Little Flower's Journey to Immortality

The author really did not like the heroine she wrote. She was not decisive, straightforward, and cowardly. She also felt ignorant and unintelligent, and she had lived in the city for 30 years in vain. I was very unhappy when I read it, but the same person can support all kinds of people. Such a protagonist who is hard to find any advantages in is well portrayed by the author, and the writing style of the whole article is also very smooth. Apart from the female protagonist who I don't like, I can honestly say that the author wrote this article very carefully.

Don't be discouraged, author~it's definitely not easy when you first start writing a book

If this is the case, a random person on the street can take on a big responsibility. What will the gods do? Got it! Got it!

When I saw the copywriting saying that the heroine is cowardly and stupid, it means that she is cowardly and stupid, so why should she be an immortal?

After reading the last 40 chapters, I feel that she is completely brainless and reckless. Although I changed it later, I still don't like her. It's not that girls can't be boyish, but if she pulls others into making mistakes and makes them almost die because of it, I won't like her no matter how much she repentes. Especially when I saw that she was favored by others because she was punished, I felt... Like she had eaten shit. In addition, I can understand that the heroine wants to be kind to others, but until she is disfigured, that is not called being kind to others, that is called not distinguishing between good and evil. She is a 30-year-old adult and knows what to do and what not to do. When Xin Xiaolan persuaded them to go hunting for wild food, she should have persuaded them to stop! It can be said that in a sense, she brought her disfigurement on herself, and she deserves it! And when he was bullied later, he would not fight back. He was simply cowardly to a certain extent!

I just like to watch people doing hard work, waiting to be fattened up! I've seen Liu Da's "Mortal Girl Fairy Gourd" before. It's very good-looking, and the heroine doesn't have any golden fingers. It's very interesting! ! ! There are too few simple articles on immortality! ! ! Please support 🌹

It's wrong of me to comment after only reading chapter 35, but I really suggest that the author think about the protagonist's character in the future. In all popular books, the protagonists are always charming. The protagonists of the Madonna series are also bold in their actions, and the protagonists of the Dark series are also principled in their actions. The author probably wanted to write a story about an ordinary girl cultivating immortality, but the heroine is no longer ordinary. Ordinary people also have advantages. However, the character of the heroine, at least in the first thirty-five chapters, does not have any advantages. It is basically a collection of shortcomings: self-righteousness, being stubborn, childish, indecisive, unclear bottom line of principles, not working hard, and not prioritizing. To put it bluntly, a person with this kind of personality has no potential to achieve great things. Talented people rely on talent, perseverance relies on hard work, people with good character rely on friends, and decisive people rely on seizing opportunities. The heroine can probably only rely on the protagonist's best friend and mother's author to force her way up the ranks. I felt helpless when it came to introducing the Qi into the body. The change of thinking was too abrupt. The author probably wanted to write about the heroine's inner show, but that paragraph really didn't fit the heroine's previous character. Instead, it seemed a bit artificial, making people feel that it was a forced upgrade. Today's students are still in a group even in the ivory tower. An unpleasant child like the heroine is very likely to be in the middle of the class, and most likely to be a well-behaved and invisible poor student. The university is said to be an ivory tower, but it is already a small society. I don't know what university the heroine is in. However, although the children from better universities have more innocent personalities, they are also more decisive. Most of them have plans and perseverance. To be honest, in worse universities, people's hearts are not ancient, and it may be more chaotic than the working environment. The heroine is like this... I really find it weird. It's a bit heavy-handed, and I've only read a little bit of it. Maybe this book is a slow-burner, and I didn't see the subtlety, but the beginning is really discouraging. If I am wrong, the author please delete my post to avoid misleading.