Planning the Three Kingdoms

The writing style is okay, and the author's skill is gradually increasing, but the problem is that the novel you wrote is not a history test. The plot is really bland, the high-level C is not very exciting, and the plot is very dragging. A medium-sized battle has hundreds of chapters, and more than 1k chapters are still fighting Yuan Shao. It is really a weak plot. I hope the author can grasp the rhythm of the plot and the strength of the gc in the next book. Don't foreshadow hundreds of chapters and end the gc in half a chapter.

Taishi Ziyi was highly skilled in martial arts, skilled in bow and horse, and was an expert archer. He would draw his bow from a distance, throw a small halberd from a short distance, stab with a spear from a close distance, and draw his sword close to his body. On the battlefield, he would strike from all directions without any blind spots! Extremely strong

After reading the last few chapters, I feel very tired. The little overlord ties his own hands and has to pursue the kingly way so perfectly. In the end, it is the so-called aristocratic families who benefit.

It's too slow. After reading more than 180 chapters, he walked out of his home and became Yuan Shu's number one general and captured Jingzhou. There is no climax in the whole story. Most of the world is in water, introducing some things. The only highlight is Yueying Loli. It's a pity to abandon the typical boring story of Shizhi. It's too bland to continue reading. Nearly a hundred chapters are about fighting a city. It's dragging to death, and it doesn't have the domineering power of Little Overlord. It's a pity to abandon it. The writing is still very good, but it's too bland, too bland, too bland. The protagonist gives the impression that he is incompetent in literature and martial arts, which is annoying to those who watch. But I have to say that the writing is really good, and it has a lot of flavor if you savor it carefully. However, I really didn't have the patience to read it and fell asleep while reading it. Moreover, the characteristics of Soochow's good lolita are not shown. In the early stage, Gongsun Zan and Bai Mayi were obviously superb from Zhao Zilong. After looking at the list below, they were not even supporting roles. Most of them were just passers-by who could not be identified at first glance. Only by looking through the history books did we know that they were talents with some ability. And this Tai Chi is really low. Although I don't care, it's not very good at all. Anyway, I can't see the fame and shadow of the little bully Sun Ce. If you have the patience to read it slowly, it is still a good book. I personally like it after reading so many chapters. Of course, the more words the better when it comes to stimulating Wang Wen, who I like. But forget it, quit and send this book review. Think about it, it is just like that. The book is indeed good, but whether you can taste it depends on the person, whether that person has the patience to taste it. All in all, it's a good story. There are no big problems. It's just too bland. The timeline is too long and it's still entangled in a city for dozens of chapters. It's also too focused on peripherals, supporting characters, inner activities, side characters, and too many descriptions of the chaotic world. After reading the book reviews, I feel that this book is the kind of book that is steady and steady. There are not too many successes followed by mistakes. Everything is just right, as if someone gave me a pillow when I fell asleep. Forget it, I don't want to comment on the book anymore, I'm leaving. We don't have much culture and we can't say that I have a short family. In short, the book is good and the rating is moderate. It is inappropriate to be too high or too low.

It's a very good historical novel. For a person like me who is not satisfied, I have already read more than a hundred chapters 😄

This book is indeed the best Three Kingdoms book I have read, but there are still some shortcomings in it. I have to express my humble opinion from the bottom of my heart. I hope the author can write better and better. Even if Sun Ce's men will not die, I think it is a bit deviated from reality. It is like cheating in a game. No matter how strong the military commander is, it is impossible for a person to not get sick, be killed by a hidden arrow or a mistake.

Alas, a good book is a good book, but it is a bit watery and slow in pace. I bought more than 700 chapters first, but when I got to almost 700 chapters, I felt that I had no motivation to continue reading. Although it ended today, I was a little uninterested in watching the rest. Maybe the later parts will be more exciting, but the first part really drags on the pace. Starting from the third volume, I feel that the first part is still quite interesting. I hope the author's next work won't be so slow-paced. I dislike books that drag on for a long time. Thanks to the author for the book.

I haven't watched it yet. Why is there no big Joe among the characters? May I ask where Big Joe belongs?

The writing is okay, but it feels a little watery. After reading Chapter 1500 in a few days, I finally killed Yuan Shao. In fact, judging from the time of the Three Kingdoms, the protagonist's progress is quite fast. It only took three years from the beginning to becoming the strongest force in the Three Kingdoms (defeating Yuan Shao). If we really look at the progress of the time traveler, it is very fast compared to other books, but from the reader's perspective, it is not felt at all. There are too many chapters, and although the descriptions are very detailed, the advancement of the historical plot feels too slow. I feel good about reading it this time. After all, the book is finished and there are enough chapters to read. But as soon as I stop, I feel that it is not so attractive when I look back. It just feels like it's not attractive enough to keep people updated, and it doesn't have strong reader appeal. This book has cost me more than 8,000 starting coins so far. . . In short, the author's writing style is pretty good and the details he describes are very good and many. But as many book friends have commented, there are too few climaxes, or the climax is not high enough? I hope the author will have more books in the future waiting for my progress.

I like this book very much and don't want to finish it so soon. I hope Lao Zhuang will continue to write stories about conquering beyond the Great Wall, Korea, Japan and even Central Asia after Sun Ce unified it. Look at Kong Ming, Zhong Da and others shining brightly in the future.

First of all, I would like to say that I like this book very much, and I am not here to mess with it or use it to gain leverage. Regarding the issue of Gao Shun's place of origin, I also communicated with the author of that book in the review section of another Three Kingdoms novel. Gao Shun's birth in the same state seems to have become a convention and everyone's default setting. But my opinion is that Gao Shun is not from Bingzhou. Looking at the historical materials that record Gao Shun, he and his "trapped camp" appeared relatively late in Lu Bu's army, only appearing on the battlefields of Yanzhou and Xuzhou. It is speculated that Gao Shun is more likely to be Zhang Miao's old tribe who was absorbed by Lu Bu, and I think his native place is Hanoi. 1. First of all, there is no clear historical record or at least tenable arguments that can allow people to speculate to support Gao Shun's birth and merging the state. There was a lack of outstanding infantry generals in Lu Bu's Bingzhou group, so Gao Shun was able to show his prominence after absorbing the remnants of Zhang Miao's troops. After all, the trapped camp requires a lot of money and time to train elite soldiers. Lu Bu would not have had this capital in his previous movements. It is only more reasonable during the 3-4 years of Yan and Xu. At the same time, the camp was recorded in historical materials during this period. 2. The Bingzhou Group is a force mainly composed of cavalry. It would be very strange if there was such an elite infantry unit as the trapped camp when the state was merged (and it was probably heavy infantry with "well-equipped armor and fighting equipment"). It would not be necessary to spend money on infantry training to fight against grassland civilization, right? Then the fact that the trapped camp is the original troops of Lu Bu's Bingzhou Group is not very tenable. 3. It is more likely that Gao Shun and Hao Meng are from the same hometown. There is probably a sentence in the record of Hao Meng's rebellion: "I heard the sound of children in Hanoi" (because I didn't check the historical materials, I just relied on memory), and Gao Shun immediately judged that Hao Meng rebelled. And this also shows that Lu Bu did trust Gao Shun at least at that time, and his first reaction was to go to Gao Shun. Hao Meng was from Hanoi and belonged to Sili at that time. According to the record, "Bu Cong Meng turned back and became more docile" Why? In ancient times, fellow villagers had a relatively close relationship. Hao Meng and Gao Shun "are in each other's state". Therefore, Lu Bu also became wary of Gao Shun after Hao Meng rebelled. Otherwise, it doesn't make sense why Lu Bu was alienated from Gao Shun after the Hao Meng rebellion. Wouldn't it be strange if Lu and Gao were from the same hometown of Bingzhou? It is more likely that Lu Bu originally trusted Gao Shun, but because Gao's fellow countryman Hao Meng rebelled, he began to alienate Gao Shun, who was also from Hanoi. This conjecture will be more tenable. Of course, it makes sense to think that Gao Shun was from Yanzhou. After all, his recorded battles began on the Yanzhou battlefield. The material I read was a long time ago, so I may have remembered something wrong. I hope Lao Zhuang Hai will correct it. 4. Regarding the control of falling into the camp. After Hao Meng's rebellion, the camp fell under Wei Xu's control. It can also be seen that the Bingzhou group did not trust these late entrants. Therefore, Wei Xu, who was born in Bingzhou and was Lu Bu's relative, managed such a combat-effective infantry unit, which seemed to be in line with Lu Bu's character. Again, this is purely a personal opinion, and Lao Zhuang and fellow book friends are welcome to discuss it together. I still have some unfinished words, so I'll leave them to you when we chat.

If a war breaks out, the imperial court will definitely lose. All the famous generals are in Sun Ce's camp.

Jungle Warfare Fight blitzkrieg, fight guerrilla warfare, fight harassment warfare, and fight tug-of-war. Blitzkrieg, as the name suggests, is as fast as lightning. It can move away with one strike. Use the strongest force to quickly attack the opponent's weakest point, and then move away with one blow, or defeat the enemy with one blow. This is Blitzkrieg. Guerrilla warfare means not guarding one city or one place, but looking for fighters everywhere on the land, blooming everywhere, attacking at multiple points, dispersing and weakening the enemy's strength, and preserving one's own strength. This strategy is best for weak situations or situations of equal strength. Harassment warfare means never confronting the enemy's main force head-on, letting the enemy chase you, seriously weakening their morale and depleting their reserves. Fighting means spending money. Soldiers need food, pay, weapons, and equipment. In other words, a war has various needs before it can be truly launched. The more people there are, the more things are consumed. If you use a very small number of people to harass the opponent day and night, temporarily eliminate the opponent's scouts or small groups of troops, temporarily burn the opponent's logistics and food, and even attack the opponent's subordinates, leaving the enemy in panic for a long time, then no matter how powerful the enemy is, they will be overthrown bit by bit. This tactic is very insidious, but it requires a relatively long time. Suitable for use when you are completely weak. Tug of war is very insidious and can be used when you are weak and strong. But the only condition is that you must make the enemy believe that you and he are similar or extremely different in strength. This tactic can be used in both attack and defense. Without a head-on collision with the enemy, drag the enemy to death, bite hard when the opponent is relaxed, and quickly break away when the opponent counterattacks. However, it does not follow the opponent far away, but like a see-saw, using the persistent method to fight the opponent. If the enemy retreats, then advance, if the enemy advances, retreat, if the enemy is weak, attack, and if the enemy is strong, follow. 🤓

It seems that I somewhat understand the reasons why Lao Zhuang's book is not popular: first, the title is too poisonous 🤭; second, this book is not a hegemony novel, all the supporting characters have online IQs, and it does not seem to be as enjoyable as a systematic novel or a fictional novel 😏; third, it doesn't matter Whether it is a description of a character or a deep inner monologue, you need to calm down and read this book. People are so "impetuous" nowadays 😡😡 A little bit of my own reflections, please forgive me for any inappropriate comments. Everyone is also welcome to fill in.

Are the titles from the previous dynasty still useful in the new dynasty? The emperor is wise? At least Sun Ce proved it. Follow Sun Ce and have the power of following the dragon

The character of Tian Feng, Lao Zhuang, is truly lifelike. History books say that Tian Feng Zhongjun dared to remonstrate with Yuan Shao, so he was executed after his defeat. At that time, I still felt that Yuan Shao brought it upon himself and deserved the defeat of Guandu. After Lao Zhuang dealt with this, Tian Feng became one of the spokespersons of the Jizhou faction. No matter how honest and straight he spoke, his suggestions were born with the label of the Jizhou faction in Yuan Shao's eyes, and he would take checks and balances into account when making decisions. In addition, Tian Feng is stubborn and outspoken, and always relies on his old man to seduce Yuan Shao, which reasonably explains Tian Feng's own character flaws. If Yuan Shao and I were to be in the same place, I would not like him even if I knew that what he said was reasonable. Thinking about it this way, it is not incomprehensible that Yuan Shao would execute Tian Feng in history. Of course, from this point of view, Lao Zhuang can be regarded as bringing to life Yuan Shao's character traits of being indecisive, lenient on the outside and taboo on the inside. This character creation skill is rare among the writers of Qidian.

After reading Chapter 80, I can't stand it anymore. It's good for newcomers to the Three Kingdoms. It's a fun read for newcomers, but I, a fan of the Three Kingdoms, find it uncomfortable to read it. In the first place, everyone who is loyal is called the lord. Just look at the big deception of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Secondly, during the Qin and Han Three Kingdoms, a single person was called a noble, and then he was a base. If you don't believe it, just read it. There is no two-character name for a romance about deceit. The third chapter, Military Generals in Troubled Times, has a higher status than civil servants. The special status of the Three Kingdoms is basically the same. It would be strange if you despise military commanders and try not to chop them off. Fourth, I feel that recovering military generals is too trivial. You can rely on words to recover civil servants, but can you recover military generals with just a few words? Look at Lao Cao accepting Guan Yu (don't believe the big deception about the sworn friendship between the three Taoyuan brothers, it's nonsense), the general has the pride of a general. Generally speaking, the author's writing and plot are okay, but for an old bookworm like me, it's just not interesting. Look at Cao Cao's thief cheating and forcing pig's feet to subdue the old man's promotion. You can't find anything wrong with it. Even I was moved by it, haha.

Let me tell you, first of all, I was pleasantly surprised when I read the previous chapter. It felt like it was a magical book. I probably saw Conquering Taishi Ci and felt that it was really not rigorous. It deliberately lowered the protagonist's strength. In the early stage, he was all kinds of pretentious, and Xu Zhu and Dian Wei joined forces to catch arrows with bare hands. Obviously, he wrote to Liu Bei to send 500 men to cover the withdrawal, and when he went to rescue him, he recognized Xin Zhi and almost killed him. Later, Sun Jian was surrounded by Yuan Tan, who lured the protagonist to rescue him. When he saw it, he didn't recognize him, and even asked questions before chasing him. The same goes for Yuan Tan, the enemy commander. If you don't want to kill him, it will affect his development. You can defeat him and drive him away. He will chase him to death and kill him, vowing to behead him. Another committed suicide in the swamp and pretended to be a holy mother to save him. Then he forced to explain Taishici was described as so unbearable, associating with bandits, assassinating, and forcibly lowering the force, and then subduing and re-employing subdued a lot of military generals. The four great military governors of Sun Wu were all handsome. In the war, he still brought a small number of troops to support him. The battle line of thousands of miles relied on the protagonist to lead the guard battalion and thousands of soldiers to create miracles. All famous generals and marshals guarded the home. It doesn't matter how many Jiangdong soldiers he leads kill, as long as the enemy general has a name, and if he is defeated, he will let them all go, even if others don't appreciate it. The trebuchets and ballistas in the early stage were all gone in the later stage. I fight with 200 men and fight tens of thousands of people. At the beginning, I said that everything is bullshit in the face of absolute strength. Then I will lead 13 cavalry, 200 cavalry, and after 5,000, I will fight 40,000. In the early stage, there were some crossbows and trebuchets. I have been researching the oxen batch at home, but I haven't seen any use. A group of bodyguards are equipped with various masters and fierce generals. They are not allowed to fight independently and are used as bodyguards.

I have never understood why the Three Kingdoms novels must pay so much attention to the so-called famous counselors and generals? The only difference between them and ordinary people is that they have not received systematic training and have a prominent background. I was thinking about the hegemony novels of other dynasties that do not have all kinds of famous counselors and generals. How come the Three Kingdoms turned into a stage for these disgusting counselors and generals!

The character of the protagonist is hypocritical, very wretched, and very kind to his enemies. He cuts the grass without eradicating the root, and waits for his descendants to grow up. What about revenge? Why did Qin fall? ! Isn't it because of the survivors of the Six Kingdoms? The benevolence of a woman, hypocrisy of benevolence and righteousness, and giving away a daughter! Extremely poisonous! ! !

The more I watch, the more I feel that the protagonist's goal is unclear or too naive! The protagonist established a feudal dynasty, but allowed a lot of things that threatened the imperial power to exist. Allowing the harem to interfere in government affairs, and allowing relatives in the harem to interfere in government affairs, I really don't know whether to be naive or stupid!

Um, I was poisoned by his Tai Chi moves as soon as I entered the trap, so I really want to give you a suggestion. This is really the biggest poisonous point of this book. The author has probably read too many Jin Yong novels. You can just inherit Sun Ce's martial arts talent. Why use Tai Chi to make people look very dramatic? Yes, it is very dramatic. Fighting on a real battlefield is not child's play. I'll give you that now. The Tai Chi gymnastics I learned on behalf of me feel like child's play. Tai Chi is a method of maintaining health, and the eighth level is a killing skill. It is often said in the traditional martial arts circles that "In ancient texts, Tai Chi calms the world, and in martial arts, the eight extremes determine the world." You say you practiced eighth level boxing or other martial arts before time travel, and you can use it to brag. If you use health calisthenics to brag about how powerful you are in fighting, the key point is that you can still accept it when you beat ordinary people. You are Use health-preserving fists to defeat the powerful warriors of the Three Kingdoms. In ancient times, they were all fierce generals who charged into battle. The key was to show off their skills, which is really poisonous. 😅 Although the novel can be edited in any way, it still needs to be based on reality. After all, you are not writing a martial arts or fairy tale science fiction novel. This poisonous point can really dissuade some old bookworms, and I guess novices will not be affected by it. I feel that it is a drama. Ten years ago, I probably would not have felt that it was a drama. I have read historical articles for ten years, and I may prefer rigorous ones. Except for the poisonous point of Tai Chi and the emotional drama, this book is really good in other aspects. The writing and plot are very good. I hope the author will get better and better ✊ I think that if there is more one who can write good novels, there will be no book shortage.

When the protagonist met Cao Cao alone, he couldn't kill him immediately. He was still hesitant, thinking that Cao Cao could not threaten him! Congratulations to the protagonist, Cao Cao thought the same way when he faced Liu Bei. As a result, Liu Bei became Cao Cao's lifelong enemy! The protagonist is sometimes decisive and ruthless, and sometimes very indecisive!

The protagonist is too kind to the enemy. He would rather sacrifice the life of his own soldiers at any time in exchange for the enemy's "sincere" surrender. The enemies are willing to fight with the protagonist. If they win, they will kill the protagonist. If they fail, they can surrender and continue to be an official and have glory and wealth. Even the enemy has said hello to the protagonist and wants to surrender to the protagonist, but they just want to kill one more time and win. It doesn't matter if they fail anyway. The protagonist will accept him generously and continue to be an official. If he succeeds, the rewards will be great.

A well-written novel!

The subject matter is good, there are relatively few stories about the Wu Kingdom in the Three Kingdoms, and the writing content is also very detailed, but there are too many poisonous points The plot in the book is too watery, and the opening of more than a hundred chapters cannot finish a battle for the city, and the plot development is too slow. Writing online articles is not for you to write a diary Since you have already written about the harem, why do you pretend to give away your daughter? Either have a single heroine, or take them all, no top, no bottom, like that? It's okay if you like young women, but how about a start where the husband is still there? Sun Ce is the main character in the novel. The personality difference is too big. Sun Ce's domineering power is not shown at all, but his vulgarity is fully shown. It is understandable to follow the king's way, but the king's way is to give kindness and power at the same time. In the end, you have given a lot of kindness, but you can't see the power at all. You have turned into a working emperor For the sake of word count, let's just feed a tiger into trouble. Enemies are friends. You have understood it through play. You can understand it by writing 2600 chapters of the Three Civil War Either kill the second brother Sun, or exile him, and keep disgusting readers. There are reasons for poor grades. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Very poisonous! This novel is so frustrating to read. Zhu Gong has been scheming against the Sun family and his son, and is constantly plundering their wool. No one under his generals listens to him. As for the protagonist Sun Ce, he sends troops, food, weapons and supplies, and finally gets Zhu Gong's complaints. There is no benefit at all, and he still works hard without complaint. I really can't stand reading this, it's so frustrating. And the one written about Sun Jian is like a brainless and reckless man. He just died when the court asked him to? Sun Ce will do whatever Sun Jian asks him to do? In this case, why are you writing so verbosely? Why not just ask the court to issue an imperial edict to kill Sun Jian and his family? These are troubled times, who else listens to the imperial court's will? Which prince still takes the imperial decree seriously? This protagonist is written with hypocrisy and righteousness. Why is he willing to give up fighting for world hegemony for the sake of the common people? It's funny!

I don't understand why Sun Ce told Zhou Yu that I want to dominate the world just after time travel. This is too ****. At this time, the Han Dynasty still has influence, and being loyal to the Han Dynasty is still politically correct. He dares to say it so boldly. Even if he is of the same mind, he should at least express surprise at Sun Ce's ambition. No, nothing.

What about your group? I found that they use crowdfunding to reward silver. They posted an announcement that the CD bank can get one. I don't believe that so many people can't raise a single silver.

Lao Zhuang, you are so ridiculous, hahaha. Waiting for the follow-up, here are 8 recommendations. All 4 monthly passes will be given to you this month.