My Life in Another World That the Protagonist Ordered Is Actually Like This

Just because you are still updating, I will give you a recommendation vote, but will you still write back to The World of Big Sword?

This is a wedding party! Sheng Jiao has always been ambiguous with Bei Ma. There is obviously no need to pretend to be a couple in front of others. Single and Lily are acceptable. The early writing is very good. I was blind to see the back!

Emmm, don't tell me that the author of When the Wind Rises and the spirit outside the court are the same person? ? ?

You have to be exposed, you have to be poisoned

I said if you want to move, you can just give the book a title. The three classics on transformation don't even have a title.

Just when I was about to get into the trap, I was frightened by the comment section (*^▽^)/★*☆

I'm waiting here for you to finish the unfinished part of the ID "The Legend of Goddess Yin Yue".

It's a great transformation story. It's large in volume, drama-oriented, and the emotional line is long enough. The main character remains the same and the soft girl has good reviews. However, there are many mistakes in the names of people... Maybe the author didn't deal with it when he wrote it and then changed the names. Personally, when I read Bianwen, I want to see a protagonist like this, who is a strong man but does not reject female identity. A lot of Bianwen writes about a harem male protagonist who wears female skin or is a completely soft girl...

I keep saying that I don't like men, and then I suddenly fall in love. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Do you have to be disgusting? At least you have gone through a transformation process! Also, how did you transition to the world of monsters? How many protagonists are there? Enough of the lack of beginning and end

U. Qidian. Com/z8DufroP Misaka No. 19090 Was experimented in advance, and was killed by Accelerator without any suspense. Death, this is Misaka's destined fate—— Misaka has a self, repeats her own destiny in different forms of existence, and in other forms in countless dimensions, but she has the desire to change her own destiny. Can Misaka girl's wish come true? Why would she have such an opportunity? Stay tuned——

This. . . How about an update?

I found a guy named Zhongbang. Are you sure he didn't copy the name of the male lead?

Plagiarism is shameful. Although The Wind Rises has been around for a long time and has been taken off the shelves, it is not that no one remembers it. Luo Qianshui is a female author. Now you're going to change her body shape?

Author, I want to know your motivation to continue writing!

This book can be divided into two parts based on style, sense of expectation, characterization, plot advancement, etc. The dividing line is the period when the protagonist goes north to encounter the otherworldly traveler Lo Wei and defectes to the organization. The characterization of each witch in the first part is qualified, and the plot also progresses step by step based on the progress of the protagonist's strength and the tension between the elders. There is also a description of the relationship with each witch in the middle. This part gives the reader the feeling that the protagonist is attached to the organization in order to survive, and constantly makes various attempts to improve his strength, until the climactic fight ends when he accepts the mission and goes north to encounter the Northern Abyss. It can be said that the first part allows readers to gradually deepen their sense of immersion as they read, and then to the climax of the fight scene, and the glimpse of souls from another world. However, in the second half, this sense of expectation is shattered, and it becomes the protagonist and the North Abyss, a group of big mouths who are forcibly gathered together with various identities, and three meetings with ordinary humans who forcibly promote the blunt plot. Is it really written well and the characters are portrayed seriously? In terms of strength, the writing is even more vague. The gap between the top demon hunters and the abyss is sometimes obvious and sometimes vague. On the one hand, the gap is huge, with only two or three appearing in hundreds of years. On the other hand, as long as the limit is exceeded, the strength of the abyss is. Well, there is no specific description of this level of strength. They are only used to whip corpses when the plot requires it. The first part can be enjoyable to watch, but the second part really becomes more and more depressing, watery and confusing. It seems that the outline only reaches the part where Luo Wei defected, and I don't know how to write it anymore so I just write whatever it is. The plot is not related, and the two scenes switch back and forth inexplicably. Speaking of scene switching, there is one in the first part, but the switching is very natural and you can see the plot is progressing. Later, the plot is scattered and the switching is faster, which looks very scattered and meaningless. I saw someone commenting that the two styles before and after were written by two people. This should not be a skill of reading and writing. Instead, it seems that I don't know how to continue writing at the end.

Hey hey, my brother is a goddess and there is still a second half. What about the plot of returning to Tianqing? Have you not found the resources or don't want to move?

Did the author stop writing? Oh, what a pity! I also want to chat with the author about Shenma I hope you can reply to me.

I just clicked on the table of contents, and then I didn't want to read anymore. The first world in the early stage alone had nearly 400 chapters of long and stinky assembly line article titles, which made people not want to read anymore and decisively quit.

There are all kinds of missing chapters, no wonder no one reads it 🤫