I Have the Gift of Storytelling

After reading part of it, I would like to give some suggestions to the author. First, since the theme is storytelling, you should describe the tone of the protagonist in various situations or use ventriloquism to enhance the atmosphere. The protagonist should also use different voices to speak when different characters in the book speak. These should be described in detail, rather than making up a fantasy without a clue. If the storyteller keeps telling you a story with one voice, no matter how nice the story is, or even if there is an illusion, I personally feel that it is not as shocking as watching a 3D movie. Second, when writing, the author should check more information and describe it carefully. For example, at the beginning of the purple clay tea set, you only said that the tea set was made of purple clay, but you only said it was good, but did not say how good it was. Is the pattern on the teapot better or the material better? Purple clay tea sets range from tens of RMB to tens of millions. What about the protagonist's tea set? After reading the article, I had no idea how good this purple clay tea was. Another example is when the author describes tea, what kind of tea is it specifically? Only a few plot characters say it is better than West Lake Longjing, better than Dahongpao, and better than Maojian. The quality of these teas varies from place to place, and even from the same place of origin, there are grades. If you don't understand tea, you should check the information. Don't write just for the sake of writing. And Dahongpao is black tea, so what's the point of comparing it to green tea? The tastes are completely different. For example, if you compare pork and beef together, each has its own advantages and flavors. How can you compare them? Finally, there is the problem of the IQ of the characters in the book. There is a feeling of forcibly lowering the IQ. If nothing else, just say that when seeing the illusion, even if a normal person feels shocked at the time, he will definitely doubt something in his heart afterwards, right? As a result, the characters in the plot are deliberately made to admire the protagonist, saying that this is no different from a miracle. To be fair, even if a normal person encounters a miracle, they will have all kinds of suspicions and try to understand and analyze it from a scientific perspective, right? Just based on the plot of the previous ten chapters, wouldn't a normal person think that you put drugs in the tea? The novel is a bit more bizarre, and the setting is different from reality. This is not a choice, after all, the setting of each book is different. But there is no problem with logic. This IQ does not conform to the logical thinking of normal people, right? As for the writing, the author does need to improve, but luckily it's not embarrassing. That's all for now, it doesn't matter whether the author accepts it or not, I just want to express my opinion, and I didn't say I won't let others make suggestions, right? As for nonsense and rhythmic comments, don't come here and take them out of context. Your own low quality will only bring trouble to the author.

😅 I read it for a long time and subscribed. At first glance, the book was already a eunuch.

Damn it, what the hell? What a fucking eunuch? Waiting to see it every day...

As long as you keep it, you will become a eunuch. . . . I'm drunk too

Only then did I realize that this book was actually said to be complete.

Then who is Wang Sicong?_? Did he also come from a parallel world?

Will most people go to a teahouse with 200 seats? Will anyone read a book with 99 seats? It's so unreasonable.

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Author: Are you living in Vietnam? How can ordinary people afford a storytelling video for 99?

Not enough, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Come on, author, don't be a eunuch, I will always support you

Chapter 142 is gone... Come on, author

After reading a little bit, the novel is quite good. Don't be led astray by the first chapter. The first chapter is a bit old-fashioned, but the author's creative subject matter is good and suitable for those who are short of books.

A eunuch? And the author, you are gone in chapter twenty-eight.

It seems that I have finished writing the book...?

Another book that is being fed to death! The finished book will be displayed after 60 chapters are released... It's a eunuch.

The author would like to give you a suggestion: it is best not to use the same name as the real thing in entertainment novels, just use homophones instead, otherwise it will be criticized.

Damn it, after raising it for a while, it's gone. All the rewards and subscriptions are a waste of my expressions.