Queen Qingwan

It is very comfortable to read, and the writing is smooth and natural without going into details. I like yours better than many articles that abuse rhetoric. You must persist! 😡

The author's writing style is exquisite, the description details are in place, the plot is compact and colorful, come on, you will be a great master in the future. 😜😁

First of all, Qingwan should have been a relatively kind girl in modern times. People regarded her as a love rival and wanted her to live or die. Then they waved her over and she really did. She seems to be a girl who is not defensive about others. So she traveled through the body of a princess who had lost her country. She was originally homeless and had no one to rely on. Her grandmother, King Wei, the Queen Mother, who was supposed to be able to rely on, was the aunt of her rival, Queen Wei. The only uncle she could rely on, King Wei, was robbed of power by the Queen Mother and the Queen's family, and could not protect her. What a poor kid. Therefore, in the first twenty chapters, Qingwan lived relatively like a little sheep and was bullied all the time. Fortunately, it seems that the little sheep will fight hard in the future. Finally we saw the glimmer of hope. The touching part of the first twenty chapters lies in the bravery and loyalty of several guards. The part about hunting the tiger was really well written. The process of escape was both disturbing and heroic to watch. The saddest thing about the first twenty chapters is the disparity in power between the enemy and ourselves. On the one hand, there is the subjugated princess who is alone and dependent on others. She has no ability to protect herself or resist except herself. From being deprived of material resources, to being manipulated in her marriage, in the end, she was framed for murdering the prince, and was imprisoned as a spy of the Qi State. Two words: How miserable! On the other hand, there is a clan of queens who are extremely powerful, arrogant and domineering, and fearless in killing Buddhas when they encounter them. From refusing to give up a new dress, to snatching the guards, to interfering in proposing a marriage, and finally trying to frame the heroine as a spy. It's also two words: so dark! If I'm not mistaken, there should actually be a small force in the Palace of Wei, that is, Zipei and her daughter, who live under the shadow of the queen family but are always calculating, struggling to gain a foothold but are always able to make cold arrows in order to get their wishes. Although their methods are not bright, they are difficult to guard against. Fortunately, the heroine doesn't seem stupid. At least she can see Zipei's little plan. It seems that she will be very happy when she gets slapped in the face later. I guess I have just arrived in a place and need to adapt to the environment. All in all, I read twenty chapters in one go and found the story interesting and emotionally touching. Let me talk about my suggestion again: if it can be divided into paragraphs, please divide it into more paragraphs, it will look easier; then some dialogues seem to be dragging and unnecessary. Thank you to the author Mo Jiuniang. The story is very interesting. I will continue to pay attention to it. Thank you.

Mo Mo's writing style is good, the story is clear and the characters are distinct. It is a good article. Queen Qingwan is supposed to tell the story of how the heroine Qingwan grew from a weak and helpless princess of a subjugated country to a generation of empress of the Ming Dynasty. Mo Mo has set up foreshadowing in many places in the article, which is very good. For example, the tiger-fighting plot at the beginning of the chapter is described in great detail and was the first cause of conflict after Wen Qingwan entered the palace. The heroine is a kind-hearted woman. She was originally weak and tolerant, but she was able to stand up for the guards who saved her life. Because she was wrongly imprisoned, the heroine had the consciousness of resistance. It can also be seen from the marriage incident later in the article that she is a smart woman. The article also mentioned that she likes to read books and has read a wide range of books, which should be useful in the future. The story has just begun. The heroine has just learned to resist and looks forward to her future growth. I hope that even if you grow from a little sheep to a big bad wolf in the future, you will not forget the kindness at the beginning. Zijin is a pity. Although she is coquettish and may be a bit vicious in her behavior, she makes people feel that she is a true-hearted woman with no scheming, but she has always been spoiled. In the end, the Ye family was defeated and Zi Jin married and got married. I felt that she had grown up a little. Hope she can have a happy ending too. Zipei's character is the most annoying. She looks elegant and generous on the outside, but in private she is very scheming. She even doesn't treat her own mother well. This villain is very successfully portrayed. Is Ye Zhen the male protagonist? I feel like a gentle and affectionate person. In the end, I saw him being imprisoned. I wonder if the heroine will work hard to save him later. The prince's appearance was very short, but he was still an impressive character, making people feel very sorry for the prince's death. To be honest, when the prince first appeared, I thought he would be the male protagonist, but I didn't expect him to die like that. . . The situation in the Palace of Wei seems to be very complicated. Originally it was only King Wei and the Ye family, but now it seems that another force has joined. However, in the war-torn era described in the article, it was actually the same everywhere. There are many people who write ancient novels and time travel, but it is not easy to write well. Only novel and unique stories can attract people. Come on, Mo Mo, I will always support you!