Reborn in the Eighties

Only complain about copywriting These days, if you don't marry a military commander, you'll be embarrassed to say hello to other military writers. [Have you considered the feelings of the military?

I feel that the heroine is a bit pretentious. She has been married for several years in her previous life. Why does she feel so childish after her rebirth? It's as if the heroine has not lived a new life, but is just a 15 or 16-year-old girl in love, without any adult thoughts at all.

It's just that the heroine is a bit pretentious, the writing needs to be improved, and the content could be more fleshed out. The heroine is brainwashing herself to not want the male protagonist, and at the same time, she accepts the male protagonist's kindness to her. After all, her mental age is at the level of an aunt, making it like a child falling in love.

This is the first time the author has written this book. First of all, there is the issue of person, and then the storyline is ridiculous. . . I suggest the author to read other people's novels and write them.

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Please change the person's pronoun in the future, or else just use the first person. Please make a distinction.

I won't talk about the names, I'm just jumping to read it. I said that I was a coward all my life in my previous life, and was bullied to death in prison. Now I am reborn, and I am so powerful that I dare to grab a watermelon from someone 🤫

Can you please stop using first person? It feels weird!