Future Online Game: The Six Realms in Ruin

As a male reader, I have mixed feelings after reading it. First of all, the author should be able to expand on the subsequent plot, but since the author doesn't want to expand it, forget it. Secondly, I feel itchy in my heart when I see a bunch of big men fussing over it. . Although the world view has been changed by a certain man in reality, it is quite exciting to read this kind of novel for the first time that does not care about men and women. This author is a bit of a tiger. You can look forward to other works because Jumping off the Cliff is quite heart-wrenching to read. But does the author have a story? He doesn't like women so much. Of course, I am just talking about it. Men are not bad either.

Author, are you here? Is it because your book has ruined your own writing?

As a reader, I actually really like this book, just because I like it, so here I will mention the loopholes in the book, hoping that they can be rounded up or revised. 1: Ice Blue Melancholy disappeared inexplicably (it first appeared in Chapter 152, I just mentioned that he was in the friends list, and officially appeared in Chapter 161). After that, it was not mentioned until the heroine robbed a boss in Huaxia City. By the way, after the heroine became the leader of the gang, she didn't give Ice Blue Melancholy any position. TT, but the heroine always treated him as nothing (I am Ice Blue Melancholy~ and just passed by), so it didn't matter what position he had. 2 Binghu knew that Xiao Jiujiu was the saint in Chapter 190 (in fact, the heroine said that Xiao Jiujiu was the real face of the saint, which is really funny ~ Binghu: I feel like I ate 10 pounds of daddy), but in Chapter 1 In Chapter 93, there was this thing that didn't seem to recognize that Xiao Jiujiu was a saint. In my eyes, the character of Ice Fox should be very smart. How could he be more troublesome than Yeran Fentian in finding Xiao Jiujiu? 3 Actually, it's a matter of time progress and the age of the heroine. At the beginning of the article (Chapter 2), it is said that the heroine is 18 years old, but in the game, she becomes 16 years old again (I forgot the specific chapter, but I still want to talk about it). When talking about this time progress, in the article, it is said that the adult is 20 years old and can go to school, but the heroine appears to be 18 years old, and then she slept for another year, so how can she become 20 years old? Okay, I said this is a bit far-fetched, because I haven't counted the time for playing games yet. TT Haha, just think that I am trying to make up the word count. In fact, after all this, I just want to say: Can I review your articles before publishing them in the future? I like your articles very much, and I hope that you can write better and more interesting articles. I am looking forward to it. In fact, "Interstellar Unicorn" is very good, come on

The meaning of the heart (｡･㉨･｡)ﾉ♡ I love you so much

Looking at the introduction, a bowl full of Mary Sues comes to mind.

Emmm, I feel that the heroine's character is a bit silly. Because of the heroine's character, I think the author is not very old and her writing style is a bit sloppy 🙂

I just watched the beginning. Before the heroine traveled through time, was she a T?

55555~The author comes out and promises not to beat you to death

. . . . . . Author, come out, woo woo

How abominable | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ