Pirate's Vice Captain Heart

The author's writing is very good, the article is clear and fluent, the storyline is well-founded and well-founded, and the characters are true to the original work. In my opinion, it is really great. I hope you will continue to work hard. I will always support it (by the way, this is the only female video I read, and it is also my favorite among so many fanfics)

The author's writing is really great. To be honest, this is the first fanfic I like so much. I used to hate female fans (even though they are girls)

It looks great, keep up the good work

Good luck to the author, I'm just waiting for the update, it's so painful every time I wait for the updateww

I really like this book. Lin Xi and Luo are a really good pairing. Both of them have good and evil sides. The whole book is so sweet. I like it~~

It was okay to watch before the war, but I felt really uncomfortable after watching it. . . Maybe I've read too much Shuangwen and haven't converted yet. . . . .

Let me see how many men can't find good books on men's channels and come to women's channels

I read it with a bored mind, but I couldn't stop reading it. I was really impressed by the author's imagination. It's really good-looking and very in line with my taste. Luo is so handsome. I kind of like it. I'm going to watch One Piece again. So please give it a boost and update more. It's not enough. I'm really looking forward to the plot in the future!

This is my first time publishing a book review. I'm so excited. What should I say? Do you want to turn in your ass? So excited. I almost gave up on this book when I first started reading it. The prequel was too depressing. As I watched it later, I thought it was a bit interesting. The writing is pretty good and the plot is fast-paced but not sloppy. The love story between Lin Xi and Luo, and the love and death of Spades. The story of friendship with the Straw Hats. This book saved me from my book shortage. I give it ten thumbs up. I recommend you to read it. If you have the urge to abandon the book earlier, resist it first. Later you will find that you can't abandon it. 👍👍👍

A tattered book review. Because I don't know what I'm writing. First of all, the first thing that attracted me to this book is that it is a female pirate fanfic. To be honest, I have seen a lot of these in the past few years, but there has been nothing similar recently, so I went in to take a look out of curiosity. After clicking in, I felt so happy. The author's thinking in writing is clear, and the main body of the story in the early stage is not too out of the ordinary. The protagonist is not a super powerful being, and his early abilities are only beyond the power of knowledge and domineering. I really like the process of getting stronger step by step. Secondly, since we are fans after all, the plot line of Spades takes up a large part in the later stage. It has been interspersed in the main line of Pirates since the middle period, and it has almost become the main line in the later stage. I think this is a progressive process, and the author's description of this aspect is quite good. Then the idea of ​​traveling back and forth in the pirate world was played out by the author. I seriously doubt that the author allowed Lin Xi to travel back and forth just to see Luo. Well, that's how it is. Lin Xi's aura of immortality was also broken, although she didn't die. But I have only seen this phenomenon in male videos, and I have never seen it in female videos except for rebirth stories. The relationship between Lin Xi and Luo is progressing very quickly, which is considered relatively fast. Finally, the character creation was also very successful and well done. It's not like some fan fictions where the character wears this character's skin but doesn't look like a character at all. Overall, this book is very suitable for me. If you like this book, you can read it. I highly recommend it anyway.

It's quite interesting, but there are too many plots about the protagonist's original world and characters. When reading fan fiction, the original thing I want to see is a new plot created by the interaction between the protagonist and the pirate characters. And this book contains a large number of original characters, and they are people from the protagonist's original world. It is very refreshing at first, but gradually becomes unbearable later on. Another reason why I was persuaded to quit was the style. The original thrilling battle of wits and the passionate comedy of pirates were too conflicting and full of dissonance.

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It's been a long time, but I still can't find a One Piece fanfic with the same quality as this one. Ever since I read Heart of Heart, I won't read other fanfics.

It's just a bit unacceptable. Luo's disbandment of the Heart Group is a bit occ. Luo, Beibo, Pei Jin and Xia Qi grew up together and depended on each other. It's a bit strange to disband. There is also Rayleigh who takes him as his apprentice, which is also a bit occ.

It turns out that this is the legendary female channel. This is the first book we have read on the female channel. Congratulations on getting 4 recommendation votes every day~ The female channel vote that I have never voted for has a place to use~ Come on, author💪

Some information about the spirit-enhancing fruits will be placed here, and will be continuously added in the future. If you readers have any questions about the fruit's abilities, you can ask them here.

Regarding Armed Color Haki... Oda initially set Armed Color Haki to be colorless. It can be seen in the beginning when Rayleigh is teaching Luffy. Later, in order for readers to feel the domineering power more visually, I made it black (to be honest, it's really ugly). Since this is a novel, not a manga, the setting of Armed Color Haki is restored to Oda's original colorless setting.

Pikaro~Pica Pikaro~

Does any judge know whether the phoenix's name is Malgao or Marco? Not sure at all ( ´ﾟжﾟ｀ )

The setting of this book is so cool. If you read it before, you will know that you have a harem and you will know that you are brainless. The protagonist is so handsome. To be honest, if it weren't for the world of One Piece that restricted the author's performance, leading to preconceived resistance to the author, this is a magical book, and the author is encouraged.

True. Light novel. This is the real light novel. It has a very impetuous and perverted feeling. I don't really like this type of book. It's disgusting to read and not as interesting as a novel. For example, Chun Jiao and Zhiming are the same movies and light novels. .

Lin Xi, who has lost the memory of Spades, will definitely not be gloomy when staying next to the Straw Hat Pirates. So, has our great heroine, who is the possessor of transcendence, knowledge and color, changed her personality? Definitely not. So, can memory also be transferred? Or was Xiao Linxi forced to fuse and escape after killing the big boss?? So looking forward to it. I just thought, how much pain would another Lin Xi suffer after staying on Spade Island for two years? This Lin Xi reason has become a bubble in the hearts of Straw Hat and others. Once it is punctured, it will be reduced to ashes, and the pain will probably become even more painful... It must not be my biological mother!!!!

How can I put it, removing all the characters in One Piece will not affect the plot, so why write a fanfic?

Change the title of the book: Pirates of the Red Heart Mate

It's so funny that I unexpectedly became a chef after watching it.

Can you tell me which chapter the protagonist regains his memory?

When will the memory be restored

When will the author update?

A lot of men watch women's videos, and there's a huge shortage of books.

Is there any follow-up or extra? I really want to see it.