Lord of the Sky

The writing is not bad, but the characters are too few and too monotonous. The story is not rich without characters. For example, whether the patriarch is shaped into one, Kong Yiji, or Ah Q, it would be fine. A wizard, a superstitious old lady, or a cunning, simple old farmer. It takes at least four or five main characters to remember the plot. My friend deserves congratulations for opening a book. I have been reading for many years and can give you some suggestions. ?????

Ang, that's good. Keep up the good work. Support you. 🙂

Hahaha, I also saw you posting an advertisement under my book. I am also an author and I know that it is not appropriate to write a book. Please give me some suggestions. The first one is that I read every advertisement in my book review section carefully. I think your advertisement is very well written. You can definitely use the essence of that advertisement in your book introduction, and the effect will be good. The second thing is that the front end of the plot shown in your advertisement is actually quite interesting. It would be better to write it directly as the first chapter. Referring to the plot at the beginning of the movie Maze Runner, a man is inexplicably sent to a place, and then he is told various rules by the people there. This suspenseful beginning is actually very good. The third thing is... It's better to change the title of the book... It's better to call it "Rule Game" or something...

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Ever since the protagonist became a slave, I couldn't stand it anymore.

I support you. The setting of this book is very good. I read it accidentally and couldn't put it down.

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At first glance, since the space has not developed into the Kingdom of God and is a place of enlightenment, and the protagonist is taking a natural route, then he will grow into the protagonist of the world and become the world tree, right? The Creator God should be real. Is it possible that the Divine Punishment has already fallen or is no longer on the island, and some mechanism left behind has been functioning. After all, it seems that his goal is to keep the tribe a primitive society. I feel like this island is a breeding farm, raising various tribal spirits with different clerical directions and then harvesting them. As for why the God of Creation prevented the tribe from developing, it may be because once the number of tribesmen increases, the power of faith will also increase, allowing the totem spirit to become stronger and truly start to have its own consciousness, and it will take a long time for the God of Creation to come. In this way, it is easy for the powerful totem spirit to lead its tribe to unify the entire island and then rebel. Or in fact, this is the territory of an anti-god organization. They create totem spirits just to study gods and beliefs, and then overthrow the gods. As for why they don't let the tribes upgrade, it is also for experimental effects.

Strong support, strong support, such a beautiful book, even if I am the king of diving for ten thousand years, I will come out to support you no matter what.

By the way... Which country did the protagonist come from before traveling through time? Anti-metal nature, that's what Chang Xiong teaches, right? The nature that Chinese people understand should be the nature that follows Taoism and nature, right? Also, there is something wrong with the protagonist's mentality, which is too biased toward the indigenous. With supernatural powers and time travel, he is still stealing divine power. Coupled with the Chinese people's dedication to spiritual detachment, human beings have developed the arrogance of being the protagonists of the world for thousands of years. Modern people observe, summarize, define, and develop a transcendent perspective on all phenomena in the world through science. If all these things are added up, then there is no problem at all, right? God was too far away from him now. Extraordinary deeds create extraordinary people. Vice versa. Ordinary people are already drifting now, and they will only restrain themselves after suffering a big loss. The protagonist is not too arrogant, it can only be said that he was originally extraordinary, but now the image of the protagonist is just a seemingly cautious ordinary person, which is a bit exaggerated. Moreover, the protagonist loses the temperament of a time traveler. It looks more and more like the natives have digested the travelers.

About advertising First say sorry! First of all, I am very grateful to my friends for their support. Thank you for being able to collect it and leave a message. Thank you very much? It is necessary to explain that the person who posted the advertisement is indeed a good friend of mine. We all know the account number and password, because in the past, we just read books and played games, which was nothing. A few days ago he said he found a way for me to fly, and then... So, I'm extremely sorry for disturbing everyone, and I accept all the consequences. Do you think it's me? My friend meant well, so I can't really fall out over this. Besides, I was secretly happy to see the collection increase, so I didn't deny it, so I didn't stop it later, and I didn't want to stop it. I really wrote this book very seriously. After reading books for more than ten years, I thought about writing a book. I think a few friends would read it, but it is easy to read but difficult to write. It is really too difficult. I am lazy and in the late stage of cancer, and my writing is so bad that almost no one reads it. I have given up on a test recommendation, but it has no effect. I have given up, so I will just write it like this and try my best to finish the story. That's all, thank you all, and I'm sorry if it has caused any trouble to you, and please understand the plight of a stand-alone author!

... What the hell is this chapter about? I! Psalms, New Prayers. Author, come out and I promise not to beat you to death! I won't talk about it without first brushing off the doctrinal bug. The prayer was so long that those primitive people had to go to great lengths to remember it without even saying it. These are all trade-offs and can be explained by considerations. What the hell are the different races and beliefs in your song? No! Same! Letter! Look up!

... Space, totem absorption, this is the absorption of primitive spirituality. After completing various elements to achieve balance, this space will become a small world. This is the taste of the Kingdom of God. Civilization was crucified in the Bronze Age? The combined totem god has no divine name. ... Could this island be used as a back-up for the god whose clergy expanded a wide range of things to return after his fall? ... Or is it used to merge with each other through the totem beliefs of the tribal era, so as to gain access to the almighty priesthood? Zhongzhi, I can smell the boss. Of course, ... It may also be a geographical (world) problem. When iron reaches a certain purity, it will cause negative energy to accumulate, leading to the activation of corpses or something. However, since the protagonist did not expect it, either the protagonist does not have this knowledge in his magic inheritance. Either due to geographical (world) reasons, the phenomenon is different. Regardless of that, the protagonist's magic system is broken. It's just not due to geographical reasons, the foundation of the magic system is fine. In this primitive society, developing a knowledge system is a nightmare task, depending on the protagonist... Well, it seems that the protagonist's path as a leader is unshakable, and the development route must be tilted towards gambling-style development in order to save time. This kind of field is quite difficult!

Chongzhi finally understood what the awkward feeling in the book was about. Damn, you can't consider the character's personality and experience as independent of each other! Experience and personality influence each other! Even if the protagonist was so useless that he had superpowers and was still a loser before time travel, things will definitely change now! The formation of personality comes from people's need to make decisions. What kind of decision-making needs determines what kind of personality a person has. After time travel, in such a precarious situation, where gods may be watching from above, a loser must have low self-esteem about his own "temperament", because he understands that he can't handle this situation at all! In this case, a modern person who has experienced the baptism of the information explosion, as long as he is not hopelessly useless, will definitely have the first reaction of "what if *** (someone capable) would do." In our era, under the influence of so many real and virtual great figures, the gap between a person and capable people or even great people is no longer a matter of ability or knowledge. The only difference is the will. After understanding the correct path, whether you can overcome all difficulties and implement it to the end. The protagonist is now smelting iron. This is definitely correct. Even if he hesitates, even if he is afraid, even if he has to face God, he must do it. This is good! He can hesitate, but in the end he must be firm. A book that describes how ordinary people go to greatness can be used to make a god in one book. A book that describes how ordinary people become gods by chance is completely nonsense! To put it bluntly, if you put so much effort into writing, you might be beaten to death if you write a simple essay?