My Wife Is a Valkyrie

The protagonist just puts on a face that the whole world owes him, doesn't find it any fun, and keeps fussing over trivial matters every day. The subject matter is good, but the plot is lackluster: As a time traveler, I haven't done anything meaningful, just forcefully unlock and upgrade. How is this different from the natives?

The plot is good, but the protagonist is annoying. He keeps talking about the 21st century, time travel, and another world, for fear that others will not know about it... Secondly, in a world dominated by force, as the tenth valkyrie under the only Martial Saint, she is forced to retreat at every turn by some gadgets. I wonder if the power of this Martial God is due to her appearance...

He said he had no dignity after time travel, what kind of victim was he? But what about the male protagonist's behavior? He cursed others when the female protagonist refused to let him have sex in the wedding room, and even pretended to be 13 and asked the female protagonist to stab him to death. You don't want to lose face, you are extremely shameless. If he is not happy about eating, drinking and having fun every day, the male protagonist must be thinking like this, "I am a dignified loser. I can't eat and drink enough, but I still want to play. If I am not allowed to play, then you are trampling on my dignity." Such remarks are clearly expressed in the article, which is extremely shameless.

The poison, the real poison, is actually the poison of the legendary Seven-Star Begonia!

It's not passionate, it's not iron-blooded, it's not domineering, it's not passionate, all it sees is trash, disgusting, incompetent, this book is too poisonous~

I would like to make a suggestion, don't always talk about the 21st century, it is too easy to cause drama.

The male lead is really useless, the emotional scenes are like nothing, it's a disgusting mess.

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Okay, I've finished writing it at least.

The author refuses to admit that the protagonist is a soft-boiled person, so the writing is extremely difficult to pronounce. It is probably a reflection of the author's heart!

This is another story about an abusive protagonist. He always lives in frustration and never kills people. The protagonist should be dead.

I think the protagonist can endure until one day his strength and power surpass his wife, and then find an opportunity to kill his wife and her children, and then design to get rid of all the people and all forces related to his wife, and promote his wife's evil and cruelty all over the world, so that she and related forces will forever be placed on the pillar of shame in history.

Which one of Tianxia3 is Ye Lingchu's prototype (Donghuang Taiyi, Yujizi~~) Can the author explain it to you?

It looked fine at first, but it turned out that this golden finger made me poisoned.

No comment on good or bad. Next time I write a book that relies on my own IQ, relying on a notebook will lose some meaning.

The settings are okay, but the aspect of making hot pot is poisonous to me. One second I was bullied at my wife's parents' house, and the next second I started making hot pot. Feeling so embarrassed

Who is the man in green in Chapter 207? Is he the protagonist of a certain future timeline? I don't understand.

Just copy it, my wife is the female sect leader. The previous plot is similar

Am I the only one who thinks the early stages of this novel are boring?

This just represents my personal opinion on part of the plot of this book. Hope it will be interesting later. The author worked hard on coding. You will lose a lot by traveling through time, and traveling through time itself is a disaster. So there is nothing wrong with the male protagonist being the victim. He was slept with (so the male protagonist lost his virginity, yes, that's right! Fortunately, he wasn't pregnant.), And then the male protagonist was almost silenced (at least that's what the male protagonist thought), and then he was forced to get married, and was married off (I personally don't have any objection to this, after all, he has traveled through time, why do he care about these small problems?), And was forced to restrict his freedom. In this process, the male protagonist has always been on the receiving end, and then the male protagonist's psychological endurance is beyond the limit (he can't help himself, it's like being exiled to a strange country and feeling like a slave). In the end, the male protagonist got angry and showed his big (small) chauvinism (from this, it can be seen that the male protagonist is not mature enough and does not know how to have fun, or this is a strategy of the male protagonist.), And roared at the female protagonist. (The male protagonist still cares about the female protagonist. If he didn't care, he would not express himself in front of the female protagonist. Instead, he would endure it and stay away from each other until there is a chance in the future.) It's all normal here, and he actually eats hot pot later, so it's acceptable even if the male protagonist has a weird personality. Then I have a twist! ! ! What the hell is it that suddenly the male protagonist is cheating? ! It looked so miserable at the beginning, and then suddenly it was revealed that the male protagonist actually has a small notebook! There is an amazing system inside! What the hell is a system that has a harem-like rhythm? ! Then what's the use of describing so many tragic plots in such detail? 😅 Is this paving the way for the male protagonist's darkening? Then there is the plot of entering the sect. I was completely confused about the development after entering the sect. He made a brilliant debut when he first came on, and acted in a high-profile manner without any strength (at this time, I like to play low-key, play missing, pick up a hidden little girl's ring in passing, accidentally enter the forest of monsters and meet beautiful monsters, buy a mythical beast that others regard as an ordinary little animal, secretly travel around the mountains and rivers, make friends with various potential stocks, and practice silently). But in this book, the protagonist relies on words to get through the battle in a world where strength is paramount (understanding the spirit). This is not impossible. After all, everything is a setting and can be accepted rationally. I'm turning a corner! But I don't know what others think. Anyway, I can't accept it emotionally. You think it's okay, but I'm not happy. (Because this feels very strange, I have seen something similar in palace fighting dramas. It's not impossible to be pretentious, but you also need to be strong enough to slap me in the face, otherwise you will still feel aggrieved. Yes, this is very vulgar, but I like this routine or something similar is fine. And in the end, others still can't tell, so they continue to put their face in or something like that.)