Add Some Immortality

Does this protagonist have a brain? Even if you are a time traveler, you always have memories. What kind of thing is the Jin family that actually has emotions? I don't believe that a bigger branch of the family can't practice martial arts without him. With some system additions, you can become a wizard just by adding physical fitness. I haven't found one yet. In this sect, my predecessor was beaten to death in the mines after his martial arts skills were abolished. He returned home in despair and was threatened by the master of the family. He risked being killed by pretending to be a grandson just for a few secrets. Within two days, he was nailed to a wooden shelf by the second young master to be bled. After several narrow escapes, he took advantage of the opportunity to kill this person. A group of losers made secrets, packed them up, and took them away from the center of the whirlpool. They also regarded them as good people. Not only did they save people, but they also worked hard and swore to avenge others. Do they insist on giving you a death? What if a master comes and kills you? Isn't it crazy not to change the map at this time? In fact, you insist on writing about your family. It's okay to be deceived because of deep love and difficulties, but if you press the manager, press the guard, press the second child, press the boss, press the boss, press the boss, press the entire branch of his father, you will press it again. There is no good thing in a family that is so big, right, then it is better to take the opportunity to save the little fat man and leave. Anyway, it is almost the same. . . . . . Forget it, after saying so much, I just feel like my intelligence has been ravaged.

There are quite a few poisonous points. The protagonist's father was killed by his tribe, and even he was exploited. In the end, he was still thinking about how to avenge his tribe, not to mention that he traveled through time. You are trying to poison the readers in the opening chapter.

No matter how others bully the protagonist. The protagonist helps people when he meets them, without asking for benefits. The benefits obtained elsewhere, such as slashing mountain swords, are immediately given to others. Too righteous. Comparable to the great sages of ancient times, come and learn, everyone, study hard and make progress every day...

I'm happy when someone criticizes the author. Don't insult the intelligence of the general public, okay? With this kind of system, the protagonist cannot survive for three days.

Where did Chapter 2 go? Author, you ate it

It's a pity that this book doesn't have a clear focus. It's obvious that you can become stronger by adding more points, but you make up the plot. The protagonist has such a powerful system, but his life is threatened again and again. How can he become an immortal? The heroine wanted to get along with him, but he said he would have to wait for decades, and the heroine agreed. Male protagonist, are you a eunuch? Can't it be tough? Finally, when I saw the fee, the protagonist hadn't become stronger yet, and his wife hadn't been found yet. All in all, it's annoying to look at

In reality, rich people don't even have enough time to play, so how can they waste their time reading novels? Most of them are working people who read them. They wear masks in life and work to pretend to be grandsons. How can you feel like you are involved when you see various virgins torturing the protagonists in the novels? If you don't like it and don't criticize others, then click "close" to show your quality. At the very least, it must conform to the modern public view in order to be able to watch it.

The character, wisdom, and methods are not up to standard, and they are all supported by the golden finger and the halo of the protagonist. Not worthy of being the protagonist!

It feels like it was written by a junior high school student

I tipped the book before it was released, but I was poisoned by a woman before it was released. Don't write so many women in the next book. The protagonist is surrounded by women.

When I read Chapter 5, the meridians mentioned above were seriously injured, so if he used internal power, wouldn't he add to the injury? The protagonist feels as if nothing happened. . . Did the author forget? Note that I am not looking for trouble, but asking questions.

I really can't bear it anymore, so I want to ask, will there be any disgusting incidents like the Jin family in the future? The blood sacrifice should be absolutely fatal, but the author's arrangement makes people feel like they have eaten a fly. I came from Ji Dao, because someone recommended the book, and it turned out to be really good. Until I cleaned up the Baijin family, I fainted. It was the Jin family who killed the original owner's family, not Qin. He only killed the original owner's father, not the original owner's family. I don't know why the author went to clean up the original owner's family? During the blood sacrifice, if I didn't just die, I would definitely be discouraged and nauseated.

It's really boring. The protagonist died after traveling through time, and the ones who survived were the natives. Also, martial arts is so messy!

The protagonist cannot afford to watch millions of people in danger and looking for death. I will definitely die. I don't want to see the protagonist die... Gone.

I read dozens of chapters. The protagonist feels like a child. Very childish

The heroine is like a nymphomaniac. They are obviously in a hostile relationship. When she sees that all the men in her family are killed, the woman is left to lick her slowly. What kind of logic~

Crazy, he laughs every time he harvests a demon soul, he is sick

This novel is really painful to watch. There are all kinds of demons and monsters. Descendants of gods also appear. No one from the top to the family is trying to trick him. He is looked down upon. However, he does not even have a complete world view. The writing is okay, but he passively endures all kinds of messy things throughout the whole process. It looks too messy. Various opportunities are arranged. The only system that is awesome. There is no detailed explanation. There is only data. A technique that looks like an upgraded version of the Golden Bell Iron Shirt can integrate various techniques. Maybe I am not smart enough. I don't want to watch it after seeing it

The protagonist discovers a hidden enemy, but doesn't say anything about it, and doesn't take any defense or verification measures. Waiting for the system to deal with him. Typical waste. I found out that Jin Qingqing's dog united with the cult to kill him. Don't you know how to report it? The other party is the enemy in the first place. If you report it, you can still disgust the other party even if he is not.

The author failed so much. He didn't write the key plot clearly. Chapter 2 is about torturing people. What happened to escape and kill?

Those who know me say that I am worried, let me ask

If you don't like the stallion article, you can remove it.

This book, if it continues to be written, is no longer there. Tomatoes, under the three young masters.

You are a slave, and everyone bullies you and wants you dead. Now there are zombies attacking the city, but you have the ability to run away. Will you live and die with the city, or will you run away? ? The protagonist has traveled through time and is not familiar with the people here at all. It is not certain whether he is the same breed of people, but he is definitely not a descendant of Yan and Huang.

Just read if you want. Writing a book is not easy. Or write it yourself. As long as it suits my taste.

If it doesn't look good, don't talk so much nonsense. It's not easy to write a book. Why don't you write one yourself and let me see it. This book is good, good-looking and to my liking. Recommend "Earth Travel Era", "Eternal Kingdom", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Martial Tomb" and "The Ancestor of All Demons"

The system is too messy, the name given to the protagonist is also messy, and the name of the protagonist is too random.

What a mess, it's a mess. Where did Qin Ziqing come from? He suddenly appeared as your enemy. I can't explain clearly. It's a mess.

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I think it's pretty good. The protagonist has some extra abilities, but he has to have martial arts first. In the beginning, the world's aristocratic family controlled high-level martial arts, and everything that came out was garbage. I happened to be from a noble family. Although I was abused by my boss, I got the moon first by being close to the water, so I endured it first and learned all the martial arts before taking revenge. There's nothing wrong with that. Later, a ruthless character suddenly came and almost wiped out the Jin family, but the enemy was almost dead. The others were pretty good to him, and the only one who was a bit angry was crazy. He couldn't do it again, not to mention that when he went to the master's house later, someone had to prove his qualifications so that he could learn better kung fu. My junior couldn't get in the way. The writing at the back is pretty good.