Manchester United Legend

Pig's feet have low IQ and will be poisoned to death

I barely saw what the protagonist did, it was all history

This is like a news report about Manchester United; if you don't know, just look at Baidu

I didn't see that Pig's Foot is a talented midfielder. I'm completely smoothing out Manchester United's championship history, and it's hard for the author.

Are you reborn without any lessons, experience, or wisdom from before you were reborn? He gets into fights, gets into trouble, and gets sent off every once in a while. The plot is not interesting.

It's not worth reading. The whole article is just a memoir of Manchester United. I can't see the role of the protagonist. It's poor. Does the author want to popularize the history of Manchester United?

Either he was seriously injured or he was sent off. Is there any doubt about it? What is the history of Manchester United?

The front is so vicious, he can't catch the ball at all times and can't pass the ball well. But even so, we can still play in the finals!

The author's idea is good, but we are not very interested in novels that are too documentary. After all, we are not reading a report. You can try writing like this, but this attempt seems too rough. The details of the protagonist are not depicted at all, there are only thick lines and nothing else, which is very stiff. Football novels with systems and rebirth may be one of the best subjects to write in Qidian. It does not require you to bury many lines and then tie them up later, and it does not require wonderful writing. As long as you know the routine, you can write well. On the contrary, there are no systematic football novels. Except for Lin Da and a few famous ones, most of the others are following the old path of these people, without any breakthroughs. If you are a novice author, it is more recommended to learn other people's styles and imitate writing, because you are not yet capable of establishing a new genre. It is better to focus on the protagonist, on characterizing the protagonist and promoting the plot. This way, writing is more in line with your level, and it is easier to write well and get twice the result with half the effort. In addition, I just want to say one thing. If you want to complete a sports novel with 720,000 words, it is basically impossible to write it because the number of words is too small. The article I am currently writing in trumpet requires 30,000 words to complete the protagonist's first game. It is very difficult to end a person's career in 720,000 words, unless you write all the key nodes. This is what you are writing now, what is the effect?

I don't see that the protagonist looks like a reborn person. It doesn't matter if I don't know Su Maozhen. Even Ronaldo and Bruce Lee don't know 😥😥😥. Is he still considered a reborn person?

To be honest, I was quite happy when I first started reading this book. As a Manchester United fan, it was the first time I saw someone writing a book about Manchester United from this perspective. To make a fortune (after all, there are different angles for writing novels), but after the protagonist's rebirth, apart from replacing Keane (this is what I have written so far), I have not seen any help to the development of Manchester United. It is completely a documentary of the development of Manchester United. So what is the point of reading the novel? And I have repeatedly tried to communicate with the author in the comments, but let alone the modification of the content writing, the author has not even reflected the readers' opinions. What is going on? If you have any thoughts, please tell me without spoiling it. At any rate, you have to try to let the readers understand the reason why you wrote it this way. But unfortunately, I haven't seen it so far, so I'm sorry, I chose to abandon the book! 😫

He is actually a eunuch. There are many eunuchs in sports.

Nice idea, keep it up I've read a few chapters and I really can't stand it anymore. I can only give you some encouragement.

Amnesia after rebirth? Or from the physical education department?

You are still playing professional football after being reborn, which is a waste of the opportunity God gave you. Don't be reborn when writing about football, otherwise it will be too fake? ?

The writing of Pig's Feet is too frustrating. My career is not great and my life is even worse👎👎👎. I don't like it.

This book just popularizes a certain period of history from a different perspective... It doesn't feel like an online article... It doesn't have the passion and refreshing feeling that an online article should have...❌❌

Writing history or player legend?