Live with Guns

As long as the protagonist is cool, cool, and tsundere, he will be more suitable just like Dante from Devil May Cry 4.

The inexplicable abilities of the protagonist are all given by others, and it makes me feel inferior. I always felt that there was something about it that made me not want to continue reading. After all, it's not unheard of for the protagonist to be a chess piece or a puppet, a god, a horse, a devil, and there are also many cases where the protagonist creates his own system~

Why are you still updating, why not TJ, haha

I saw a mentally disturbed protagonist, haha

It's only Chapter 50 and I already know the general plot of what's to come. The system was supposed to be a hidden thread, but it ended up being overtly revealed. I'm not good at writing.

This book can be summed up in one sentence: "If your IQ is not enough, please recharge."

What does this say? There are still people in the system who have given up their jobs and quit.

Http://u. Qidian. Com/z8DufroP Misaka No. 19090 Was experimented in advance, and was killed by Accelerator without any suspense. Death, this is Misaka's destined fate—— Misaka has a self, repeats her own destiny in different forms of existence, and in other forms in countless dimensions, but she has the desire to change her own destiny. Can Misaka girl's wish come true? Why would she have such an opportunity? Stay tuned——

. . . All I can say is. . Less swearing. . The writing style needs to be improved

It makes me laugh when I see the protagonist wearing a helmet and feel like others don't recognize him. Especially when the protagonist regards the helmet as a system effort, I really can't stand it. In the whole school, only the protagonist uses a gun, and almost no one else uses a gun. And the level is so low, who else besides the protagonist? Wearing a helmet is equivalent to not wearing it. It is basically the same as hiding one's ears and stealing the bell.

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It feels like a good book has been written to waste for you.

The narration needs to be strengthened. Conspiracies are really not suitable for Internet articles. After all, it is easy to make loopholes and it takes a lot of brainpower to explain. People who read Internet articles generally like to read cool articles.

There are too many meaningless dialogues between the protagonist and the system. There are also too many meaningless swear words and too many jokes when talking to others. It is a bit forced to be funny. The protagonist should behave normally even if he is like an ordinary normal person. He occasionally pretends to be X. The description of his character has one or two fixed small features that can highlight him as a protagonist. I feel that this protagonist has been successfully created. Remove the meaningless dialogue from the beginning of the chapter. The language should be more concise. If the plot is a little tighter, more people will probably watch it. Come on.

I recommend a riding and slashing novel I wrote, "The Riding and Cutting Horse Conquers the World" The game is an alien world, alternate history, Chinese style, pig's feet have a low starting point, and there is already a county. System people will not be summoned, only local people can be recruited to add extra attributes to them. It currently has 250,000 words. If you are interested, you can check it out.

Do all current student protagonists have this kind of personality? Are you too stupid? This relationship is really stupid. Are all students today like this?

Give the author some advice. I hope the protagonist can shout out the lines in the game when using skills. It is best to translate them later?

In almost every time-travel novel, as long as there is a shocking conspiracy, it is basically the order of the eunuch...