God-Level Causal System

This book is really uncomfortable to read. It writes about things that are systematic but not systematic. Moreover, the system resources come from unclear sources. Furthermore, the realm is too outrageous. In addition, it takes several days to fully recover the Qi after practicing. It is so unreasonable that I can't stand it.

The author's writing style is good, but I feel that the whole text is too depressing, and there is no sense of system flow. Staying in other worlds for more than ten or twenty years is not as good as other supporting characters practicing for half a year. Although I feel that the author is trying not to overwhelm the writing and not let the plot and force value rise too fast, but this way of writing makes people feel that the protagonist is too useless. It's good for the author to have his own ideas, but since it is a cool novel, it must have enough cool points. Not all protagonists of cool novels are Long Aotian, but at least the protagonist must have his own characteristics. Not to mention always invincible, at least he must be the strongest one at every stage. Moreover, the protagonist of this book seems to have been toyed with in the middle of the applause. As the writing goes on, it becomes more and more unbearable. The protagonist's character is also a bit repressed and unable to let go. He does not have the mentality of a strong man. Personal opinion: Don't blame the author.

The protagonist is in the world of Xianxia, ​​and knowing everything at a glance is a mid-to-high-end basic skill. Just looking at the atmosphere of the main world, it looks like a pure world of martial arts, but it is more than that, and there is no Xianxia flavor at all.

And the author, you said that Emperor Dou is the same as the Great Emperor? I kind of laughed! The Great Emperor can cut down the stars, and the Red Dust Immortal can enter the river of time! Can Dou Di cut off the stars? The Great Lord of Heaven reverses the course of time? Just because Dou Emperor can smash hundreds of thousands of miles of earth?

How can he compare to Zhe Tian by fighting against that garbage cultivation system that feeds energy? 🤫Zhetian's cultivation system was left behind by Emperor Huangtian. What state was Emperor Huangtian in? Immortal Emperor! That is the Daluo Jinxian (the real Daluo Jinxian, not the Daluo Jinxian that is prevalent in various prehistoric novels). The master realm in the Great Master can support an immortal king to death, even worse than 🤫

It feels like the protagonist's experience in so many worlds has been in vain. He is just like an ordinary person without the mentality and will of a strong man.

Nosy, indecisive, benevolent as a woman, add to dogs

Yes, for now, the author, Zhu Xian, has written something that has not been written before. Keep it up. I hope you won't see another A Chinese Story and White Snake in the future. 😐 That's too vomiting. Come on, you cold-blooded Xiaopu 😁

So the heroine just picks it up and takes it all, so the opportunity is not enough.

Why do I feel like the main character is a loser! The mentality of the protagonist is really not suitable for this kind of spiritual world, and the city is pretty much the same.

After reading the last chapter, I finally confirmed my thoughts. It turns out that "junior sister Chen Li" is the protagonist! ! ! …

I just read Chapter 68, but I don't understand what the protagonist wants to do? On the one hand, he wants to be more open-minded; on the other hand, he wants to hide his cheating. Knowing this, you can still break through your mental barriers. Isn't this a joke? This is the inner demon. I think the protagonist has taken the wrong path, or this path is not reasonable at all! The protagonist has a big secret, so he shouldn't take the road of openness. This will only create inner demons in himself. Since the protagonist understands that relying on plug-ins to travel through the heavens and continue to become stronger, it can be said that everything is smooth sailing. Then the xinxing only needs to cater to this path, is the rest important? I just don't understand, is the word "magnanimous" so important? Does it help the protagonist? The so-called original intention is to know what you should do and then do it. This is the original intention! Like the protagonist now, who thinks he should be more open-minded, but has to be timid under the pressure of the big secret, this is the inner demon!

The introduction persuades people to quit, and it seems to be an abuse of the owner. I suggest the author change it. I passed by it many times and didn't dare to click in to take a look.

I instantly realized that this was a normal fantasy novel. Stop watching

I feel that the power system is a bit broken. According to your setting, the combat power of Xiantai is the emperor who covers the sky, but the Dou Emperor who fights to break the sky is also Xiantai, but I feel that the combat power of Dou Emperor is at most a saint or great sage who covers the sky.

Maybe the author has his own ideas, but the writing style is not enough, and the expression is hard to watch.

Ob escort agency, shunfeng express, the mission must be achieved

I feel like the author has downplayed Wang Chao's combat effectiveness, especially his standing ability in the later stages. Wow.

Isn't it a causal system? How much does it change the cause and effect of the plot?😰😰

The world of the protagonist is so rubbish. The person with the highest level is probably not a mortar expert.

Diaosi

The plot of the main world is pretty good, and some of the time-travel worlds are also okay, but it's a pity that the arrangement of the emotional line is too boring. Also, there seems to be a big gap between the development of the later stage and the ending and the digging of the mystery created in the early and middle stages, which doesn't feel very good to me.

Your question is too suspicious

It's just that the exchange value in the novel must be described as cause and effect. Do you know what cause and effect is?

What about the system you agreed on? Why did it become a fantasy? Bad review, deleted

Let's evaluate it. The author's writing style is okay, and he writes his own things, and his control of the plot is okay. The first half is still readable because the plot direction is unclear, and the copy is a novel that I like. However, in the second half of the plot, although the protagonist's cultivation level is high, it does not feel attractive. It prematurely shows that the protagonist's system has been manipulated. The whole plot itself is not very satisfying. It is solely supported by the writing. The world view is large, but it is not expressed.

What about the Krypton Gold Forum? Have you deleted it?