My Fairyland Mall

There are too many fragments and the chapters are not coherent.

The plot is too tight, events come one after another and cannot be stopped. The fairy world is useless, it doesn't help at all. On the contrary, reality is much more powerful than the fairy world.

When reading this book, I always feel that there must be some chapters that have been deleted~ It seems that something is missing~

It's okay to show off in other worlds, but on Earth the plot is written around a bunch of women.

The first few pictures at the beginning, the rest are all made up.

I feel like he was known as an all-rounder in both civil and military affairs, but later on when answering some of the teacher's questions, he had to rely on magic talismans from the fairy world to cheat. This is too...

After the poison test is over, should I go take a sip first? Take it easy.

In martial arts, true energy is used, but in the fairy world, spiritual energy is used, right?

The plot of this book is directly connected to it, making it very uncomfortable to read.

So miserable, only 20,000 people read 80 chapters

This is a pseudo-modern urban cultivation! ! ! It's not the world we are familiar with anyway, it's almost a parallel world! There are so many cultivators everywhere. Cultivation is no longer a secret. It is not unique to the protagonist. It feels boring.

I've been waiting for a long time. Jun, please be more diligent.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the supporting actresses all have IQ issues.

The world where the protagonist's avatar is located is not the fairy world, but the world of cultivation. Absolutely... Otherwise, can a large sect become an outer disciple during the Qi training period? Is the No. 1 Outer sect that poor?

The author's writing style is extraordinary, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is contrary to expectations and unexpected! It is a masterpiece of ten years of online literature! By the way, I heard that the live broadcast system of "New White Snake Live Room" is not fake, but real live broadcast, which is a bit unnatural. Is it true? If anyone knows the inside story, please tell me. Light some incense, clasp your hands, and wait online!

... I just saw that the second level of Qi Refining also requires impact... It feels so low. Personally, I feel that it is not a problem as long as there is enough energy. You should not use the word "impact". It also feels like it's only 10 times as much, and it's so low-end. Imagine that there was 1 spiritual energy particle in your house, but there were only 10 particles in your home in a small place in the fairy world... What kind of fairyland is that?