Hand-To-Hand Combat Expert

There are no flaws in the various chicken soups, the writing is excellent, the characters and plot are tightly integrated, and it is not a piece of shit! If this book can maintain its style, it will definitely become a great book!

In the Lingxiao Palace, Liu Bei looked at the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor caressed the male and female swords gently and said with emotion: "When I gave you this divine weapon, I didn't expect you to grow it much... After all, you were just a straw mat seller at the time and didn't have much money to buy materials. He stared deeply at Liu Bei and found that he really couldn't see through him. The Jade Emperor shook his head, "I didn't expect that you could practice it to this point, and even have 90% of the power of Xuanyuan Sword! ... Compared with Xuanyuan Sword, it's just a tiny bit behind! " Liu Bei remained silent, just waiting quietly for the Jade Emperor to finish speaking. "Awesome! Awesome! " Qihuo clicked his tongue and praised, "If it can be improved again, wouldn't it be another peerless sword? " Liu Bei was silent. He knows all this. "But..." The Jade Emperor changed the subject, "It's difficult, too difficult to break through this last line! ... Your sword incorporates your five strongest ways, so it needs to be refined with the five original divine flames for decades before it can become an existence like the Xuanyuan Sword. " The Jade Emperor looked at Liu Bei, but found that his expression had not changed much. The Jade Emperor couldn't help but said, "These five divine flames are crystal flame, Hunyuan flame, Fengluo flame, Tianxing flame and Sith flame. ... Except for the first one that I have, the remaining four are extremely rare and rare. Not even your ancestor Liu Bang had them! ! ... Do you understand? " Liu Bei looked at the Jade Emperor coldly and said slowly, "I have the last four. ... The only thing missing is the first one. " The Jade Emperor was stunned for a moment. How is that possible! ? Those four divine flames... How could he have them! ? Could it be Kong Ming? The Jade Emperor raised his head and couldn't help but ask, "You came to me just for the Crystal Flame? " Liu Bei nodded and said, "Yes, I came here just for the water experience.

This book is absolutely wonderful. It gets better and better from the ten or twenty chapters on. The more I write, the better. The more I read, the more addictive I become. I will collect it decisively, reward it, and subscribe. Boss, keep writing, work hard and write more, it's fun to watch

Hard work pays off, Niutou, don't be anxious because of your current results, it's still early, take your time, if you keep at it you will get ahead one day.

As a junior high school student who scored 130 points in the Chinese language test, I have to lament that there are so many people in Qidian who have not graduated from elementary school. 1. This book tells stories about the supporting characters surrounding the protagonist, just like One Punch Man. 2. Each character is vividly drawn and has a distinct personality. Each story is written in an immersive way, and the language skills are solid. 3. Repeating chapters does not mean that there is no update, and it does not affect our reading. 4. The protagonist traveled to this world because of trying out a virtual helmet, not an online game novel. 5. The protagonist does not sweep the world, gets treasures without going to a latrine, and encounters beauty without going to the streets. It's a really good novel. I hope the author will not give up. Maybe he is not alive now, but there will be a day when he will become popular.

There is a question, that is why you are afraid of cold poison when you are immune to all poisons. In addition, I personally feel that the rhythm of the plot is a bit ups and downs, and it is a bit far from the main plot (bloodbath of the Jin family, saving the world). This is just my personal opinion.

I feel so helpless after reading Niu?'S remarks. Niu? Always pops. Poor baby. Nowadays, all Qidian's books are ugly, writing them is hard work, and even the best authors have made money and run away.

The last sentence of the introduction is "It's better to heat a pot of good wine." I read it several times in conjunction with the previous article, but I always feel that something is wrong. So why not change it to "It is better to heat a pot of good wine"... Well, that's probably what it means.

Why did you let Xiao Jin die? Sorry author, I will go and feel sad first.

As for the prostitute plot, I'll be honest, I didn't understand what you wrote. Even if she accidentally saved the protagonist, her starting point was to make money. According to the character of the protagonist before, she was determined to kill him without mercy, and now she went to take revenge. Just because doctors use prostitutes to do evil, I think it is a bit far-fetched

The eighth set of broadcast gymnastics? What the hell?

These two chapters are too sensational.

I came here after seeing an advertisement. How can I say it? The writing is quite good, but the plot moves a little too fast. There is nothing else, no flaws, but here comes the point. The general environment of this book is too depressing and I can't stand it. Come on, author, the writing is very good. Really.

That golden thing is so annoying. If you write like this before, you will lose a large number of readers. . . Unless you have the patience to read on

Don't pay too much attention to the author. It's difficult to agree with others. You can listen to the suggestions of book friends, but what's more important is your own ideas. I wish the author all the best.

From this we can see that the author's daughter is afraid that she will not be able to get married, and her father-in-law is too complicated inside!

This time I came in after seeing a mineral water advertisement. . . . . . .