Martial Arts Live Room

Great author! When you write this protagonist, you must not reveal his own residence in the early stage! Otherwise it will definitely collapse! Also, the protagonist never does anything through his brain! He will be tortured to death!

This is a good start, but unfortunately there is a problem with the setting. Which warriors rule the country, and which warriors do not show their skills in front of ordinary people? Is this scientific? At least I think it's very problematic! If warriors really rule the country, guns, atom bombs will not be developed! If a martial artist doesn't show off his skills, at least I think the motivation to practice martial arts will be reduced by half. What's the point of practicing martial arts without showing off? Look at what the ancient heroes did. They are all about eliminating evil and promoting good, promoting their own chivalrous reputation, or in other words, high-profile pretense! So, author, you have a problem at the beginning~

He started poisoning from the third chapter, and he died after persisting for ten chapters.

Let me talk about my feelings. The beginning is very good and the concept is good, but I don't know what the author is thinking. After two live broadcasts, the martial arts forces in the world began to jump out. I can't wait. Moreover, the popularity of this force is too high. I feel that it does not match the beginning. I originally thought it was martial arts. On Dao Mo Road, a host promotes Chinese martial arts, but in the end he becomes a pig's trotter, just a clown🤡, and then the female character appeared too impatiently, pig's trotter only started live broadcast for 10 chapters, I don't even know much about pig's trotter, and you just added a female role, I feel a little want to vomit🤮. So I can't stand it anymore. Opinion: The appearance of women in this kind of modern urban novel does not need to be deliberate. It is all intended to portray the character and beliefs of Pigfoot. The intention should be clear. The following writing methods are to highlight that this idea is not for you to overturn.

Man, why haven't you updated for so long? Don't cut it! Great writing.

Only when you are sure that you are invincible in the world and can cannot be harmed by hot weapons, just broadcast martial arts. Otherwise, you will either be GOGOed by the country or GOGOed by other organizations at the beginning.

I wanted to read it later, but when I came back tonight and took a look, I found it was gone. What a pity this book is. I think if I keep writing, I will become popular. The book has only just begun, and there are no more important things to come later. Unfortunately, the author can't stick to it. If you didn't insist on walking to the end, how would you know what the scenery behind it was like? Now, no one will know.

Why did I finish the book after not reading it for a few days? If you still want to write a novel, don't start a new book yet and continue writing this one!

I just haven't watched it for two days, and it's gone… gone…

It's boring. I didn't see the teaching. I kept pretending to be cool.

Alas, I wanted to keep it for a while, but ended up having it cut 😭

Just read the book and think it's good to you.

Author: Do you want to be fucked? Hey hey hey

After watching it, I just want to say, haha

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Is Zhang Junbao a street writer? Super Teacher is pretty good looking

It's meaningless. It's said to be about reviving martial arts. In fact, apart from the pretense and cool plot, there's basically no teaching part. It's mentioned in a few sentences. So others can learn from it?

The protagonist is a street writer, and the author is also a street writer. It's just that the protagonist has cheats, and I don't know if the author has any.

Did you cut yourself off? I looked at my bookshelf, and I pulled down a lot of them from a month ago and updated a few months ago. Alas, I feel sorry for the author if I read the pirated version, and I can't afford to hurt the readers if I read the original version. I just spent money to read some defective products. I don't even bother to read the pirated version. Delete it from the bookshelf.

Even if there is a martial arts system, I won't find a scumbag like you. Your qualifications are super poor.

To be honest, not many people read the novel. Everyone is willing to wait for a good novel. But you have too many poisonous points. And after seeing the back, after the spiritual energy is revived, the protagonist wants the country to give out all the secret books for free. This is a bit unreasonable. Moreover, Holy Mother, so what if you break through the day after tomorrow, you are arrogant. If you want to get it, you have to pay. It may be that the protagonist is a student and has too little experience, so the things written are very poisonous.

It's only the day after tomorrow that there is a system, is it in the water character?

What the hell kind of book is this? The first few chapters are inconsistent with the preface and the follower. It was mentioned earlier that martial arts must be practiced by the host. In the next chapter, the protagonist takes out the martial arts secret book and opens it as if he has practiced it for decades.

...? ? ? I think this article is very interesting. I think the male protagonist has a good personality, so I'm a fan of it. If you don't like it, just don't read it. Why are you talking about so many words⊙∀⊙? ? ? What's happening? ?

No wonder the data is so bad, it's not that the settings are bad but it's just that you're just sitting there and making your own death. The plot is okay at the beginning, but it becomes very difficult to watch it once some warrior or something appears. The most speechless thing is that if you don't know how to write about emotions, don't write it. Some hero saves a beautiful girl. It's impossible to watch it! I can't stand any nonsense with women after that. I hope the next book will be more serious. The subject matter is still very good, but the plot is too weak.