Women's Path to Immortality

It can be seen that when the author wrote this book, his writing style was very jerky, he did not pay attention to details, the logic was illogical, and he especially failed to grasp human emotions well. Take the disappearance of Chen Erya and Wang Da Niu as an example. The reaction of both parents was too calm. Wang Da Niu's parents could explain that Wang Da Niu was not taken seriously at home, or they could have a new child again, so they were not so anxious. The heroine was different from her mother Zhang Xiuzhuo. The mother and daughter depend on each other for life. It can be said that the mother's only concern in this world is Erya, but she was too calm. She must have been helpless and anxious at the time. Maybe you can interpret it as being calm, rational, and holding on to a glimmer of hope, but under the premise that a child has already disappeared, such behavior should not be seen. The story of this book is very interesting and the plot design is also very good. So I hope the author can polish it and make it better.

The writing is quite good. If you persist, I believe you will be able to sit on the throne of the Queen of the Starting Point. :)

Updates are slow. It looks good, but I don't have the confidence to continue.

Will the author update again? Can you say something

The author's writing style is extraordinary, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is contrary to expectations and unexpected! It is a masterpiece of ten years of online literature! In order to repay her kindness, she risked a huge crime and married him without hesitation. For the sake of his wife's safety, he listened to the slanders and almost caused his wife to die several times. For her husband, she did not hesitate to set off a flash flood and poison all living beings. In order to be with his wife, he actually did something earth-shattering. The story between her and him was touching and is still being circulated today! I wish the author may sell more than 10,000 copies a day and may all his wishes come true! Xu Xianchou, the anchor of "New White Snake Live Room", is broken. His live broadcast system cannot be turned off. What should I do?

Moreover, he summoned his disciples and went to the city lord's mansion to evaluate the situation. . . The style of painting is wrong... Aren't immortals respected by the strong? Do they need to be judged...

I would like to thank the author for the great platform and giving me an opportunity to showcase my work. Please pay attention to the new book "Only I, Qingfeng", and recommend it. It is a clear stream among immortals, shocking the rainbow for eight thousand miles, and who can defeat me, Only I, Qingfeng! Updates are steady and the number of words is sufficient! Save a lot of manuscripts! Welcome to visit, I will read the collection and recommendations one by one when you return! Finally, I hope that your work will soar into the sky, collapse the clouds, and hurt your mind. Please remember to pay more attention, your body is the capital of revolution!

Recommended new article "A Lifetime of Unrequited Love" heroine: Ye Si, if you don't cultivate immortality, you won't defy the heavens. If you don't have a golden finger, you won't have good luck. The peach blossoms will only rot one by one and won't bloom. The enemies will just come one after another and you can't kill them. This book is a trap. Welcome everyone to join the trap. Thank you for your support! ! !

I don't know where this woman got her confidence from.

I can't stand this update anymore

I really can't stand it anymore. This woman is only at the first level of Qi refining, but she feels like she can reach heaven. It's so annoying.