put a huge burden on themselves if they have the Sharingan. Moreover, Kyuubi promised to help the protagonist before, but it was of no use on the night of genocide. This made me have countless black questions in my heart. That's probably it. The author's writing style needs to be improved, and I haven't finished reading it yet. Finally, I would like to add that it is not easy for every author. I hope the author will not give up. I will always support you. Come on!