The Invincible Immortal in the City

I have read nearly 2,000 chapters. Although the writing is good, there are many shortcomings. First, there are too many slap-in-the-face routines. It was new at the beginning, but after reading too many chapters, I just felt that only the protagonist is smart in the whole book, and the enemies are all big pigs. You don't have to think about it, just offend them one by one. Secondly, the protagonist is too selfish. To be honest, in this novel, there are many protagonists who seem to be female protagonists. I want to ask, since Lin Jiuxuan doesn't like them, wouldn't it be better to refuse them directly? Write less about those people, why do you have to pretend to be the boyfriend of each woman, and then pretend to be a saint after being slapped in the face? I think, this is not a saint, but actually a holy mother bitch. Women are surrounding him, and he is sitting still, making it uncomfortable to watch. Instead of doing this, it is better to write a harem story, at least it is fun to watch. Thirdly, the plot dragged on too slowly, and I was confused. After so many chapters, he was still in the foundation-building stage. Why did he drag him? Looking at the level outline introduced earlier, what was the difference between him and a ten thousand-year-old elementary school student? In short, the more he watched, the more unhappy he became with the protagonist.

Pretending to beat people, pretending to beat people, ninety percent of the people the protagonist encounters are arrogant and feel superior. Oh my God, what kind of world is this? No one with a discerning eye is like a fool. And besides the protagonist's pretense, the plot of the pretense is almost the same. Brother, don't you vomit if you eat the same thing every day? For example, if you get tired of eating fish every day, you can change your style. Today, you can grill the fish, steam it tomorrow, and braise it in braised fish the day after tomorrow. Isn't it still fish? Still have to vomit

This book is really good 🤓 It was too low-key when I first read it, but the author really put his heart into writing the following chapters 👍 Although the author asked Geng 😄 I really like the author's writing style 👍 I hope the author can finish this book, and it doesn't matter if it is unfinished, so that the author can concentrate on one book 😄 Piracy is shameful, support the genuine version 👍 👍 👍

Did the author go to high school? 😁😁 He must have graduated from a technical school. High schools like this have long been closed.

I typed it several times and finally deleted it! Forget it, write whatever you want and be optimistic about life.

I have read a lot of similar novels, and they all basically have the following plots: "That boy is overestimating his abilities!" "That boy is dead!" "Oh! It's a pity that he will die at such a young age."... After a blind beep, the protagonist got the upper hand and said "Oh~ How could it be!?" "This must be his good luck, a fluke!" "When so-and-so gets serious, he doesn't even know how he died!". If there is a plot like this, basically every fight will be repeated like this. I think, if someone with a weak heart is displeased, recommend more novels like this to him, and let him die of myocardial infarction.

An immortal turned out to be an old gangster who punched bullies and kicked rich young losers. An eagle managed to become the king of an ant hole and was very proud of it.

This is the only book I have ever seen that is more procrastinating than Demon Emperor Xiao Fan 😡, and more pretentious than Chen Beixuan 😆. Although you want to write a daily pretentious article, this daily life is really procrastinating, and there is this school beauty. Miss, where do so many school beauties come from? Where do all these ladies come from? Also, I wrote more than 1,600 chapters before writing about his father. It really took too long. Can this be written faster? Make the progress faster. If you write it like this, when can you return to the world of cultivation? 😒😒

It's Master Lin, Lin Yi, Lin Jiuxuan! Is it so easy to confuse three identities into three people? Master Lin's first name was Lin Jiuxuan, and some people actually thought they were two people! Master Haizhou Lin, plus Haizhou Lin Yi, no one knows that they are the same person. Are they all idiots?

After reading the previous chapters, I feel that most of the characters are scornful and look down on others. Is the world so cold and heartless? The protagonist is also a SB, he is so powerful, but he can't make money very quickly. He must be seen like this, and then wait for others to bully him before he takes action. It's too pretentious! ! !

I am really about to be blown away by the sight of you, Immortal Lord, what a ghost, have you ever seen any Immortal Lord that is so useless? I really can't stand this little Shou's character, and yet he becomes an Immortal Lord like this, your uncle.

Why is it that the more I watch, the more I feel that Li Qingsong and the other supporting characters are really retarded? Damn it, even though I saw Lin Yisu in Dorsett, he was so awesome that he beat dozens of big men watching the show, but he still looked confused. When he was relying on a lobby manager at the resort hotel, he said that to Lin Yi. No matter how capable the lobby manager of a resort is, can he bring out dozens of thugs with high force value like those in Dorsett? Dozens of powerful thugs have been beaten down, but they can still be frightened by your retarded words? How did your father give birth to a retarded child like you? It was better to just shoot at the wall and waste food! !

I don't understand. Why didn't the police or the government take action when the protagonist killed so many people?

A common problem with this type of novel is that if you were once so awesome, you must have a good heart, but once you arrive in the city, you will turn into a fool. I'm not saying that his writing is not good. After all, I have never been a god or emperor and I can't understand this.

The plot design is too rigid and the protagonist looks like a fool.

In Chapter 1225, if you change to the presidential suite, you can take away 10 million. That is not RMB, it is probably Zimbabwean currency. Even if you pretend to be B, changing to 1 million is enough. If you take 10 million, let alone whether you have money or not, the IQ of this immortal is really not that good. Just like this, his mother didn't object to letting him do it. She spent so much unjust money just to get a chance. Isn't she a pig? What can be done with 5 million, need to spend 50 million?

I found that the women described in this book are each more annoying than the last, but the main character is like a dog that has never seen a woman before, licking every sight of a woman. On the surface, he pretends to be cool, but he licks so hard that he pulls his tongue to the point of reaching heaven.

As long as she is a woman, she will not die no matter how bad she commits. Just like Ning Hanlu in 1657, she has insulted the protagonist's mother, and she is just pretending to be stupid if she doesn't kill her. 13.

I was so dizzy that I went to a hotel in Hong Kong to wait for Tong Zixuan to arrive. I wrote more than ten chapters and still haven't finished it. The plot of the book is okay, but the content is as long as a foot wrap. I could write twenty or thirty chapters about a small thing. I felt tired and skipped to the exciting parts.

It's so poisonous that it's outrageous! ! !

Pretending to be B! I can't stand it anymore! Master Haizhou Lin! Is that your name? Why does the author have to dwell on this plot. Haizhou Lin Jiuxuan is Master Lin, right? I have already announced my name in public more than once!

You won't go to a low-level plane again and pretend to be so cool. Now when you see someone pretending to be so cool, you will die from poison.

The author will post a chapter tonight! I know it's not easy for an author to write two books. From now on, it's okay to have a chapter every Saturday. If your immortal posts one chapter, I'll subscribe to one chapter.

A eunuch? I will never read unfinished novels again, it is a waste of time.

Lao Meng, please post another chapter tonight, it's been almost a week. Let me explain the ending.

Let me say it again, brother author, if you update this book every day, even every two days or three, there will be people who will support it. It's just that you insist on interrupting the update and refuse to explain the general ending. Of course, readers will not be able to help but complain. If you keep updating or don't delay it for too long, who will complain?

No more updates? Who is the author? There are more than two thousand chapters of eunuchs,?

In the beginning, Invincible was still pseudo-Invincible. Tell me after watching it 😍😍😍

Two chapters a month, I'm going to be angry

It's been so long since I've been waiting for a chapter. I rushed here to read this book. You're so slow and I'm not even interested anymore.