Absolute Warrior

Are there really so many people killing people in that world? Killing for no reason, dying for no reason. <Recruiting soldiers and sending them to death, one hundred thousand compensation, and selling a beast corpse for hundreds of thousands, this is such a senseless setting. Death takes a few dozen seconds and grows for twenty years.

I feel that the style is very mixed, but it is not difficult to see that there are some elements of Smoking Man mixed in, such as Sin City, Armed-Construction, Wolf Boy-Splash, and the oriental background of alien races and guns, which also reminded me of King of Evernight. These elements are very interesting, but perhaps it is a problem with the narrative structure. Readers often cannot understand what the author wants to express. The conflict between light and dark lines is very confusing. Independent, the previous conflict was resolved, but it did not lead to the next conflict. The author wanted to write a lot, but the language was very concise. Without a certain tacit understanding, it would be very confusing to read. It is recommended to greatly strengthen the narrative sequence, from the foreshadowing of space, the foreshadowing of time, or the introduction of logic. The above are immature suggestions. I have been a keyboard warrior for a while 😜

I think the writing is okay, but this section is a bit messy recently.

I've just read a few chapters, and I feel like the characters appear awkwardly, the plot is fragmented, and the reading is not smooth.

It's so beautiful. Chen Dong's books are not as good as this one.

A masterpiece, as long as it doesn't end badly

It's too confusing to understand.

It's really not that good. After reading the second chapter, I really can't stand it anymore. It's so confusing. Farewell.

The first two chapters were pretty good, but by the third chapter I was so confused that I gave up the book.

The author is capable and competent. But the writing is too advanced, complicated, and a bit messy. If you improve it well, you can become a great master.

The author is really strong. The first one or two hundred words of each section are full of scenery descriptions, chicken soup advice, life insights, etc. These words can be collected as a collection of essays individually.

I felt that the writing was not smooth enough, the plot was a bit jumpy, and it was confusing to read.

I hate the way flashbacks are written. It makes me tired.

I can't understand it, it's too fragmented and confusing.

Men should do it——men should kill, and kill without mercy. The eternal karma is all in killing people. In the past, there was a heroic man with great loyalty. Yaju kills people, and his body is lighter than a feather. There are also heroes and tyrants who kill people like hemp and gallop around the world, only showing off their swords and guns. Today I am trying to find something like this, but I am looking for the shadow of the moon in vain. You don't see it, but the Confucian scholars have risen up and the strong men have died. From now on, Jiuzhou will praise benevolence and righteousness. Once the barbarians invaded the Central Plains, the scholars rushed to the ground and the cowardly people wept. I want to learn the ancient style and regain my heroic spirit. Reputation is like dirt, and those who disdain benevolence will ridicule. Wearing an iron sword, he kills people in anger. They cut their legs and drank wine together, chatting and laughing with ghosts and ghosts. I am willing to spend ten weeks to kill the enemy bandits for thousands of miles. Zhutian Guangren, and Jie have a deep love for each other. Heading out of the west gate, Mu Tiren turned around. I feel tired and sleepy, and the war trumpet suddenly blows. Simon said goodbye to his mother. The mother was sad but the son was not sad. The body is committed to historical events, but the man will never return. The killing battle between heaven and earth shocked the Yin Court with tragedy. Kill one person in three steps without stopping. Blood flowed for thousands of miles, and corpses pillowed Qianxun Mountain. When a strong man finishes a battle, he sleeps on his enemy's corpse when tired. In the dream, there is still a murderer, and the smile reflects the brightness. Daughter, don't ask Xiang, why is the man so evil? Since ancient times, benevolence has only harmed others, and morality has never been true. Don't you see, the liger has gained a reputation as a prey, but who can pity the poor elk? The strong always eats the weak, even if it makes sense, it is in vain. Don't ask, men have their own way. If a man behaves, he should be violent. Things and benevolence are inseparable. The man is in the fighting arena, as brave as a bear and as blind as a wolf. If you are born a boy, you will kill someone. Don't teach a man's body to wrap a woman's heart. Men are never disrespectful, even if they kill their opponents, they will laugh at each other. There are hundreds of enemies and battlefields, and I wish to be green with the wild grass everywhere. Men, don't tremble, if you have a song to listen to, killing one is a crime, killing ten thousand is a hero. If you slaughter nine million, you will be called the hero among the heroes. Heroes among heroes, the way is different, they can see through a hundred years of benevolence and righteousness, but they can show off their glory in this life. A man who loves notoriety does not care for a good reputation, but he who kills millions of people does not want to punish him. I would rather teach the foreigners to gnash their teeth and hate them, than to teach them nothing but scolding my people. Looking across the sky, there is no place in the world where heroes do not kill people.

The logic is also very general. The plot is fragmented and leaves no sense of immersion at all. The protagonist's rebirth memory is also very vague. At what age was he reborn? What was the situation in the previous life? Since this is rebirth, necessary explanations must be given. Otherwise, it would be like writing about a person who won a big prize. What prize is it? Don't tell. What does bird mean? That Lion King Xingzo is the most illogical. The map was stolen and the people were killed, but the whole world knew about it, and they even cooperated with their enemies to hunt for treasure. Inexplicably funny. Will you cooperate with your enemy and give him your back?

The author probably wanted to squander the plot. The protagonist is from a mid-level family and was provoked by a low-level servant. Even though the protagonist killed him, and then the low-level young master came to trouble the protagonist again, the protagonist still couldn't be killed. I just want to ask why there are people targeting the protagonist wherever he goes. Does he have an aura of hatred?

I just read Chapter 5 and I think it's very well written. Why are there so many people in the comment section saying they can't stand it? Including the third chapter that many people complained about, the protagonist was assassinated. From this point on, he woke up in another time and space and continued to live. Then he died a few years later and was reborn at the moment when he woke up from the assassination in this time and space. Isn't it difficult to understand? I think the setting and literary style of this book are both good.

A very good book. It's a pity that the book is finished!

🐷It's quite beautiful!

The author is of a very high standard. Why is he not popular?

🐷The giant TM looks great!

The writing is not engaging and immersive

Gee, there are so many typos when typing on the computer. Either they were uploaded without correction, or the author himself is semi-literate and doesn't think they are typos.

It's a bit complicated, there's too much description in the text. Really need to be more concise

The third chapter started to fail! Didn't understand at all

I haven't read it in a long time, and I didn't expect it to be finished. This book is really not doing well, I hope the next one will be better. Happy New Year to the author.

I was confused when I saw it. I didn't understand what I wanted to express. It was hard to understand.

What the hell, we are both young masters from aristocratic families, why are others so powerful? The protagonist insists on waiting for others to step on him. It seems that he dares to step on the protagonist even if he has a background. It is better to give him a grassroots background.

I just read the first few chapters of the book and I think it's okay