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The heroine is too mentally retarded, and she is also an agent. The agent will cry when she sees it. At this level, she does not have the IQ of a smart person!

If you can't write the feeling you want, then don't set the character setting too high. Agents, every time you go to a strange place to perform a task, you have to understand the surrounding environment before taking action. Only in this way can you be comfortable in various environments. Even ordinary people will understand the environment first. How can people watch the heroine as a woman with only muscles and no brains?

It's a cool novel, but I didn't see the heroine as an agent at all. She was just a thug with a little scheming.

I hate the male protagonist in this article. He started to deceive the female protagonist. He used a fake face and a fake identity. He did not allow the female protagonist to do this or that. He also looked down on the female protagonist and thought she was not worthy of him. Haha, maybe when the heroine reveals her abilities like Chu Qiao, he will use the national justice to recruit the heroine to work for him and earn credit for his family.

In fact, the heroine has no future in this village. Even if she can make a fortune, she still has a father who is biased to the point of partiality, and a sister who steals money to frame her.

Author, what's wrong with you? Abandon the trap?

I'm just out of curiosity. The first book I joined Qidian in 2017 is still being updated. It has less than 500,000 words and is known as the "Great God's New Book". Is it still ranked first?

But think about the mayor and professor from a famous school who was deceived by a scammer and lost all his money...

As for the agent, there is definitely no problem in pretending to act. It is definitely not right to lose consciousness after hearing that the Ma family was arrested. And the agent has such a bad mind. He has died countless times. The author can look at the alien girl in ancient times. The heroine is called powerful. The one you wrote is a village girl with some skills. Khan

When I read Chapter 116, I always felt that Bi Anchang was very similar to Inspector Javier who was obsessed with chasing the protagonist in Victor Hugo's "Les Misérables" (also known as "Tears of the Lone Star"). He was a man who stubbornly adhered to his principles in a chaotic world, but betrayed his own conscience and morality because of the laws he upheld, and finally committed suicide. Hopefully this story can give them a chance to survive.

There's nothing wrong with the big idea, right? I feel like a primary school student. The heroine is an agent. What does an agent mean that you don't understand? Modern agents can still live happily in the primitive jungle. The heroine looks like a retard. How does she look like an agent?

Don't be a eunuch, I will send you the blade 😎

Be happy every day, have nothing to worry about, be happy however you want.

Updates have been discontinued since the National Day~ What happened? Is the author okay?

Is the author traveling? 🤔

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Emma, ​​have my comments been blocked? I can't discuss or analyze the characters.

I really don't like people, whether they are men or women, who use foul language at all times.

In Chapter 51, the male protagonist Shao Baitou has a fiancée. Because his fiancée mentioned that Shao Baitou hurt his so-called self-esteem, he ran away from marriage. Then the heroine is no longer a mistress?

Being bullied all the time, I was reduced to the bottom of the world, unable to fight back, and my character was still perverse and unconvinced. She doesn't know how to hide when she encounters trouble, but she still gets close to her. This heroine really can't stand it anymore. .

Is there something wrong with the heroine's design? Although I didn't see much of it at the beginning, as an agent, she often has to do special tasks such as seduction and so on (mentioned in the article). So can we speculate that the heroine has high EQ and IQ? Otherwise, how can she deal with the mission goals. Secondly, as an agent, he should be very careful, explore the environment by instinct, and be highly vigilant. However, the heroine in the article needs Lao Que to remind her of everything, such as the various flaws in the incident of framing Ma Qi. Although I don't know the agent very well, he shouldn't be as weak as the heroine, right? It feels like such an agent is exposed to the street every minute. If the author needs to create a character with good skills, wilderness survival skills, etc., He can be an adventure enthusiast with good skills, etc. The above only expresses my personal doubts and does not mean to disparage the author. I'm still reading the article, and I hope the rest will get better and better. 🌹