The Inheritance of All Heavens

The poisonous point is that there is this person and that person behind it, and the layout and so on, so that the protagonist can summon the past life, the past life is so awesome, invincible, so reincarnation, the kind that destroys the sky with one finger, otherwise it hurts to look at it, and also, Wei Guotao is resurrected, saying that it is interesting or something, it is too poisonous

Don't you know that you made yourself so miserable from the beginning? Don't you want to give the enemy a chance? Why don't you cut off your hands and feet first? I can only say that the protagonist is too arrogant.

The author chose a game world to start, but the book ended up being lukewarm. Fortunately, he later came into contact with the world of martial arts and ghosts, which helped the author win a certain number of fans. If you are not a master, then when you choose the world, you must have some new ideas, at least different from most novels, so that you can break through the siege in the new book. Even if there is no novelty in the world, there must be stories. Nowadays, many authors write the kind of movies that others have written poorly, and they write their own things to break out of the crowd. Those who focused on the plot died. Today's readers are really not as easy to fool as they used to be. Many old writers in the past directly plagiarized other people's movies and reworked them to make them their own. Some are even more insincere and dare to upload without changing their names, and they can still be fooled. But it doesn't work anymore. If the author did this, he would basically be unable to jump for a few times, and he would fall over as soon as it is put on the shelf. So if you want your book to be famous, you have to write your own stuff.

The writing style is great, and the writing style is relatively comfortable to read. However, the IQ of the protagonist is not very high. To be honest, Chapters 3 and 4 cannot write any emotional scenes. The male protagonist's feelings for the super-killing girl are a bit inexplicable. This is a typical lack of foreshadowing. It feels like the male protagonist appears - is framed - fights back - meets the girl - a secret battle - harem plus one - the next scene, do you want to write a bulldozer? Judging from your description of the ring, I guess it's a harem affair... Forget it, I don't want to say more about it. It's really disgusting to read too much, especially when there is a serious lack of emotional foreshadowing. It is not an exaggeration to say that it is the first poisonous point. Furthermore, the character setting is seriously broken, which often makes people think, "Who the hell is this? The character has been changed?" I won't say it anymore, I guess the author won't like to hear it if I talk too much. Just read it seriously and save it for later observation. If there is no progress after 50 chapters, I will have no choice but to get out of the way. Above

Like the title -------------- I always feel that this spiritual power is not my own. It feels very insecure and makes people feel a little bit out of touch. I still feel that relying solely on external energy to operate in the body feels very unreliable. It is better to practice it. The inner breath, inner energy, inner force, true energy, true essence, magic power, etc. In the body are the most suitable for you after all, only by sharpening your own strange power naturally generated by the human body. External force is always external force. No matter how condensed external things are, they are not as good as what is sublimated by your own body. ------------My personal opinion, the author will see if it is useful.

It has been a period of time, and the collection has been declining instead of increasing. Is it because the latest chapters of Yu Sheng were not well written? Or is there some other reason? I hope book friends will give you valuable opinions. In addition, I am also asking everyone to collect the abilities of the villains scheduled to appear next. I hope you can help develop your imagination. Requirements: B or A level abilities, skills, and props. B-level skill standards: King of Fighters Street Fighter's ordinary special moves, B-level ninjutsu in Naruto, etc., As long as the power is at this level, it is best to leave the source 🙏.

Throw the master ball and use it as dry food

Ninjutsu is the most annoying thing. As long as the main character learns it, I will give up reading it.

Come on, author, readers, your so-called settings are all those of the original work or a relatively famous novel, but the book is written by the author. If you are willing to follow the trend, it is easier to be accepted. If you are not willing, it is because you want to write in a style. If the author writes about a world with little fame, how many people will read it? Can you afford the author to pay the electricity bill? Watching Naruto a lot proves that you like watching similar ones, so it would be nice to write about it from a new perspective. Naruto fans, will they be the same in 2013 or 17? ,,,, Handicapped party. Say no more,

Okay, I didn't say anything. All the old readers of Long Kunlun Qidian know him, so I just complained and pointed out that Long Kunlun's posts were all copied and pasted. You just deleted my comment? I'm confused? Are you saying this can be deleted? This is the second time. The first time I thought I had been swallowed by Qidian. After all, it had happened before and it was gone as soon as it started. Not to mention being swallowed by Qidian this time, I saw the post a few hours ago and came over to see if there was any reply. Now, a few hours later, I came over to check and unexpectedly it has disappeared? ! Deleted by mistake? Forget it, can I not read your book? Goodbye! Suddenly I realized that this was the best time Long Kunlun had ever spent in the book review area...

Pig's Feet has such a miserable life experience and has been a killer for several years. Why is he still dating Xiaobai~

Write less about Naruto. It is recommended to write about the fox demon matchmaker, super seminary, dungeon, Dou Po, Douluo, Ancient Swordsman, Marvel world,

Although I haven't read it yet, I personally suggest that you don't always learn the abilities of other worlds (gongfa, magic, black technology, chakra...) And write your own characteristics. After all, different worlds and different environments cannot be exactly the same as pigs, dogs, and sheep. The bacteria inside are different, the physical parameters and scientific constants, as well as all kinds of strange energy and strange energy radiation, etc. Are some unique resources and regular constants of strange worlds. Because different environments produce different people, just like there are distinctions between Africans, whites, and yellow people in the same world. What's more, different worlds look like individuals. In our world, it's hard to say whether they are individuals. After all, in some worlds, people in our world may not be able to do the actions required by the secrets of the exercises. After all, the author, who is not a doctor, how can he know whether he can perform such strange movements? Moreover, there are some incidents involving giant dragons or other strange bloodlines, which may lead to some strange organs in their bodies.

Is the world of martial arts a black iron-level world? Even the hell gate has come out? Isn't it said that only in the Bronze World will there be power beyond ordinary humans? And the protagonist has lived in this world for more than 10 years, and has never encountered any other supernatural events while traveling around the world?

Brother author, have you ever thought about Quiba? I think Pulse Technique is totally possible, and the Pulse Beast can be used as an alternative Dharma Realm!

I hope there won't be a break in updates. Can there be any updates sooner?

There was one missing chapter yesterday, is there no update today?

God Killing World will go to Fengse Fantasy World

Stay tuned for updates (｀･ω･´)ゞSalute!

Open some dungeons that are popular, but not those that are badly written.

The key to becoming popular when writing a novel is to retain readers. If you are not sure of writing new ideas, then avoiding the poisonous points is another way. For example, the protagonist avenges his relatives and is given an identity killer. If there are any deficiencies later on, a group of people will easily leave. In Infinite Stream, some of the famous revenge novels do not specify the identity of the killer, which saves a lot of trouble. I hope the author adopts this approach and does not give the characters a clear identity. It is better to hide the clumsy than to show off one's ugliness. There is also the character of the protagonist. In just a few chapters, the female character is fighting to the death for a mission. Especially now that it is still in the reincarnation space, it is too abrupt. There are too few data streams that can be viewed now. I hope I can write better and better and get ahead as soon as possible.

It's pretty good, please don't stop updating 😁

I don't know what to say. I'll start collecting the recommendation votes. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on.

I don't know why it reminded me of Ace Evolution when I read it. The author wrote it very well and it was quite interesting to read, but the number of words was a little short. .

Brother, the book is okay, how come the results...

I have two suggestions 1..... The author, as for ninjutsu, I do not recommend that the protagonist learn it. Chakra is extracted from cells, which is equivalent to squeezing potential lifespan to gain strength. Although practicing national martial arts can maintain a balance with it, if the balance is destroyed, the consequences will be serious. I have read your other comments. Chakra, magic power, internal power, and mana are essentially the same, but the magic/mana power is more advanced. Chakra and internal power are basically the same, so practicing ninjutsu can be activated with internal power instead. 2. For animation, I recommend only writing about the three major migrant comics, or some very popular ones. Now Chinese comics are also on the rise, such as "Mr. Marvel in China", "Under One Man" and "Once Upon a Time in Sword Spirit Mountain 1.2". Of course, the best Chinese comic now is "The Master". Of course, the protagonist can't just play online games, but like "Sword Art Online", the protagonist can enter with a real body and gain skills and strength, or play online games like ordinary people.