A Story About a Ship Girl from Another World

Suddenly I feel that the protagonist is becoming more and more different from the setting in the first chapter. The author said that he doesn't like invincible stories, but didn't you find that having an invincible admiral is another kind of invincibility? Moreover, the ship girls in the Oran garrison are becoming less and less like soldiers. Especially when compared with the performance of the American ship girls in the previous battle, the ship girls in Oran are more like playing than fighting. It can even be said that they are becoming less and less like soldiers fighting. Also, I don't know what kind of character the author has set for the protagonist, but I feel that the protagonist's subsequent behavior is becoming more and more like the Kanji novels that the author said he didn't like. In the beginning, he was still very disciplined and had clear rewards and punishments. But as time went on, he became more and more unprincipled, from Tianlong repeatedly breaking into the office at will, even rolling around and disrupting the work, to the kitchen goddess kicking the door in front of everyone. What I saw was no longer an admiral, but a protagonist of an invincible story about a ship girl who allowed his subordinates to die and then relied on his super strength to wipe his ass. Although Tianlong and the Kitchen Goddess have good intentions, rules are rules, and will there be any rules in Oran later? The admiral started talking about rewards and punishments verbally in the middle, then forgot about them later, and finally didn't even bother to talk about it and just let the ship girl do it. Is this still the admiral set in the opening chapter? The admiral also kept saying that he wanted to help the ship girls become stronger and let them know what war is, but from beginning to end, except for the first few chapters, I didn't feel like he had done this at all. It's nothing more than the admiral's modernization and equipment advantages, or he said hello to the deep sea in advance, which is worse than a drill. More often than not, the ship girl was injured even to a hair, and the admiral immediately took action to deal with it. Anyway, I don't think the ship girl has any understanding or mental preparation for war besides improving her level and strength. Compared to the ship girls in American War, they are nothing short of heaven and earth. Generally speaking, I feel that the author said he wanted to write a different Kanji novel, but in my opinion it is getting closer and closer to the normal Kanji novels. I feel that even if the author wants to create a character who is like spring to his friends and a cold winter to his enemies, the protagonist has a background as a high-level politician and military officer, giving both kindness and power, and clear rewards and punishments, which are essential qualities that cannot be changed. It's one thing to be nice and amiable to a ship girl, but it's another thing to emphasize the ship girl's psychological quality, combat ability and sense of discipline. You can refer to real-life soldiers. You can play it in normal times, but there are limits. Maybe I can't understand the author's intention, but I really feel that the protagonist's personality is more and more similar to those of the bad ship girl protagonists. He is doting on his own ship girl, and he is very proud of other ship girls. At most, he has a cold and ruthless attitude towards the enemy unlike those of the virgin protagonists. Disappearance puts his ship girl in a fantasyland created by herself, where she fights in small ways, and even if she breaks her skin, it's a war. Um →_→, I said too much, I felt a little emotional when I read it, I hope the author doesn't mind. But I also hope that the author will consider the shaping of the protagonist's character. The last 5 months of tickets are given. I hope that the more I write, the better. After all, it is difficult to find a book that suits your appetite 😁😁

I don't know much about the character setting of Admiral Xuesong, so the following are my guesses. Please forgive me if there are any mistakes. At first, the Admiral gave people the impression of an absolute militarism similar to that of an "iron-blooded prime minister." For him, "obeying orders" is the first necessary condition, so people may think that he is cruel and cold-blooded. Later, after the governor's house gradually got on track and the number of ship girls increased, he began to slowly change and was no longer so unkind. He also had the mentality of "holding his ship girls in his mouth for fear of them melting, holding them in his hands for fear of losing them." Some people may think that this is a failure to write, but I don't think that when the belief in a person's heart is broken, he will often become particularly fragile. To give the simplest example, "Women always have a special feeling for their first partner." This change may be subtle, just like in the article Like Xuesong, after experiencing the warmth of home, he attaches great importance to it like a "drug addict" (which may not sound good). He does not allow anyone to destroy everything. Instead, he means that he is almost obedient to his family (ship mother), closely monitors possible threats and even violently kills them. But as time goes by, he himself will realize this matter and enter an extremely contradictory state, that is, the collision of his own "rationality" and "emotion", which will lead to his strong dissatisfaction with Yamato. It can only be said that Yamato is unlucky. First of all, the admiral He was very irritated by his own conflicts and needed to vent. Secondly, Yamato was recently transformed from the deep sea by the admiral. Finally, there was pressure from all parties (mainly himself and the consciousness of the world), and Yamato himself accidentally ran into the muzzle of a gun. What a tragedy? Although I don't know how the author set up the background of the character Xuesong, but judging from his performance in the article, I think he should have been alone (or unsociable?) Before he came to this world. Of course, it is also possible that he is the only one left in his world, so he may not realize it, but he actually longs for family and affection, and he should be at the top of the food chain in his own world (otherwise, how could he be so domineering!). This kind of person's psychology can be said to be the strongest or the weakest. As long as he seizes the loopholes, anyone can make his heart collapse. After all, "how lonely it is to be invincible." Okay, that's what I want to say. If you don't like it, don't spray it (if you really want to spray it, please don't go too far. Be careful, I will fight the demon spirit 🪖)

I think the author has written very well. Whether it is humans, the deep sea, or ship girls, they are all vividly described. In the author's writing, they (they) seem to have come alive. Each character has its own characteristics and personality. Unlike other novels that always revolve around one protagonist, no matter what they do, they are all to bring out the characteristics of the protagonist. Moreover, the author has a good grasp of the various psychological activities of the three (four?) Forces, and the plot is closely linked step by step, and he does not favor one against another when writing about daily life. He describes the ship girls and the deep sea so vividly that people can't help but forget their identities and treat them as ordinary young girls. In my opinion, this novel is different from other novels. What the author should do is to perfect it according to his own original intention, rather than being a puppet on strings and letting others manipulate him. You can listen to other people's suggestions but you cannot have your own thinking. After all, this is your own novel!

I treated this girl like a sweetheart, and finally treated the ship girl like a slave. After three times of questioning, I disintegrated. Haha, bye.

I was poisoned by the introduction. Ship girls are not weapons, but they are soldiers.

To read this book, you need to do 3 steps. The first is to give up your brain, the second is to imagine that the whole world owes me, and the third is to be the best in the world and kill everyone in the world if you don't obey me. Anyway, I was persuaded to quit by the pig's feet in the first chapter.

Let me give you my thoughts. The author said that other people treat this matter differently from their own shipgirls. Is there a problem? Others are others. I want to say the fact that the protagonist has no obligation to care about others. Also, in the story of Yamato's battle, as a commander, he doesn't even know how to know people and how to assign them? In the past, when my own shipgirl went into battle, she always paid attention to wiping her own shipgirl's butt and finishing it off. But when Yamato came here, she just ignored him. As a result, Yamato made a mistake and got angry and cursed. . . Hehe, I said that since the protagonist doesn't want Yamato so much, he should just kill him from the beginning, which will save him so many things later. If the protagonist hadn't wiped the butt of his own ship girl, I would have understood the protagonist's "ruthless military law". Now? Ha, for the first time, I felt that the protagonist was extremely hypocritical! He keeps saying that he treats the ship girl as a human being, but deep down in his heart, he still treats the ship girl as a weapon. Just because Yamato is Fukami, don't you think of her as a ship girl? Oh, no one used a knife to force you to turn Yamato into a ship girl, right? Tsk, tsk, tsk, you are going to send your own ship girl to the court just because of the losses of other ship girls? And this lion is attacking the protagonist and wants to erase the protagonist's achievements? Wow! Awesome! This is the first time I know that the protagonist is such a virgin.

I'm sorry, the author, eunuch, you are not a qualified admiral. You have written such a sterile thing. Is there something wrong with the protagonist's brain? You can't even read the three golden chapters. One is more poisonous than the other

Finally found an article that says "battleship girl" instead of prostitution girl

Sorry, sorry, sorry! Say important things three times. When I was typing today, I checked the ship girl illustrated book and found out that I had confused the middle Qi Ji and the central Qi Ji! In the first volume, the middle Qi Ji should be the central Qi Ji, but the chapters are blocked and there are too many chapters involved, so the name cannot be changed at all. So I'm sorry, admirals, I'm extremely sorry! The name of Zhong Qi Ji will continue to be used in this book, but everyone regards her as Zhong Xi Ji in the first volume. Her image and the degraded ship girl "Iowa" are all written according to Zhong Xi Ji. Then in the fourth volume, the image of Zhong Qi Ji described is the real image of Zhong Qi Ji. I'm really sorry if it has caused you any inconvenience in reading and caused confusion to you! 😭😭😭

😅I don't want to see it at all~

I really like this kind of world view. After all, this is the war period, and many ship girl novels are written like visiting an amusement park, but I still think the three dissolutions of doubts at the beginning are too much!

I skipped the finale when I reached 59%, because as an old bookworm, I could guess the ending wherever I looked. This book is an excellent work in the same genre. Although the various character settings are vague and changeable, it is refreshing in the early stage. However, in the later stage, it is basically a routine. You can basically guess the author's intention, and there is no passion for people to continue reading. But compared to other similar articles, it stands out.

I have read dozens of books about Kan-girl, and this is the only one that dismantles Kan-girl. Hehe

After reading a few chapters, I still can't figure out the origin of the protagonist, Goldfinger. I only know a name

Ah, finished reading. Although I didn't watch it if I subscribed later. But from the beginning to the end, I felt like I couldn't think about it. It feels a little complicated later. Maybe it's because I'm not very good at thinking. Feeling good about this book.

Lao Tie, Chapter 1 was eaten by Dian Niang

Can Shen Nong tell me how it works? What kind of story is the plot probably about?

Have strong strength but no strong mind

I'm just here to make soy sauce. See it and leave. Hello everyone.

Different admirals, different ship girls, different deep seas. What the author wants to express is not the emotions of you and me, but faith, mission and loyalty. Iowa faces his former comrades and current enemies, the Aircraft Carrier Ghost and the battleship Water Ghost. The choice of emotion and mission, Iowa's helplessness and heartache are the most exciting parts of this chapter of the novel. The author's description of the character's heart is very good.

June 14, 2018 The main text of "The Story of a Ship Girl in Another World" is completed at 1.07 Million words. Thank you all for your support and criticism! 🤭🤭 PS: There may be extras😜😜

Only Ship B was not written. Commander has never played Ship R and Ship C, so I can only read it in confusion.

Why can't I see the ratings after the update?

What the hell is League of Legends? Another novel?

After reading Chapter 5, I was a little surprised why the ship girl didn't lift the table?

I haven't posted in a long time. Firstly, I'm lazy. Secondly, I'm not good at expressing my feelings in posts. I always feel like I can't control my emotions. However, when I opened Writer's Assistant this morning, I found another comment saying "Goodbye". I was so moved that I had no choice but to post this post. First of all, what I want to say is that I respect the opinions of every book friend, because I think I can learn a lot from them. The opinions of some book friends have indeed given me a lot of inspiration. And I think everyone has their own opinions, so I have never deleted any posts (except advertisements). Second, although I respect book friends' posts, it does not mean that I have no temper. I saw that post today, "I treat the shipgirl as my sweetheart, but you treat the shipgirl as your slave." I couldn't bear it anymore. I know that my ability to persuade people to quit in the previous chapters is very strong, but this statement is really biased. I would like to ask, have you read the subsequent chapters? When did I treat the ship girl like a slave? Without giving away any spoilers, in the entire novel, not a single ship girl dies from disintegration; the admiral's attitude has also changed, and in the end he is a person who cares about his ship girls. Third, regarding the early issues, many people said that I had a strong ability to persuade people to quit in the first few chapters, and I fully admit it. When I decided to write this book, I was in a very excited state physically and mentally, so that some plot points were overdone. For example, I just wanted to portray a strict admiral, but in the end, the admiral seemed to be somewhat indifferent to the lives of others. These are my problems, but I'm not going to change them. Let's keep the dark history and keep me alert. I have to pay attention to it when I draw it in the future. Fourth, the purpose of my post this time is not to defend myself, I admit my mistakes and failures. The purpose of this post is very simple, that is, to prevent new book friends from having some prejudice against the book based on the opinions of the discussion group, and to prevent my novel from being labeled as "poisonous" in vain. But to put it bluntly, it's just to keep book friends watching. Although I believe that fate brings us thousands of miles to meet each other, and I believe that book friends who find this book are destined to be together, and those who can read it are even more destined, but we cannot rely solely on fate, and we still need some ways to retain book friends. Fifth, fifth... I can't think of it, maybe I'll talk about it later. Oh, by the way, I want to add that I plan to finish this book soon, but when I am coding, I can add more here and describe it more specifically there. I can't tell when it will be finished, but I hope everyone will support it.