Future Technological Power

I just read a few chapters of the novel and it is indeed a bit dull, especially the writing style needs to be improved! The plot also needs to be strengthened. There are basically no ups and downs. It perfectly explains what a running account is. There is nothing interesting at all... As for the character... I can't describe it well, jump? Some people may say that I have only read a few chapters and am not qualified to say what the author is like. The author will change it later, the writing style will gradually get better, and the plot will become more exciting. But I want to say that the beginning of a novel by a new author is the key point, and it must be the key point! Because the quality of the beginning will determine how many people will read the book, because you don't have the appeal of those great gods to keep readers waiting! In fact, there are many novels in Qidian that have a very exciting beginning, but the rest of the content is indeed carved from the same template, but the readers are very happy to read it while scolding the author Dashuibi. This is a good contribution to the beginning of the novel...

I saw the book review section of "Submit to the Country Wojiu"

A very novice article, a technical article without basic knowledge of physics and technology. The author is very capricious and writes whatever comes to mind. As a person who likes scientific articles, I was shocked.

Can the author add a little logic? Can this special artificial intelligence phone run? ? Can it be developed in less than an hour? ? ? How many pieces of scratch paper are used to record nuclear fusion? ? ? To be honest, even if you tell me that the electronic version of the information provided by the system will be fine, or the artificial intelligence will directly give you the electronic version and you can use it directly!

What the hell novel. He didn't do anything and ran to hand in the nuclear fusion information. Is a nuclear physics expert someone an ordinary person can meet casually? He is also a national-level scientific researcher. Not your average college professor. Just hilarious.

With controllable nuclear fusion technology, wouldn't the country desalinize seawater and then use pumps to pump the water into the desert and sprinkle it with sand? Anyway, there will be endless electricity by then. Can't we just filter the Yellow River at intervals, and then put the mud into the desert for greening?

It's too white, and the plot is very illogical.

You don't need to use your brain to read modern novels

I'm sorry I read five chapters, please forgive me for laughing out loud.

Alas, I felt very irritated while watching it. Although I knew I had to watch it without thinking, I couldn't stand it anymore. It made me feel irritable and I couldn't calm down at all. There were so many places where the logic didn't make sense.

It's a novice novel, the writing is not that good, the plot transitions are blunt, you can try it if you don't have the brain to read the words, but I quit after reading about ten chapters.

All I can say is that this book is suitable for beginners who are new to online writing. Old readers should not come here to find fault. Hahahahahaha

Why does this suddenly feel a little weird? You are married and you still call your wife not only by her first name but also her full last name? ? ? ?

You haven't even stepped out of the solar system and you're changing the universe? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I feel like I can write whatever I want. It makes me look confused.

Am I the only one who saw the jump from Chapter 2 to Chapter 5? Did the author eat the one in the middle?

No wonder it's not popular. What did you write? It's crappy.

At the beginning, if you turn on the black too hard, nuclear fusion will occur and the lifespan will be delayed. There is no pleasure of slowly upgrading, the sense of immersion is too poor, and the logic does not make sense.

I just saw that it has been blocked for two chapters. I will unblock it as soon as possible tomorrow. If the ban cannot be lifted, the author has no choice.

The pace is too fast and the starting point is too high. I will immediately persuade you to quit.

I am participating in the Qidian [Vote for Online Literary God-level Famous Scenes] event. The original text of the famous scene I submitted is as follows. Come and discuss it with me! Zhang Zhi turned on his phone and found a program with the Great Wall icon on the desktop {"LinkId":"883432641","LinkName":"515 Book Fan Festival-Famous Scene Voting","LinkUrl":"QDReader://ataru. Qidian. Com/noah/883432641?_Viewmode=1&nocenter=2&f=tg"}

The last few chapters have been a bit messy. The main character is less written and incoherent. Goldfinger has not paid attention to it for a long time. Come on

@, Congratulations. I saw "God Level System Mall" which is similar to this book. Someone "referenced" your book, which means you are going to become popular. . .

Can one paper produce controllable nuclear fusion? Do you know what nuclear fusion is? How can it be controlled? What are the difficulties? A Tsinghua University student could come up with it without any experiments and make something out of nothing. No one doubted it. That academician was not a fool. Or are we readers all fools?

To popularize science, the design of controllable nuclear fusion is not difficult, and there is more than one design plan. News Network also appeared more than ten years ago, and it appeared that it could be turned on for 1 minute. Recently, News Network said that it seems that it can be turned on for 1 hour. The temperature inside reaches 100 million degrees Celsius. Why can't it be put into use? Materials cannot hold up. The bottlenecks encountered by modern science are basically stuck in materials. Even the design of Chinese aircraft and other equipment is not inferior to that of Europe and the United States. The problem is still stuck in materials. Why does China still import Russian engines? I'll buy one and have a look. Is it okay? Is there any processing problem? China has a complete heavy industry, and processing is not a problem. The problem is the materials. The various alloy ratios of the materials, and the cost of testing them one by one is astronomical!

Those who progress quickly will basically collapse. Even if I get the information on the forum, I will give you the information on the spaceship. Do you understand? Do you understand? Can you understand how to create it? Many novels of this type contain information about nuclear reactors, and they want to build it the next day. At least nine out of ten novels of the same type have failed. Although scientific and technological novels are said to be based on a relatively reasonable basis, they are actually the results of a scientific research team for many years.

Science and technology articles, don't open a harem, this is a poisonous point

Chapter 10... The intelligent system takes over the building, but does the protagonist have voice prompts when others enter the building? Has the protagonist installed a voice device? The walls light up during biological experiments? ? Is there a holographic projection or a display screen installed? ? I'm tired, please describe the detailed process without being too long-winded or boring.

For such a good book, the author should be given some support. Aren't those who read pirated copies feel ashamed? If you can't afford the 50 yuan subscription for this book, it doesn't matter. At least you can give the author a reward of 10 yuan or 20 yuan. This way, at least the author can have the confidence to continue writing!

Asking the old bookworm for guidance The protagonist developed a new mobile operating system to make smart phones, replacing Apple. What impressed me most was when the protagonist built the headquarters, he introduced in detail one of the vertical S-shaped buildings. Then the protagonist also developed a new movie viewing mode and kept it there. Lost the care