The King of Thieves in the Late Ming Dynasty

Recommended by Deposed Dragon, let me first talk about the logical issues in the first chapter. At the beginning, the eldest son of 16 or 17 is tied to a woman. Is this woman Guan Yu or Zhang Fei? Attacking Lingzhai requires thousands of officers and soldiers. Since heads are so valuable, why are there other bandits around to collect them? The battlefield in the opening chapter doesn't show Chu Wanli, a three- or four-year-old child. When his parents are dead, a man suddenly pops up, like a monkey who came out of a stone? ? It's useless to recommend anyone if you don't write carefully.

The writing is not good, it is too detailed and not detailed enough. The inner narration of a supporting character can take up half a chapter, and the climax is short and dull. It takes thirty chapters to kill the county magistrate, but when they get together to discuss how to kill the county magistrate, they discuss it for a few chapters in one go. The first time I read a novel, it was like listening to a sutra recited, making me feel drowsy and confused. But the author's plot design is excellent in all aspects. If the writing style can be improved, it will be a masterpiece.

How old is the protagonist? And those two girls? It makes my brain hurt to see it

The establishment of the Five Camps is generally based on the one built by Li Zicheng in Xiangyang in the 15th year of Chongzhen. Zhongying Commander-in-Chief General Quan Liu Zongmin, Tian Jianxiu Commander-in-Chief He Jin Commander-in-Chief Biao Qian Guoyi General Ren Jirong General Gouyi Wu Ruyi Zheng Weiwei General Zhang Nai Deputy Commander General Dang Shousu Zuo Weiwu General Xin Sizong Right Weiwei General Li You Xie Yinglong Yang Yanchang Luo Daien Zhao Yingyuan Zuoying Commander Liu Fangliang Deputy Commander Liu Xiyao, General Zuo Guoyi, Ma Shiyao, General Youweiwu, Liu Rukui, Ma Shitai, Zhang Hong, Wang Jincai, Liu Shijun, Hao Yaoqi, General Youying, Yuan Zongdi, General Zuo Guoyi, Bai Yuhe, General Youguoyi, Liu Tichun, Yuan Zongdao, He Dengyun, Ma Yunxiang, Li Furong, Ta Tianbao, General Zhiying, Gu Kecheng, General Zuo Guoyi. Xie Junyou General You Guoyi Tian Hu Hou Ying Zhi General Li Guo General Zuo Guoyi Zhang Neng General You Guoyi Ma Chongxi Li Laiheng He Lan Lu Yingbiao Gao Yigong Li Shiwei Wu Pingxiao

I can't stand it without getting hung up. The ancients relied on cold weapons for their profession, but modern people only know how to chop. It's hard to figure it out if you don't strengthen your professional abilities.

The characters in the author's works are chivalrous and courageous, and their children love each other. Let's travel back in time and appreciate the unique history of that era. It's like being in it. It can be called a masterpiece.

Author, you may have chosen the wrong title for your book. If you think you are a thousand households, you are not the king of thieves. And you can even get it wrong about what Li Zicheng was doing before the rebellion. He was obviously a postman, but who told you that Li Zicheng was an officer in the army? How did you check the information? That's it, you're still writing a novel, you're just writing blindly without doing your homework.

When I saw the name Chu Tianba, I felt that he was going to die. You didn't even bother to give him a name.

Chapter 1: Killing a tiger is nothing like melon skin

Be an emperor? Please do some capitalism.

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Men, there are always those days when you are not in good condition, so I will update tomorrow.

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You are a foreigner, one chapter is so short

I am not feeling well and need to take time off to adjust. I hope everyone understands.

Could you please stop talking so much nonsense at the beginning? Is it okay to rebel directly?

Got it! Why do you have to write such a novel with Li Zicheng and Gao Yingxiang who are relatives? Is he a good person? They harmed no less people than the Manchus!

After reading the first part, I always felt that the author wanted to write something big, but the writing style didn't seem to follow and it felt very empty.

Second post, well written, like it