Starry Sky Rises

Tested for poison. Overall this book is toxic. The introduction to this book is very attractive and the ideas are great. It's a pity that the author's writing style can't control this book. After reading the first 100 chapters, it's a typical pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine. Both the protagonist and supporting characters have negative IQs. If the protagonist's low IQ can be explained by too many surprises and lack of self-control, then the reaction of the supporting characters can clearly show that the author did not think carefully when writing, and all his actions were quite exaggerated and seriously deviated from common sense. Art originates from life and is higher than life. I hope that the author can calm down and carefully consider the details, even if he has to delete a large amount of text, he must not hesitate to delete water for water's sake, otherwise it will be difficult to attract a large number of readers, thus affecting your income. After all, it is impossible for you to be involved in pornography in this book, and it is impossible for anyone to pay for it.

Mr. Ink Painting Hello! I am honored to read your work! Compared to most people, it's pretty good that your first work can reach this level! At least he's a lot stronger than me! As one of the readers of "Star Rising", I really like the concept and positioning of the book! However, I personally feel that the book now has several problems that make people not want to continue reading it! (The following are all personal opinions) (1) The title of the book is "Starry Sky Rising", which indicates that the starting point of the story is that the book should be a science fiction novel, and the focus of the story should be on the starry sky. This is one of the reasons why this book attracted me! But now that we have reached the 500th chapter, the story is still based on the "urban" theme, and it is also limited to the so-called "Zhongzhou" city! (Personally, I think it's a bit "unlike"!) (2) The story is too boring! First of all, the conflict between the protagonist and Zhang Shaoyang is confusing! Secondly, the description of the protagonist's career is bland! Third, the protagonist's love! Just don't mention it! Overall, the whole story is too streamlined! For example, during the Spring Festival, there are things like killing pigs, shopping, catching rabbits... It's completely a diary for celebrating the Spring Festival! Finally, a young man pretended to attract people's attention, but after a few words, nothing happened! (3) The narrative is too lengthy! According to the current pace of the story, 500 chapters are still in Zhongzhou City. By the time the story ends, it will probably be impossible to finish in 3,000 chapters! But if a novel has reached 3,000 chapters, it is difficult for anyone to read it, unless it is truly a masterpiece! As for the rest, although it is not satisfactory, it is already very good! The biggest problem is that the nature of the text is unclear, the narrative is too trivial and lengthy, and the story is bland! (The above are all personal opinions, please provide rational reference! I hope the author will continue to work hard!) If there are typos, just know the meaning. If it's too late, we won't check!