Mysterious Dream Chaser

What I saw was really frustrating. You set the protagonist to be extreme, such as being indifferent to irrelevant people. What kind of coward or coward did you set?

When I fall into a dream, someone will die in this world

First of all, I feel sorry for the author. As a weak girl, I have to spend a lot of brain cells thinking hard every day for the subsequent chapters. This is not easy in my opinion. Compared with the author who now puts a lot of energy into writing books, just to present better works to everyone. Occasionally there are omissions, and I feel that I am not in line with society. Please, this is a novel... Do you know what a novel is? Sometimes inappropriate comments from everyone will affect the author's conception of subsequent development.... I hope everyone feels sorry for the girl who wrote the book...

Black Dragon Club,,, Are you a high school student? In an adult's world view, there shouldn't be such an organization that is cool and arrogant and can fight against the state machinery.

The protagonist is too poisonous and not timid. He keeps doubting himself. What kind of Black Dragon Society will come out later? I beg the author to abuse the protagonist less in the future. If he often dreams about death scenes, a normal person will know his own abilities. He still thinks that he is a psychopath and keeps taking medicine.

I just read the first story and saw the Black Dragon Society, a lawless underworld gang, and I thought this book was nonsense. No matter how powerful the underworld in the real world is, they would not dare to be as fresh and refined as your novels. It also prevented the police section chief from pursuing the case. Either this section chief is complicit, or it's nonsense no matter how you look at it. I didn't feel very comfortable after reading Chapter 70. I think the author insulted the police profession

I really hate Bai Ran. She has been interfering and affecting Li Yifan's life in the name of doing good for Li Yifan. Li Yifan has his own life. He doesn't want to become normal. What right does Bai Ran have to hide it from him and force him to become normal?

The police in the book have no IQ. If the police in real life meet a protagonist like this, they will be very happy. They will take all the credit and do not need to share the protagonist's money. They immediately treat the protagonist like a master. Some police officers, especially drug police detectives, are always in danger and are more superstitious than others.

I've only read Chapter 54. The whole story is okay, but that policeman… I found it a bit annoying. While relying on the protagonist to solve the case, he also despised the joke that the protagonist was a lunatic. The policeman doesn't believe the protagonist at all. And to be fair, even if the protagonist doesn't want others to know that he has mental problems, as a beneficiary, he can completely report his intelligence sources and the protagonist's role in the case. Even if others question why the protagonist knows so much, the protagonist, as a helper, can refuse to answer, or make up a lie at will to obscure the past. The protagonist is not a prisoner, and if there is a policeman as a guarantee, the most he can do is let the police observe him more. And what the protagonist does, I know that if the sense of substitution is too strong, of course I will hope that the criminal will be punished, but the protagonist is in a passive situation from beginning to end. The protagonist is obviously the active party, but he falls into such a situation... To be honest, it is very uncomfortable. I hope the protagonist can take the initiative. To be honest with the policeman, I think there is a reason why he is not welcome. Judging from the description in the article, he may have a sense of justice, but at the same time he is also a little arrogant and vain. I found that in the characters written by the author, the negative characters are more prominent, and the bright points are hidden underneath. I actually suggest that the author can change it, amplify the bright points, and express the negative characters more obscurely. Above. My personal opinion only. You can delete it if you don't like it, thank you.

It was so frustrating to read. Is the power of the government in the novel so small? A gangster is afraid of his hands and feet (I haven't finished reading) No eyesight

I like this title. I have seen similar plays with this kind of title in the theater. It is very interesting. A few words set the tone of the book, which makes readers less troublesome to understand the meaning. But from another perspective, it also tests the author's meticulous writing. It is difficult to control the style of millions of words in terms of the overall atmosphere, but I think you should be able to handle it easily. Stories are just a bunch of words, and everyone tells them differently. Your story may be scary, his story may be interesting, and my story may be bizarre. They all have different styles. Therefore, your style determines what kind of people your audience is. Judging from the name and content, you have controlled it very well. I hope you can stick to your own creative style and your readers, including me, will support it.

If one student dies in a school, it will make national news. If one student dies one after another, it is guaranteed that the enrollment rate will plummet after a year.

The author's writing is indeed very good. The writing is quite good, but the content is so poisonous that it feels like a gangster can control a city. It's really poisonous enough. Were all the crimes later caused by the Black Dragon Society? I was convinced.

I couldn't stand it when I saw Heilonghui. The author's writing style is fine, but it's obviously not true. Hey, how powerful is society?

Can the author review the manuscript after writing it? I won't mention the typos. There are many sentences in one chapter that don't make sense. I still admire myself for persisting!

Can China find me someone who dares to claim to be the Black Dragon Society? I beg you. The author is very poisonous.

I found out that the scenes I dreamed about actually happened, so why should I treat it as a mental illness? Isn't this Tiehanhan? I fainted at the slightest disagreement, vomited and even cried. I was convinced by this protagonist. I didn't know it but thought it was written by a woman.

What's more, we've seen a lot of them in book reviews I feel stupid and disgusting. 1 Some people say that the world in the novel does not match reality and there are bugs. Wow, you are afraid that you have lost your mind. Is it necessary to connect it with reality? This is a novel, and various settings can be understood o 2. The protagonist and the police are too stupid to join forces and use this ability to solve the case together. We can explain this in two points. 1. Haven't you noticed that the protagonist has persecution delusions? It would be great to find a like-minded police officer. 2. The other police officers don't know that the protagonist has this ability, but only a few people know and trust him. Third, do you think they are stupid? Why should they expose the existence of the protagonist? Even if it is a dream, it cannot be used as evidence, it can only be regarded as a clue. Moreover, the protagonist must face danger all the time. Even the people in the police station cannot believe it. I have seen more than 200 chapters. There have been several gray undercovers and assassinations. Jiang Dong, who solved the case with the help of the protagonist's ability, would have died long ago if his section chief hadn't temporarily pulled him into the co-pilot position. Okay, let's just say this much first. Also, we welcome people who criticize us. After all, I can't control your mouth, but if you want to criticize us, please bring evidence and your brains.

I really can't stand it anymore. There are a lot of typos in every chapter. Did the author write it well? If there are typos, it's a bit unreasonable if there are typos in every chapter...

In fact, the plot of this book is great, but the general atmosphere is very dark, human nature is so dark, and the protagonist is a tool that provides clues. Newbie readers will find it cruel if they can't read it, but they have to have a big heart to read it. There are some plot points that will really make the protagonist's scalp numb.

I have been looking for a lot of novels of this type at home these past two days. But the content is not rigorous enough! It can be seen that the author lacks a lot of social experience. A lot of the content is based on imagination, and I feel like this kind of novel cannot be written like this! I really can't stand it! There are too many flaws.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 9, it's too toxic

I feel that the setting of the underworld is not good and does not match reality. I have never seen an underworld that can affect the police system and the trial system. . .

How should I put it, it's a bit messy. Suspense writing must be coherent and capture certain emotions of the reader, such as fear, anger, resentment, curiosity, especially curiosity. The feeling of slowly solving the mystery after hanging on for several or dozens of chapters, and then suddenly becoming enlightened. However, a lot of the text in this article is about the plot developing into a certain period and suddenly going back to the previous plot, which disrupts the readers' thinking of solving puzzles and seriously reduces the readability and interest of the article (when driving, it will freeze as soon as the speed is increased, and it will freeze as soon as the speed is increased, which is uncomfortable). There is also a dark side to the writing. If you can use an optimistic, cheerful, and hopeful atmosphere to dispel this dark feeling, although there is darkness behind each case, use the opposite writing technique to express it, and wait until the full text is finished to make the reader realize that it is dark. This can still leave the reader with a feeling of aftertaste. This will be better.

Is this a grudge against women? All those who died were women

As a Ningxia native, I give the author thumbs up for his well-written writing. However, there are still a lot of typos and incorrect sentences, and there seems to be some problems with the concept. . Keep up the good work😜

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No ghosts ugh

It's a good setting, but being able to consciously manipulate others is outrageous.

I saw it at the fixed price of 515. I hesitated and bought it. Maybe I will look at it again one day.