You Are Back

I just saw too many characters, and the relationships were a bit complicated, and I was a little confused, but I still thought it was interesting, so I went back and read it again. The relationships were sorted out, and I felt that it was really well written. The rhythm is tight and the characters are vivid and full-bodied. Xian Dahao is good at revealing character traits with just a few lines of dialogue and a few actions. It's hard to catch up on updates, there's not enough to watch at all

Xianda, all my monthly votes have been voted for you, please update quickly.

Deliver the money after you receive the money Refund if you don't deliver the goods No Ask for it and want it at the same time This is too unethical Since there is a charge, you must first have professional ethics No reader's money falls from the sky

Comment 3: If you don't believe that the east wind can't call you back, This section of Jun Gui's writing should be the most critical part of the plot. There may be thrilling moments, stormy waves, and world-shattering moments later, but they all originate from this. Without the turning point and clear direction at this time, there would be no subsequent big scenes. Jun Gui has been criticized by many book friends, mostly due to the words "elite among the elite" and "saving the world" mentioned in the introduction. However, the first hundred chapters seemed completely irrelevant. Book friends saw that it was just a confused heroine and a stupid girl who kept drifting with the crowd and being manipulated by others. There was no aura of the protagonist at all, and there was no excitement at all. Internet articles like this will definitely not be liked by most people! However (there is a twist here 🤭), the key words in Jungui's introduction should originally be "mystery" and "crisis". If the mystery is easily solved, isn't that another Shuangwen routine? In the passive state, clues are pushed into the mystery little by little, and in the decryption, the crisis is constantly encountered. After adapting to the current identity, one uses elite vision and thinking to solve the crisis, thereby saving the world. This is the plot design of Jungui. Speaking of which, Xiaoxian's writing of Jun Gui is somewhat of an attempt at deconstruction. For the most common plot logo in online literature, which is to travel through time and then bring your own halo to save the world, Xiaoxian extracted and sorted the nodes, designed the clues to advance the plot, and reconstructed the plot chain of Jun Gui. That's why the current mysterious and puzzling "Jun Gui" was created! "The beauty of application lies in one mind" This is the real author! Everyone is full of curiosity about the current Li Yan. What will he find? But no matter what is recovered, at least one thing is certain, it will not be limited to the structure of house fighting, and it is not the routine of ordinary female videos. This is also the root of Xiaoxian's cartoons. This is not easy to write. The larger the format, the test for the author will also increase exponentially, but I have full confidence in Xiaoxian's knowledge and mind, and there will be a satisfactory content. If you don't believe it, the east wind won't call you back! It is Li Yan who is recalled, which is the plot advancement of the initial solution to the mystery, and the exciting follow-up that people are looking forward to! If you don't believe it, the east wind won't call you back! It is Xiao Xian who has been summoned back, the glory writer from Return of the King, and Sister Erba Xian who has her own halo! One more thing, the personalities and abilities of the main male characters have been basically shown clearly, but Li Yan is still relatively vague. This should be very unpleasant, but I personally find it very interesting and very exciting. Xiaoxian, please write slowly 😁

Xian's book is very good-looking, with no nonsense and no list of professional knowledge. It is perfect. I read it several times, and I still read it out from time to time. The writing style of this book has changed a bit, which may make readers confused, but I can feel that Xian is working hard to create the book, so we should wait patiently to see Xian's changes. Now we may be hesitating about the next direction. The decision is not easy. In any case, think about it slowly, and then go ahead after making a decision.

Let me show you the garden that Xiaoxian took care of. The situation is much better than the garden that A-nan had. I was depressed when I saw the garden scene at that time. Xianda said that she was writing and reorganized the outline at the end to make it more impactful. She is now a bit sleepy like Miss Li. The air conditioner has been repaired and the motor has been replaced. I believe she can get out of this period. She said that if she stops updating, she will treat it as she is going through a tribulation, passing each test one after another. In turn, she comforted me who suffered from heat stroke while resting at home🤤.

Hahaha, I was actually the first person to receive the Light of the Great God from Erxian

Coming, coming 👏👏👏👏 For a moment in the cave, it has been eight years in the world, and Li Yan is coming back!

The image of Yushu I generated with bean bags😁

The following is an introduction to Langya Crispy Candy: -Basic information: Langya Crispy Candy is a traditional snack in Chuzhou City, Anhui Province. It is named after "Langya Mountain". It originated in the late Ming Dynasty and was formerly known as "Noodle Sugar" and "Dong Tang". In 2008, it was listed as an intangible cultural heritage item in Chuzhou City. - Production process - Raw material selection: Pure white sesame seeds, refined white sugar, Fuqiang powder, maltose, etc. Are used as the main raw materials. Some products will also add black sesame seeds and other auxiliary materials. - Production process: First roast and pulverize raw materials such as sesame and flour, and boil maltose and white sugar to make a syrup of appropriate concentration. Then mix the syrup with the crushed raw materials. Use the special process of "seven pressures and seven folds" to fold the syrup in half, grind it thin, and sandwich it with flour. Repeat this seven times, and finally roll it into slender square strips and cut into small pieces. - Appearance and taste: The product is milky white, shaped like a spiral body, the sugar cubes are uniformly thin and thick, the bones are as thin as paper, and the cross-section is well-defined. It is soft in the mouth, delicate and free of impurities, rich in fragrance, sweet but not greasy. It can be eaten dry or brewed for drinking. - History and culture: The evolution of its name is related to many historical figures and the improvement of the production process. In the late Ming Dynasty, Chuzhou workshops first produced "noodle sugar". In the early Qing Dynasty, masters Qin and You renamed it "Qinyou crisp candy". Later, the master surnamed Dong renamed it "Dong candy". During the Republic of China, time-honored shops such as "Zhang Sanyi" inherited the production, making it famous far and wide. - Honorary achievements: In 1980, it was rated as a famous pastry in Anhui Province. In 1984, it was awarded the title of quality product in Anhui Province. In 1987, it was selected as a designated sales product in the Great Hall of the People in Beijing. In 1988, it entered the ranks of national famous products.

Now it is known that the young monk Qingkong in Jungui is the great monk Qingkong in Jintong, so Master Shao should be the prince, and the man in white is Chen Yanfeng.

Oh my God, what the hell have I done? I looked at the pile of big holes on the bookshelf and was speechless. I have read more than 2,000 chapters and more than 6 million words in this book. I stopped updating it for half a year, and the sunk cost is quite high. A book started serialization in 2018, and was last updated a year ago. The author later opened a new book. It has only been 370,000 words in 3 years. I really like the author's writing. This book has been serialized for 11 years and has not yet been completed. The author has started a side job as a screenwriter. A book has been serialized for 10 years, and the author has become a director. An author opened a new book, but the author said that the beginning was not good, so he revised and rewritten it. This rewriting has been more than a year, and I am still waiting. There is another pitfall. I went to check it out every day and found that the author said that he was in a bad state and was undergoing treatment. Don't encourage others to do good without suffering others' suffering. Writing is a physically and mentally demanding job, and being a reader is also very tiring. For the sake of everyone's physical and mental health, I advise everyone to be more careful. The most important thing is to feel comfortable.

Silently asking, is there anyone else who is also waiting for this article?

Old version: When did Li Yan come out of the cave? New version: When did Li Yan enter the cave? 😄😄😄

I would like to say a few words for my favorite author. I believe it is true that Kavin is not in good condition. When I am depressed myself, I just don't have any mental energy and can only collapse on the bed. It is difficult to even get up and wash my face. But I believe in Xianda. Although she says all day long that she writes articles just to make money, she can overturn her previous work and rewrite it several times instead of starting a new article. This alone shows that she is not writing entirely for money. I believe she didn't update because she couldn't, not because she didn't want to. Hehe, at forty-three years old, I can understand the boundaries of abilities. Finally, I wish Xianda a good life, and if it doesn't work, just lie down. A little perfection in this world is better than perfection.

Lao Xian is trying to write a history of the troubled times on the Internet. His words are concise and precise. Come on.

Zhi Xianda: Our concern for this story has never diminished even a little bit. I hope that "The King Returns" will finally be completed, and wait for the return of the mountains and rivers!

As a reader, when I read this article, I found that it is not as smooth as Mo Sang, nor does it have the feeling that my favorite Nuan Jun will get a fair reward for his efforts. Yes, I like Xian Da's Nuan Jun the most, and then Yao Xia, two less popular books. In every experience of Li Yan, after solving a mystery, he felt that there was no "reward", things did not become clearer, but after each mystery was solved, the fog became bigger and deeper... It was like crawling out a little, and being pushed back into an abyss... I think this is the author's subconscious problem. The author must have faced some setbacks in her own life, and her instinct drove her to write like this... Finally, the above remarks are my own feelings. If it is wrong, please ignore it. I still like Xianda very much.

In the first 400,000 words, the eldest lady walks around, looks for the past, and finds the goal of coming to this world. It is a fantasy road story. Next, she has to show off her magical powers and complete her mission.

I still remember that when Jun Gui was first put on the shelves, there were a lot of complaints from readers and few people agreed with it. Fortunately, Xiaoxian's previous reader base is still there, and people still have expectations. Therefore, I wrote "Comment 1: The random flowers are gradually charming the eyes." After two weeks, the clues of Jun's return are gradually emerging. Although there are still different opinions, the reputation is gradually increasing, and I will make another "Comment 2: Xiao He has just revealed his sharp corners." From Li Yan's rebirth of ignorance to his first entry into Li's house, it should be said that the story has begun to get to the point. Many of the previous doubts have gradually begun to give people some direction or imagination, so from the beginning of "the flowers are gradually becoming more charming" to the current "little lotus is showing its sharp corners". Regarding the plot advancement, there seems to be still a lot of confusion and negative comments, especially from readers who have read the first draft. To be honest, this is my first time watching a female video, and I have never read the first draft, so I can't make this comparison. I'm just talking about my understanding of the current text. Personally, I still think the beginning of Jun Gui is very good. It uses the logic of events for the heroine to solve her puzzles and advances the plot development in an orderly manner. It feels a bit like a narrative montage, that is, the process is abridged, but the rhythm is strong and the logic is coherent. It may be that the text is not as good as the visuals of the lens after all, and the daily updates take a long time, making some people feel uncomfortable. I think such readers can subscribe daily and read it once every two weeks, and maybe they will get used to it. When we read literature, we generally want to feel pleasure. I remember a drama master said that pleasure usually comes from two sources. One is surprise, which is unexpected and reasonable; the other is superior, which is a sense of superiority, especially the superiority of IQ. For regular Internet articles, the most common ones are superior. For example, the slap-in-the-face article is a typical example. Of course, there are occasional surprises in this type of writing. For example, in Urban Rebirth, the protagonist failed to guess the next plagiarized song. This can be considered a bit of a surprise 😅. Also, spoilers too. The reader knows everything, but the characters are still confused and confused to make the reader laugh. These are all tricks to lower your IQ or act ugly to make readers feel superior and please them. As for Xiaoxian's Jungui, there are real surprises. Incomprehension, misjudgment, confusion, and confused expressions abound at the beginning. Isn't this an unexpected surprise? 😃In fact, some readers don't need to think too much and just follow the author's ideas. Of course, brain-burning is also fun, so take a closer look and guess. There is actually a lot to say about the prediction and analysis of specific plots. For example, the prophecy of the eldest daughter that just appeared and the inevitable dispute between Li Yan and Li Ruo, the conflict between the eldest son of the Li family and the third son who is regarded as the hope, and the partiality of Mrs. Chen is a bit like Ning Rong's second house 😅. There are many unanswered questions in front of me, and many new worries have been added. How long will it take to write this? Anyway, I won't write today. I have an appointment with someone to play ball. I'll see you all later! 😎

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After reading Xian Da's books, I really can't read any other online articles, including some of the works by the great master Platinum. I feel that there is too much foreshadowing, too many psychological activities, too many dialogues, and too much dialogue, and I can't bear it 😢 Book friends, do you have any recommendations for books that are as concise as Xian Da's?

Oh my god, I read it right. I actually saw an update today. I hope that my return will come true. Don't disappear suddenly. I don't dare to read the article, so I'll wait and see again. I'm afraid of being disappointed again. I'll cover my eyes and wait and observe. I'll see if it comes true.

The time waiting for the update is like sailing against the current. I hope I can quickly write my last song.

The title of the book is "You Are Returning", but after reading the beginning, it gives the impression that the return date has not yet been determined, and I don't know when will you slowly return? Xiaoxian's new book is like poking a hornet's nest. Controversies have never stopped since the beginning, and the focus is called "chaos". Why do some people find it confusing? It's just that there are too many clues and you don't understand, that is, you are being deceived. There are three basic questions in idealism: who am I, where do I come from, and where do I want to go. Generally, the routine of writing a book is to solve these three major problems in the first two or three chapters. The difference lies in how to achieve the goal of Qunar. A good book can be written about the process in an ups and downs, delicate and elegant manner, or with a wide range of imagination. For readers, what they care about is often this process, and they never have to consider the fundamental issues. In fact, the reader is equivalent to some kind of God's perspective and thoughts at this time. He has already seen clearly who the protagonist is, how he came to be, and what he wants to do, so he relaxes his mind. Whether it is the halo satisfaction generated by substituting himself into the protagonist, or the sense of intellectual superiority of overlooking the characters, it will give people a pleasant feeling. But does it have to be the same routine? "The King Returns" gives a negative answer. Li Yan was reborn, but his identity was in doubt; the maid came back from the dead, but no one knew about it. Pei Qing was in the dark, Chen Yanfeng had just entered the world, and no one knew who Li Yan was? Li Yan didn't know what he was going to do! So what if I traveled through time? , In fact, no matter who it is, wouldn't they be at a loss when traveling into a completely unfamiliar environment? Therefore, Li Yan can only passively follow to find the answer, and the plot will slowly unfold. As the saying goes, the good show is yet to come. Why is the beginning of "Jun Return" called "Squandering Flowers, Increasing Desire, Charming Eyes"? Ranhua refers to a variety of unknown wild flowers, just like the appearance of all living beings at the beginning of Return of the King; Gradual desire means gradually blooming and blooming, which is exactly the situation when clues appear one after another as the plot develops gradually; Charming eyes, it is foreseeable that the subsequent content will be exciting and dizzying; I believe Xiaoxian's skills can present what she wants to express one by one, let us look forward to it together. As for some doubts in the current plot, you will definitely find the answers in the following chapters. Of course, we can also dig deep into our minds in advance, which is also the fun of chasing books. For example, regarding Li Yan's body, quack doctors said she was pregnant, and good doctors said she was smooth and astringent, but the future was worrying. In fact, if you think about it from another angle, she was transported into the body of a dead person. How could she be completely integrated at once? The body has the injuries of the former owner's dying blood and vitality, and Li Yan's vitality. Isn't this what the doctor said? As her identity is gradually revealed, does it mean that Li Yan has replaced his former owner and recovered? There are still many questions, how was Yushu reborn? How to solve the mystery between the Pei family and Duoyunjian? How old is Chen Yanfeng? What impact did the dispute between the Huainan prince and his son have on Li Yan? Will the owner of Youjia be Li Yan? Is the Li family the Li family of Li Yan? Since it involves the world, could it be that the final throne was also created under the influence of Li Yan? Also, is the old magic stick Yu Shu really so powerful? 🥺 Every hexagram must be wrong? It is not difficult for a person to make a mistake once. What is difficult is to be wrong every time. It is never right! Can't write anymore

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Well, has it stopped again? 😁😁

I was so angry that I had to write a review! Who are those so-called great masters with profound skills! ! ! It actually convinces you to change the original beautiful text into something completely different! The previous plot arrangement of the character progression was both suspenseful, vivid and reasonable. How could it be changed to the current plot where every character is formatted, featureless and unpopular! Is this really the author's article? In the past, every book had very distinct and impressive characters, regardless of the protagonists or supporting characters. The previous version of this book vividly portrayed every character in just a few words. Why is it that in the new version, so many characters are turned into lengthy explanations of the background? ! ! Even when Jin Tong was eager to finish the article, he didn't fall to this! It was originally a new article that I was extremely looking forward to and I felt like the author was going further. How could it become what it is now? ! ! So disappointed! ! !

The updated fantasy classic sections and emotional sections of the climactic bloody battle in Chapters 248 and 249 are highly homogeneous with "The Lord of the Rings" + "Harry Potter", and the reference is very clever.

As spring comes and goes, the heat is tormenting. Waiting for the breeze, waiting for the rain, waiting for your renewal all day long!