The Great Road of Reincarnation

The eunuch is once again awesome. I want to see how many times I can be the eunuch. But what I want to say is, author, you are so awesome. You have been the eunuch so many times. I think you must be very strong.

Also, the main character's strength is really rubbish. Anyone with a lower level than you can probably abuse you! Your fighting scene is written like a martial arts novel, it doesn't look like a prehistoric level battle.

It's really useless. As an emperor, his cultivation speed is not as fast as that of ordinary ferocious beasts. I'm speechless.

I flipped through the book again and saw many comments from fellow Taoists. I will explain my own thoughts here. 1: The protagonist Chu Yan calls himself a poor Taoist In my mind, Chu Yan had not promised Shen Ni to become the second emperor of the ferocious beast clan, so Chu Yan was just a pure Taoist, so he called himself Pindao. Now the protagonist Chu Yan is the reincarnation emperor of the ferocious beast clan. I will later claim that I will write him as the emperor (it is also possible, this is not the case in some places, I will definitely pay attention to it in the future╭(╯ε╰)╮) Of course, after the catastrophe of the ferocious beast, the protagonist may call himself a poor Taoist again. I hope all Taoist friends will understand by then. 2: Some Taoist friends said that the Heavenly Court was established and it would be too false to give the best innate spiritual treasures. In the early days of the creation of the world, during the prehistoric period of calamity, none of the great masters such as Shen Ni, Luo Hu, and Hong Jun had one or two innate treasures in their hands, let alone the best innate spiritual treasures. In my setting, in the early days of the creation of the world, which is the period of great tribulation, there are still quite a lot of innate spiritual treasures. After all, there are still many chaotic gods and demons dormant in the great wilderness! 3: Description of fighting scenes. To be honest, I'm really not very good at describing fights, and the difficulty of describing fights in the prehistoric era has become even more difficult, so I can only improve slowly!

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There has been no water group recently, and I didn't know that the group leader actually faked his corpse and came back to life! Fake it!

Quite pretty! Collected! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

I just found a prehistoric book that suits my taste. Unfortunately, the author has entered the palace.

Author, how long does it take you to write a chapter? We readers are all sick and are asking you for medical expenses.

What a mess, one moment he said that he gave up his status as an emperor and gave up all his luck, and the next moment he said that he was the emperor to begin with. Could it be that God will return the luck you have obtained to you? People are looking for you to conquer you completely and for your own luck. I don't want to complain anymore.

Dijiang is a lazy pig. He doesn't know how to code, but he knows how to flirt with girls all day long.

The first few dozen chapters are very well written, starting with the promise of divine rebellion. The more I read it, the less it looks like prehistoric literature. You can learn from the setting concept of Hongyun Avenue and write it again. Come on

Visiting friends, hoping to pay attention to and collect each other

A story about two male protagonists, "The Last One" The first male protagonist is ugly and lecherous. He was supposed to be the devil in the world of demons. But by some mistake, he was recognized as the holy son of the fairy world. From then on, he embarked on the path of the prodigal son's return... The second male protagonist, his personality, is upright and handsome. He was supposed to be the holy son of the fairy world. But by mistake, he was destined to be the holy son of the fairy world. Next, he was identified as the Demon Son of the Demon Realm, and has since embarked on the path of becoming a villain... The story unfolds between these two half-brothers... This is the theme of this novel, if you are interested in reading it, read it, at least the logic is online, the plot is reasonable, and there are laughs and tears. Welcome to complain

Come and take a look, the author's new cover is so beautiful! Move bricks to get a wife. . . . . .

The background is very shaky, the strength is very weak, the story and plot are too bland and unattractive, and it has been removed from the shelves.

In fact, if the author is not good at writing fighting, he can write like this: Just write it like this, if there is a formation, it is how to break the formation, or the collision or impact between formations, or the impact of the collision of magical powers. Or add a lot of adjectives, that is, you describe a magical power, Just assume that the protagonist uses the reincarnation channel to suck away other people's souls, you can write like this: Directly out of Chu Run, suddenly he was not fighting with the Sword Ancestor Team, but retreated far away. The Sword Ancestor thought of something at this time, so the Sword Ancestor was also preparing to use his backhand to deal with it. He saw the Sword Ancestor raising the sword above his head, and the people next to them could feel that something was slowly gathering in the Sword Master's sword, something indescribable. Unknown relationship, it was like a knife feeling, but as time went by, that feeling became stronger and stronger, and Chu Run on the other side was not to be outdone. He only felt that there was a completely different feeling permeating his body, as if he was experiencing a life that changed one after another, and he kept reincarnating in it. A strange situation has appeared on this battlefield. Both sides of the army stared blankly at Chu Run and the sword group. Although it seemed like a long time, on the real battlefield, it only lasted 0.01 Seconds. Well, isn't that a bit wordy? I'm just giving the author some advice. There are so many pictures, but I still haven't passed the first street. Of course, it's up to the author whether you want to use it or not.