Special Summoning System

[Long review] It should be more refined. Note: I have only read the first two or three chapters, so let me comment first. First of all, the author's writing style is still a bit immature, and there are some problems with the narrative. For example, if I were to write the first few chapters, I would simply omit the complicated fear of dead people and past life situations, and just focus on the topic at the beginning. The protagonist's soul travels to this life (he was eaten to death due to the forced summoning), receives the memory and discovers a fatal crisis (the person who came to kill the protagonist later), and then prepares to summon again, activating the system and giving hope, and activates the system to summon Zhao Yun (read the message). During this time, the enemy found the protagonist, and without any nonsense, directly raised the knife to chop the protagonist. At the critical moment, Zhao Yun was summoned and killed the enemy. The above protagonist, golden finger, plus after killing the enemy, you can make some plans for revenge in the future, etc., To introduce the background of the story. Only in this way can you initially attract the reader's attention, instead of writing something irrelevant. . . .

Um, the writing is pretty good, but the plot substitution is a bit poor. Summoning genres like system texts are inherently difficult to write. The anime characters need to maintain their original personalities as much as possible while balancing the power system. The author may be a little behind in this aspect. The plot arrangement and character dialogue feel a bit stiff like a drama script. Some plots are too cliche, at least from three or four years ago, and there is a lack of sense of substitution. Let's talk about the problem of trolls. There will always be trolls about a book. There is nothing you can do about it. You can fight back, but don't say things like this. If you don't like it, you won't read it. I didn't write it for you. It's easy for passers-by to turn against you and make the trolls even more arrogant.

A eunuch? It's strange. Wasn't it true that eunuchs were banned after the founding of the People's Republic of China?

Are you not going to update it?😜

After reading Chapter 42, I can say that the author is an idiot.

I can't write well, my penmanship is much worse

Support one, system streaming is my favorite~ Welcome everyone to come and watch the Western fantasy of time travel: "The Summoning World of the Talisman Cultivation System" http://u. Qidian. Com/RfQ7j2

So what, does the author have a book club? Let me know if you have any, thank you. 😁

No matter how well the book is written, as long as you are willing to write it, find your own shortcomings, study them, check for omissions and fill in the gaps, I believe you will definitely gain something. The edge of a sword is sharpened, and no matter how dull the sword is, as long as it is well polished, it will move from failure to success! No matter what others say about you, don't pay attention to them. If you care too much about him, it will only disturb your mind and prevent you from doing something well.

The author's avatar looks like I'm hitting him, as if to say I'm so handsome. . . . . . I wonder if our readers are the most handsome 😏😏😏 Do you still want to recommend it and reward me with a monthly ticket? . .

Really a eunuch? Has the author entered the palace?

After reading the book review section, I couldn't bear it anymore. I want to say that we are readers, not trolls. We should read what we can read and if we don't like it, we will leave. But some people just like to disgust the author and have to leave a comment. It is very difficult for the author to write a book. In the end, he is criticized and disgusted. Those of you who criticize the author, you are so fucking awesome. Try writing a book for me. If you are an author, you have worked so hard to write a book, but in the end you will be criticized by others for not worth trying. He has the ability to fucking criticize the author and write a fucking book! And I think the author is right to scold him. He is right to scold someone when he sees someone complaining. You cannot just tolerate it. Since others make you unhappy, then you should make them unhappy. Finally, I would like to say that if you can't read a book, then abandon it. Don't scold the author for criticizing the book. You are not qualified to do so.

I'm here to advertise, an interesting story about an online game between a foodie apprentice and a cultivation master. Online game master and apprentice 100,000 words have been entered, please comment

I am the most urinary protagonist, and it is even more out of reach to endure the true story of urinary nature. Ordinary people will never be able to control my urinary nature. I dare to be called the second in the world, who dares to be the first. If you want to see the legend of my urinary nature, then come to "Golden Demon Tianpu Jue", I am waiting for you here!

Saw Chapter 19. Died by poisoning. . .

It's so annoying, but in Chapter 20, the part about the Zhao family starts to get a little bit more poisonous, and it dodges people.

I read the first four chapters and slipped away.

But what is this writing about? There is no sense of pleasure, joy or satisfaction from upgrading.

A very nice systematic article, which combines many colors of childhood. I hope the author will work hard.

There's not much else to say. I just want to know where the protagonist's magical sense of substitution comes from? Firstly, Su Hui awakened, and secondly, he was not possessed and reborn, but just because the system gave you a run through of the other person's memories, you just recognized the dead ghost's parents?

I've been waiting for so long and haven't seen any major updates. I'm running out of books. I'm going to watch Boats Traveling Through the Heavens.

Author, don't let those malicious trolls who blindly push others down to elevate themselves get led into the vicious circle. If you jump out and look at it, you will find that they are just a joke. Writing a book is tiring enough. How hard it is for you to care so much about the people who criticize you all day long! You might as well focus on the real readers, come on! 🤝🤝🤝🤝

It's such a mess, it's so fast to upgrade 😓

A very good fantasy novel, there are not many such fine works in the summoning genre. I hope the author will continue to work hard↖(^ω^)↗🌹🌹🌹

Happy New Year! A bit belated blessing!

Very well written, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

These book reviews are all worthless. I feel that the reviews of every book are the same. Various people have different reasons for being bad. I think if you don't think it's good, you don't have to read it. Why insult other people's work? Come on, author.

I couldn't help it, it was so well written! I was almost strangled to death by myself, so I took the first step! Poisonous

Chapter 10 of Testing the Poison. I can't hold on any longer. Fellow Taoists, I'll take the first step.

This is a single author's work. I pushed it, but I haven't received a reply yet.