Transform into Lingshan Senior Sister

The protagonist is too weak and cowardly. He has memories of his past life, but he doesn't have the intelligence he should have. The plot drags and has no main thread. I subscribed to about 300 chapters and found that I have no desire to continue reading. The writing style is very relaxed, which is the spice of a passionate novel. It's too hypocritical, it should be said to be fake. This is no longer a child's idea. As for the darkening part, it adds a bit of color to the book, but it is too little. The most important thing is that it is too bland, which makes people feel that it is not worth spending money to subscribe. It belongs to the category of boring reading and a pity to abandon. That's about it, or maybe I am too poor 😢

While reading the book, I read a lot of chapters and posts. Almost starting from the tenth chapter, there are curse words in every chapter. It's just a slow pace and a zz plot. At first, I was curious about why book friends are so irritable nowadays. Everyday life is just everyday, it's better to be more bland But now I endured the unhappiness and read the 100th chapter, and I was also very irritable Even if it is a slow-moving book, it has not reached the 100th chapter and the theme has not been highlighted I have the impression that I have read a novel called "The Master Sister" before. The setting is simple and crude. The protagonist travels to the past and lives in the body of a dead senior sister. She is a real senior sister. Although the subsequent plot unfolds a bit hastily, it does not affect the viewing experience To be honest, although this book is an old book two or three years ago, the first 40 or 50 chapters are really bland and make people want to vomit They are also senior sisters, but why is the "senior sister" in this book so miserable? Originally, Han Xue only needed to use Chrysostom to say that this child was Han Xue's veins, and he could directly cut into the theme of the novel. However, Han Xue's IQ drop operation delayed it for more than fifty chapters before getting to the main topic But he can write so many things that can be omitted in countless novels in just one chapter or even a paragraph. I have to admire the author's writing power and patience. Compared with the development of a big plot, this kind of ordinary daily life is often more important. It's so difficult to control But the biggest problem with this book is that from the moment the protagonist went to Shushan, this book gave me the feeling of a complete collapse Not to mention Liu Rufeng's guest appearance in the first few dozen chapters. Even after arriving in Shushan, her strength awakened, and her cat took over the house, controlled her body, and made all kinds of inexplicable actions. The whole plot began to dig holes and was filled with all kinds of IQ-offline operations. Forget it, I'm too lazy to scold you.

I think if you like a book, you can just read it. If you don't like it, you can just leave. There is no need to look for presence in the comment area.

First of all, I want to say that the author's writing style is really very good and very good. Although the pace is a bit slow (too slow), it is still acceptable because the author has warned it before, and when I read it later, I felt that this slow pace was also very good and warm. But there is one thing I still want to complain about. First of all, the protagonist is a time traveler. At the beginning, he chose his own race and sect. In other words, the initial setting is time travel, not reincarnation. However, the following text does not show the protagonist's intelligence and values ​​as a time traveler and an adult at all. Especially the last few pictures made me feel very aggrieved and uncomfortable. To be honest, if the author wants to write the protagonist as a completely new personality in this world, there is no need to use time travel as a template. And since the protagonist is a time traveler and has memories of his pre-travel personality, and it is not said that he has disappeared or anything, then some of the subsequent descriptions and characters of the protagonist seem very inconsistent.

To be honest, in seven years of reading, I have never seen a book with more ink than yours. After 60 chapters, it is pure water, without any ripples, and it is very messy.

A Ling who feels a little darker makes people feel more distressed.

If you are young and don't work hard, you will jump back with sword energy.

The front is a mess but the back is fine

Please reward 100 coins for each new chapter in the future! Think of it as supporting the author. Um! Just sauce! !

The pace of the plot is too slow and dragging, making you anxious to watch it.

The author is a girl, I guess. Sometimes in order to make the writing more artistic and interesting, the characters give up their IQ. They are poisonous, extremely poisonous.

It's a mess, nothing is trivial, the game starts out stupidly, and then it actually overpowers the boss and abuses the boss. It's okay to overpower the boss. The subject matter is said to be a light novel for foodies. How do you relate to foodies? ? ? As long as the protagonist has a role, he is either suffering from depression or on the way to being depressed. And you actually wrote group portraits and characters. Haha, where are the characters? With so many protagonists written about, who would remember these messy characters with messy background introductions? It's a good subject matter. I'm impressed by you, the author, because it's written in such a mess!

It's not that I'm looking for a sense of presence, but I really can't stand it and I want to say something. Forget about the procrastination of the plot, if you go to Shushan, you don't know what you're doing? I really want to scold the author

I finished reading Xiuxian overnight, and I haven't encountered such a satisfying article in a long time. When you see a book that respects the character's IQ, you know that it will never be bad. Of course, IQ here does not mean being extremely intelligent, but means that the protagonist and supporting characters speak and behave rationally and logically. What's even better is that this book is cute as a daily text! The pacing of the story is also well controlled. The two joys are intertwined and bring me great happiness. I hope the author will continue to maintain and perform stably. Let those cultivators who kill people and seize treasures be like gangsters die. Let those cultivators who have been in love for thousands of years still behave like inferior Korean dramas die. I've had enough! Finally, I want to complain about the title of the book. I came across this book through a recommendation on a Tieba forum. If someone hadn't replied with a good comment on the recommendation level, I probably wouldn't have had the chance to read it. Finally, good night everyone🌹

After reading more than seventy chapters, I felt that I had read nothing but "Loneliness". It was too ink-filled and the description of the protagonist was too little. It felt like the narrator was telling his own story. The "Poison in Shushan" episode seemed inexplicably written and too messy.

Recently, wenqing has been competing with others to deceive others, giving them a relaxed and everyday profile.

Be careful when feeding poison. Starting from the cat in Shushan (around Chapter 70), it disgusted me so much that I started feeding poison like crazy/be careful.

Starting from Shushan, it was probably written by AI. I don't understand what the plot of these twenty chapters is trying to express.

The Shushan section of "Poison" was so well prepared in the early stages. I thought it was a climax, but it turned out to be as crappy as an NT.

What is written about Shushan? What on earth should I watch again? This paragraph makes me feel that those women in Lingshan are quite disgusting.

When will the protagonist suffer from menstrual cramps (funny)

This book is so disgusting. It's more mentally retarded than mentally retarded. After reading the first 50 chapters, it's pretty good about daily life, but the rest is full of trash cans.

So what kind of abuse did A Ling suffer in the past?

After reading the comments, what is the situation with 811 and 812? ! ?

It's really annoying. I thought it was too trashy after watching it half way. I forgot to turn off the automatic renewal. When I found out, I came back and became the helmsman.

Does the sword spirit destroy the master's body? It's also called venting emotions, but it's true and right.

Rt, I know some people like slow pace or light abuse, but believe me, I also prefer this kind of book, and this book still broke my guard. In one word, bad, it gives people the impression that a young man who has not even experienced society is moaning for nothing and self-righteously "taking pleasure in suffering"

Fortunately, I almost read it after reading the comments.

The description was very detailed at the beginning Starting from Shushan (Chapter 70), the logic started to become unclear. Just like the fine points, the plot was also dragging. The more I read, the more torture I got, so I gave up.

This book can still give a glimpse of the glory of the transformation literature of the past. It is a pity that the authors who wrote the book rushed to seal the book. It is just a pity that Liu Fufeng was not given a good ending. I think the biggest attraction of the transformation story is to see the world from a new perspective. When you are a girl, how will you face the world? The protagonists in transformation stories are often relatively weak, looked down upon, and in need of protection; but because they have the mentality of boys, they are strong, motivated, and not biased towards one corner. This kind of conflict and contradiction is also the reason why I love transformation stories. A different life, a different girl, whether you are the protagonist or the protagonist as your daughter, it is a rare experience. In recent years, there have been fewer and fewer transformation stories, and most of the authors have left the coding circle, but this book still has a place in my mind. Maybe the next time I read this book will be a few years later, but I hope that I will still like transformation stories as always, and the heroine who refuses to admit defeat. I hope A-Ling can be her senior sister safely in her world, and I also hope Liu Fufeng can come back and guard their spiritual mountain and home with A-Ling in the end.