The Supreme Hero of the City

Poor, the systematic writing is like prose, stiff! The expressions in the sentences are too stiff and difficult to read, there are many typos, and there are many places where the sentences are not fluent. Strictly speaking, many of the sentences are wrong! A systematic article feels like a third-person chronicle article. The first chapter is not attractive to read. Needless to say, it is still a bad article! Is the threshold for writing novels really so low now? Everyone is writing books.

I can't watch it, I can't watch it, it's terrible, it's all tm harem, the harem novel is not like the harem novel, the godly novel is not like the godly novel, but the writing style is not that good. When the gangsters are looking for trouble, where is your bodyguard? There are so many decorations! Your subordinates can help you with many things at home. Are those people abroad fake? Nm has to go up on his own, especially when he comes back from abroad and counts all the tm harem articles. Then what about Liu Ruyan? There are a lot of them later. At the beginning, one was Xu Mei and the other was Shen, and the other one could still be read. Ever since I returned to China, I really couldn't watch it after taking it. I watched the whole harem jump and I couldn't watch it anymore. It's so poisonous.

If you are a system that is harmful to Blue Star, I will definitely die with you. When I saw this sentence, I almost died laughing in the toilet, okay? 😅

The first few chapters made me dizzy and I didn't understand... This is Shui Wen, but I didn't understand it. Do you believe it?

I don't know when it started, but the protagonist of the urban novel had a strong smell of diaosi.

I just want to write like this, just yy to the end, what's the matter, what else do you want to read when you read a novel, do you pretend to understand? If you don't like watching it, that's it

I can't stand it even after I haven't finished the first three chapters. I can't bear to be punished and don't complete the task. Who in the right mind can do such a thing? The author's brain circuit is awesome. I won't try the poison later.

This book is poisonous. This poison is so poisonous that it seals my throat. I only read 20 chapters and I almost died from the poison.

I didn't make it through two chapters, it's so rubbish.

Chapter 30: Persuading people to quit. Those who were able to tolerate it during the previous live broadcast, but what age are they? They still write about fighting and killing. How heartless it is!

Leaving aside logical issues, the most important thing is that there are so many typos that I am speechless. Can any messed-up person write a novel now?

Author: Actually, you don't have to write every woman so innocently. Just write it according to reality. You don't have to accept every woman and just make friends. Have you ever read "The Little Rich Is Safe" and "I Want to Rent Myself". I feel that these two are more realistic.

The most annoying and punishing system text

I will convince you that it takes 3 chapters to write about picking up a car.

Harem Wen gives up decisively, goodbye

To be honest, I didn't understand it at the beginning, so I canceled it.

In many urban novels, the protagonists are diaosi. The most incredible thing about system novels is that the protagonist becomes that system as it is written 😂😂😂 As for the protagonist written by the author, the feeling is the same whether it is a different person or not. Since the protagonist likes to communicate with the system, it's difficult to write. Don't make the system come alive, don't give it emotions, it's just a program.

😥The introduction poisoned me to death.

Elementary school level, not suitable for old bookworms

The author, Kavin, is great. He writes too much about many things, which makes him look dull and I have no desire to read any more.

Excuse me, where are the missing ones? It looks like they are not connected, so I can see a gap.

The writing style of this book is quite poor among Shenhao's novels. Although you can't use your brain when reading God's novels, at least you can tell the story clearly. In this way, readers will have the patience to read on. This book can't even tell a clear story, and it really doesn't attract readers.