Traveling to Another World with Your Legion

It's not well written. Since you want to write this kind of article, you should make the protagonist a cold-blooded and ruthless hero, otherwise you will just feel disgusted.

The professional army defended the city with 1,000 people, but the bandits attacked the city with 4,000 people and couldn't find the north. A little bit of common sense, even if a third-rate army defends and a top-notch army attacks, it is impossible to defeat it if it is not 10 times more likely in the cold weapon era.

So many typos! The content is so confusing.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 2. Mathematics is taught by the physical education teacher, right? The Chinese I learned must have been taught by a chemistry teacher 😓

A complete military novice and political novice, why did he write such a book? He just relied on random writing. One thousand regular troops defended the capital of a province, but it was actually invaded by 4,000 bandits. During the war, in times of crisis, when money was available, it was given to civilians as soon as possible, not to the army.

Why did you put my vest up? ? 😊😊

Unlike this novel, it's like a game record of a third-rate web game! Then copy it to fool people!

It's all very fancy, and it complicates simple things. It just makes a Bakui-ryu novel look like it's incomprehensible to me.

Good water. Just look at it and you'll know what kind of water it is. It's too watery anyway.

This book says that war writing is highly toxic, but cool writing is okay. What I want to complain about is, don't the protagonist's army fucking want to eat? At the beginning, the garrison of 1,000 troops should be a small town, and there should not be many people in it. Such a small town can support hundreds of thousands of people, and they are all soldiers who only fight and do not farm. The author did not count food and grass, right? Another point is that so many people suddenly appeared, but few people seemed to be suspicious? Millions of people suddenly appeared in my small border town, and they were all fucking soldiers. The giants in the court didn't know anything.

Can the national special forces be discharged from the army at will? Cowhide

I can only talk about steamed vegetables. Why is there a legion selection? I don't want to look at it. There are so many great ones. I just choose an ancient one. You might as well just point out that there is a choice. After reading a few chapters, there is nothing required to unlock the technology. They are all given directly, without any explanation. The Three Kingdoms are also poorly written. Every time I look at the ancient wars, it's the characters of the Three Kingdoms. I have never seen a story about the characters of the Three Kingdoms. I thought it was good at first, but after reading too much, I felt bored. If I had never read novels about the characters of the Three Kingdoms, I would think this book is very interesting. However, I have read too many novels about the characters of the Three Kingdoms, and every time I read it, I would feel speechless. Because the characters are different every time, but every time I read it, I can't help but think of other books.

I can't stand it anymore, the writing is a bit messy

Although it's very exciting, it's really confusing and I can't think clearly.

The number of words in Chapter 2 is as high as the sky, and I have a strong sense of disgust. This is nonsense.

It's a bad combination of Chinese and Western. Soldiers in the special forces generally don't retire casually. Even if they need to be discharged, they will find employment. One is to be transferred to instructors and civilian jobs, and the other is to join the local public security bureau. Special talents who have nothing to do and leave will be very harmful.

Neither dissatisfied nor dissatisfied, this book is rubbish, the content is cool, and the writing style of running accounts has not been seen in a long time.

Dense mathematics. Paragraph 😴 gives me a headache after reading it for a long time

The word count is too low, it's so ugly that I can't even remember the content.

It was so poisonous that I couldn't stand it after 20 chapters.

The second time I clicked on this book, I couldn't stand it after just a few paragraphs of the first chapter. Can the writing be so bad? Elementary school students don't wear this kind of thing.

After reading 3 chapters, I can't stand it anymore.

It's really rare to find such a bad novel, and it has so many words. It's amazing.

This is the fastest paced book, and I have read dozens of chapters. Upgrading, drawing cards, and fighting are just digital fights! !

I haven't finished the first chapter. The writing style of a primary school student is so poor.

When I saw the girl from the original host come in and stand up, I really couldn't stand it. Why did she cross over and become a puppet?

I really can't hold on until chapter 12.

The subject matter is very good, the author writes a running account, the system is complex, and the characters are portrayed as mentally retarded. It is an unparalleled junk military book.

When I was a child, my teacher always said that the compositions I wrote were just anecdotes, which I didn't understand. Now that I've read this novel you wrote, I understand. Thank you.

Doesn't Qidian have an audit system? Can this kind of junk book be published? ! !